F/F- Adi/M 'Touched by an Angel' Ch11 P14 - Page 8

oh my god! im so sorry about the accident! i had no idea!...glad to here you are feeling better 😳

the two chapters you wrote are simply superb!! i love the way you describe Adi and maithili!!! its a real relief reading this when knowing whats happening in the serial 😳 brilliant stuff you write! 👏

i agree with vas di...the whole part about Pranay singing and hyenas 🤣 🤣 cracked me up 😃 😛
love reading your fanfic...thankyou 😳

Originally posted by: Robin_M

ohh no, im soooo sorry to hear about your accident!
thank god you are alright! sounds like it was a very bad accident, i hope
you feel better and recover 100% very soon!
there is no need to appologize hun, your situation was very difficult and i
understand completely! please dont feel bad for making us wait!
you are back now and im happy to hear you will finish you ff, because it
really is a brilliant peace of work!
im gonna go back and re-read it since its been a while, and i will leave
you my comments once i catch up!
glad you are doing well, welcome back 😊

Thank you for understanding and thanks so much for your wishes. Look
forward to your comments. I'm so glad to be back myself:))

Originally posted by: sidsk

Oh god.That's very sad to hear.But also happy to know
that ur recovering now.Im sure you'll be fine in no time....And really you
shouldnt apologise. Coming to ur fic,seriously it didnt at all feel like you
were continuing it after a long time....Maybe because I have read n re-
read all the chapters. 😆 Completely LOVED it! 👏 👏 Specially
the part from the coffee shop till the end.Mets discreetly searching for
Adi,his comment about "deadly curves" 😆n the bit where Adi looks at
her from the rearview mirror brought a big smile to my face. This bit was
hilarious!

["In that case, get in, we'll drop you home," he answered,
looking intently at Gunn Aunty. I like that! I'm speaking to him
and he's looking at her! So much for gentlemanly behaviour!😆 His
voice had a quiet authority to it though and he sounded very
serious. ]

Also I really like the way you describe all the Mehra men.😉So
very attractive.Cant wait for the next update but take care of urself first.

Thanks so much Sidra for all the kind words. It means so much to me.
Thanks for all the good wishes. You take care also:))

Originally posted by: psawyer

I am so sorry to hear of your accident, it must have
been a terrible time for you 😭 I am very happy that you are recovering
now, and have come home. Please don't apologise for not posting the fic
- nothing is more important than one's health! 😉

Now, coming to the 2 updates - simply superb!! I had all but forgotten
what Adi-Maithili's chemistry was like, thanks to the track in the show,
and I DEFINITELY had forgotten what naughty, bratty Vikram Aditya Mehra
was like so your updates have made me a very happy girl! Loved the
scenes in Starbucks, the car and in the latest update, AM's naughty
flirting through their football preferences what's more, I am so glad that
Nikhil is back too - the chem between him and Gunn in your ff is
something that wasn't really explored in the show, but I'm loving it!

I esp. loved this bit in the last update:

"No seriously, Maithili, he sang a song once in junior high and believe
me, the hyenas from the neighbouring zoo came across to laugh at the
spectacle he created. And then……they couldn't stop….. laughing, that
is!"

She laughed and then looked at him through reproving eyes, "Come on
Adi, don't exaggerate"

"No, really," he grinned, "ask the hyenas, they're still under observation in
Hospital."

🤣 🤣 🤣

Take care of yourself 😛

Wow, thanks so much, you made my day:)) I've told you how much your
comments mean to me. Thanks for your good wishes. You take care:))

Originally posted by: tsamhita

oh my god! im so sorry about the accident! i had no
idea!...glad to here you are feeling better 😳

the two chapters you wrote are simply superb!! i love the way you
describe Adi and maithili!!! its a real relief reading this when knowing
whats happening in the serial 😳 brilliant stuff you write! 👏

i agree with vas di...the whole part about Pranay singing and hyenas 🤣
🤣 cracked me up 😃 😛
love reading your fanfic...thankyou 😳

Thank you so much for your kind words and your wishes. It feels so great
coming back and being able to catch up on everything again. I was really
missing India-Forums, especially, the KGGK section. Thanks again, very
kind of you:))

Hey!!! 😃 Just read you're latest parts! Been waiting soooooo long for you to update coz I fell in love with ur ff. I love it soo much! 😆 Can't wait to see what happens during the match, some more flirting and teasing over who thinks they support the better football team. 😉 Some more confused feelings and awkward eye locks. Don't we love it?! 😆

And I hope you're feelin' better now. No need for you to be sorry dude, it's a terrible thing what happened to you. Just make sure you don't strain yourself too much. Take care of yourself! 😊

Nandini, as I already told you, I am so very glad you are feeling better now, and I hope you know now how glad I am to have you back!!! 😛

So I am just going to head straight for your FF.
Can I just say how truly wonderful it is to be back in the beautiful fictional world of Adi-Mets that you have created! Its amazing!!

Everything is so wonderful and light and nice and lively! Your A-M arent scarred by the troubles and burdens of their pasts like the ones on the show. Everything is so simple and beautiful and refreshing, and yours is just a wonderful world (of attractive Mehra men) to get lost in. Your diction is flawless as usual, you write with such ease!
I kind of like that its not just A-M but theres this awesome chemistry between Gunn and Nikhil, and theres a sprinkle of other characters around them like shravan and Dhruv, its added a whole different dimension to the story, like its a world of its own thats complete with its set of characters.

I am really really looking forward to reading more, wish I could read a chapter every day, like a fairy tale/bed time story but I know thats a lot to ask. So update whenever you can, I will be eagerly waiting!

And please do take care of yourself!

PS: I hope MAN U wins the match. I truly have missed your Adi! 😉

Ur last two chapters are fantastic!! Im loving the light,naughty banter between AM.Ur fic is the only we way we can see the fun,carefree sides of their personalities.Especially Adi.They way you portray him is one of the best highlights of ur fic.
The hyena bit was ROFL!! 🤣 🤣
The Gunn-Nikhil track sounds very interesting.

Tc.

omgggg u finally updated omggg wow soz 4 da delay
but yh it was awesum!!!
jus loved it
continue soon 😳

excellent!
I love the fact that you've added stuff about Gunn and Nikhil too!

I wish this was happening in the show!

glad you're feeling better!
xx