Manan ss Yeh Hai Aashiqui TEASER Ch 30 B pg 126 - Page 10

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Posted: 9 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: parthadmirer

Such a heart wrenching update...

she was broken listening to the doctor saying her mother cannot be saved..
poor nandini.. she is broken..😭
but abhi is there to take care of her..
but to her luck abhi had to go for a deal which nandini only has forced him..
and lastly more sad part..
the painting she was not willing to sell.. is sold by rosy...
waiting for the suspense...πŸ‘


Thanx a ton dear
Just a few more chapters nd there will b a big twist nd d mystrey will b disclosed πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: aavani

emotional and heart touching...ohh...its brilliant
u penned so perfectly...keep up the good work dear...
loving abhi a lot..true friend...!!!!
thanks a lot for the pm
continue soon
take care




Ur welcome dear πŸ˜›
Will updates soon πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
#93
Nice update
Such an emotional
Part
really I literally cry
When I read it😭😭😭
Really love
Ur storyπŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
A lot
But I want
Nandani
To speak😊
And this
Mystery to be
Revealed
Please do that buddy😊
I want manan to be together
Please next part asap
Eagerly waiting
Love
DiyaπŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: diyaNarwal

Nice update

Such an emotional
Part
really I literally cry
When I read it😭😭😭
Really love
Ur storyπŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
A lot
But I want
Nandani
To speak😊
And this
Mystery to be
Revealed
Please do that buddy😊
I want manan to be together
Please next part asap
Eagerly waiting
Love
DiyaπŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›


Thank uhh dear
Yup she will speak but fr that uh had too wait 😊
Nd d mystrey will b unfolded in 2nd or 3rd upcoming update πŸ˜›
About d update it'll b by mid night πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
Chapter 11 B


At night in hospital
Rose too left after spending some tym with nandini
Dr also left as her shift was over only after checking on meera making everything sure she left to home
Nandini was not allowed stay with meera as she was in iccu nandini was sitting outside iccu on d bench tears had dried by now but any one can make up by seeing her face her swollen red eyes her pale face that what she's being through she was just silently praying or can say complaining to god that now he want to take meera too she don't hav anybody she didn't remember anything about her past who was she 5 yrs ago before she met meera she didn't knew any one nd now he wants to snatch her too that she is that bad that she didn't deserve to b with anyone she didn't deserve to love anyone she's that bad this thought of her again brought tears in her eyes
Most of d staff has gone by now only few nurses ward boys nd some dr were there in case on any emergency in d corridor she was sitting was also dark as lights were turned off she was just sitting there nd cursing her self now as it was her bad fate that affected meera nd she is there fighting fr her lyf now she was blaming herself nd said she deserves to b alone



In malhotra mansion
Shalini entered after a long tiring day she put her bag on shofa nd sits there maid beings her a glass of water she drinks nd enquires about everybody's whereabout
Before maid could say anything
A voice frm her back we r here chachi he comes close to her nd side hugs her nd asks her about her day
Chachi to hugs him back nd replies it was ok manik
Manik can see it frm her was that she was sad he ask her if she's fine she replied that she was ok nd asks about everyone
Manik: everyone was getting ready nd we were waiting fr uh only
Chachi: getting ready kyu beta
Manik: coz we all r going fr a family dinner now uh also go nd get ready we'll leave in some tym m very hungry chachi
Chachi: are beta bhar jane ki kya jarurat h i'll something here only na uh just wait fr some tym she was getting up frm sofa but manik didn't let her get up he held her hand back nd make her sit again she ask kya hua
Manik: chachi aap khi ni jaa rh aur hm dinner k ly bhar jaa rhe h bas aap jaie jake ready ho jae
Chachi: manik beta m too tired aaj ni fir kbi tum log chale jao i'll b here only uh guys enjoy mra maan ni h
Chacha: agr akele hi jana hota toh kb k chale gy hte shano ji aapka wait nhi krte hm he said folding her his hands around his chest staring her
Manik: exactly aur hum aapke bina nhi jaa rh aap jae aur jake ready hoye we r getting late aur m kch nhi sun rha
Chachi signed off aa she her pleading will fall in deaf ears so she move towards her room to freshn up




In a 5 star restrau
Everyone was seated in a big family table
Cabir: guys fast order kro na tumhre chakar mh mra order bh late ho jaeg he said making face
Mukti: ohh really wase hume order krne ki bh jarurat nh jitna tune order kia h wo hum sb k ly kafi h infact puri barat k ly kafi h she said mokingly
Cabir: acha jaise tu to kch khati hi nh yaad h jb him mumbai m the to tune akle nehi sara cake kha liya tha aur baki sbko chod mjh bh ek bite ni di thi he replied instantly glaring her
Mukti : khna kya chahta h tu m jda khti hu tujh s to kam hi khati hu bhukad kaise tut pda tha jb kl chachi n itna yummy dinner bnaya tha infact mri plate m s bhi khaya tune bhukad she moked him back
Then finally after seeing where they were going manik jumped in guys we r here fr dinner not for seeing tom n jeery stop it see waiter kb se wait kr rha h order k ky pr tum dono ka khtm ho tb na
Mukti looks down embarrassed as they were creating scene that to infront of waiter who was just standing there trying to supress his laughter
Finally everyone placed there order nd were waiting for it
Everyone were chit chatting but there was one person who was just sitting there quietly not saying anything
Manik noticed this nd to start a conversation with her asked about d lady whom he brought to hospital in morng
Chachi: became more sad nd manage to say that she's critical while meera nd nandu's image were playing infornt of her as she was treating her since long tym nd she was attached to them
Manik sensed something is wrong but it was not correct tym so to lighten her mood he said but m sure she'll b ok as world's best dr my chachi is treating her she'll b fine he said smilingly
Chachi smiled a little
There order was served
Manik sensed something wrong as chachi again was silent he gestured chacha to say smthing
Chacha:are shano ji aapki best friend ki beti ki shaadi hain na kl toh mai soch rha tha kyu na hum sb chale aur wo pune k bhr bh toh thodi outing bhi ho jaeg
Chachi: nai m wha nhi ja skti hospital m bhut kam h
Manik : cmon chachi ek din aap wha nhi hngi toh thodi na hospital band ho jaega
Chacha: haan shano ji manik bil kul sahi kh rha h or aap toh bhut excited thi diya ki shaadi k ly fr wo apki best friend ki beti h or agr aap hi ni hgi toh sochiye kitna bura lagega or diya ko bh
Chachi: i know but mre patient ki halat bhut critical h i can't leave her lyk that
Manik: we know when it comes to ur work ur very sincere but shaadi to raat mh na toh aap check up k baad dophr m nikleng aur raat ki shadi subh tk wapas bh ajaeng na or baki log bh na hospital m khyal rkhne k ly toh jada prob ni hgi plzz man jaena plzz he said giving a pleading look
Chachi: ohk i 'll check her tmrw if she is better then only i'll cone with uhh
Finally manik nd chacha sighed relief as they managed to make her agree
After finishing there dinner they reached home after some more chit chatting they retired to there rooms



Precap: meera missing
Mystery unfolded




Imp note
Hy huys so next part mystrey will b unfolded
There is a bad news as i need to focus on my studies too my relaxing days r over now so i'll b updating twice or thrice a week need to manage other things too for now enjoy this part
I promise after next part there will b a huge twist nd don't loose hope it'll b positive 😳 πŸ˜›
Do tell m hws this πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
Nice update
And yaa take your time dear
We will manage
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
Amazing update
ReallyπŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
Poor nandu
I really feel
bad for her😭😭😭
Finally mystery
Is going to
be revealed
Soon😊
Thank you
Sooo
much😊😊😊
And don't worry
I understand
Whenever you get
Time
Post it
bcz
Study is also important...
Please next part asap
Eagerly waiting
Love
DiyaπŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
Edited by diyaNarwal - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
Nice update dear poor nandu feeling sad for her
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99
it was jus amazing story...wow u described the story i jus mindblowing...m speechless
while reading only one word came from my mouth is wow...hats off dea...must say u blessed with writing skill keep it up
n thanks for the lovely n wonderful update ...continue soon..desperately waiting for next part...nd plss try to update as soon as possible cant wait soo long dea
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Posted: 9 years ago
emotional ...and perfectly penned update...
feeling so sad for nandu...
loved manik and chachi convo
thanks a lot for the pm
continue as soon as possible
take care



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