Tere Vaaste- SuMod FF

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Chapter-1

The story starts from Dhrarampal cancelling SuMod's marriage.

At Kaatelal Home

Susheela- Papa aapne aisa kyun kiya Dr. Sahab aur unki parivar ko itna bhala bura kyun kaha galti aapki choriyon ki thi uss bechare ko toh kuch pta bhi na tha.

Garima- Oh ho kisiko Pramod ji ki badi chinta ho rhi hai.

Susheela- Tu chup karegi kahin bhi shuru ho jaati hai,

Garima- Soory sorry behen tu continue kar.

Dharampal- Kya khusar-phusar kar rhe ho tum dono?

Garima- Kuch nhi papa.

Dharampal- Aur susheela tu tujhe toh shaadi bhi nhi karni thi na. Toh phir Chautala sahab aur unke parivaar ke liye itni humdardi kyun?

Susheela- Haan papaji main Dr.Pramod se shaadi nhi karna chahti thi lekin aapko unhe iss tarah zalil nhi karna chahiye tha.

Dharampal- Kyun nhi karni chahiye tha aur accha hi hai teri shaadi aise ghar mein nhi hui jahan mardon se zyaada aurton ki suni jaati hai.

Susheela- Lekin papaji...

Dharampal- Bass agar ek shabd aur bola toh teri shaadi bina puchhe karva dunga jab tak teri rai le rha hun shukra mana.

Kusum- Garima, Susheela ko andar lekar jaa warna baat badh jayegi.

Susheela- Lekin mummy..

Garima- Susheela, puttu ek baar kaha na andar chalo room mein.

They go to their room. Susheela is continuously crying.

Puttu- Garima didi mere se toh Susshela didi ki halat dekhi hi nhi jaa rhi hai.

Garima- Mujhese bhi puttu. Susheela ko aise bikharte hue pehli baar dekha hai maine.

Puttu- Mujhe toh lagta hai Susheela didi ko Pramod bro se pyaar ho gya hai.

Garima- Tu sahi keh rha hai lekin yeh hai apni bailbuddhi kabhi maanegi nhi.

Suddenly Susheela falls unconsious.

Garima/Puttu- Susheela/Didi.

Garima- Puttu yeh toh behosh ho gyi ib kya karein.

Puttu- Di Susheela didiko toh bukhar bhi hai.

Garima- Ek kaam kar ja kar sab ko bula kar leya.

Puttu goes down and calls everyone to their room.

Kusum- Susheela ko kya hogya achanak se?

Garima- Pta nahin mummy jabse upar aayi hai ro rhi thi aur phir achanak se behosh ho gyi aur isse toh bhukaar bhi hai.

Dharampal- Ek kaam karo isse hospital lekar chalo.

They take her to the same hospital where Dr.Pramod is a doctor.

Dr. Pramod was there when he saw Susheela and he came to her... And says..

Pramod- What happened to her?

Garima- pata nahi Pramod ji achanak behosh ho gai..

Pramod- inhe bukhar bhi hai inhe mara cabin mein le chalta hai..

They nod and take her to the cabin.. Pramod starts checking her, and all were sitting there and Garima was crying sitting beside her.

After the check up

Pramod- Maine inhe injection diya hai,khana na khana ki wajha se aur shayad tension ki wajah se inhe is tarah chakar a gaya hai aap log chinta mat kijiye inhe thodi der mein hosh a jayega.

Garima- Thank you Dr Pramod..

Pramod was only looking at Susheela, a tear rolling down from his eyes.He wipes at and finds Dharampal standing in front of him which makes him scared. Dharampal tells him to come out from the cabin he wants to talk with Dr Pramod.

Dhrampal- Dekho Dr Pramod aapne mera ilaaz kiya hai isliye pyaar se bol raha hun.Susheela se dur rahiya warna apka liya accha nahi hoga...

Pramod- Par Dharmpal ji

Dharmpal- Par war kuch nahi dr sahab agar apka dil mein Susheela ke liye thoda bhi pyaar ha toh please chale jaiye usse dur apko Susheela ki kasam hai.

Pramod- Thik hai Dharampal ji aap jo kaha ga wo mein karunga.Par aapko meri ek iccha puri karni hogi. Sirf thodi der ke liye main Susheela Ji ko dekhna chahta hun. Kuch der ke liye unke pass rehana chahata hu tab tak jab tak wo behosh hai please...( He joined his hand and Dharampal agree with him ).

Dharmpal goes from there Pramod comes to the cabin where Susheela was sleeping..

Song starts..

Kaisi yeh judai hai

Aankh bhar meri aayi hai

Mera dil doob raha

Isse bas ab doobne do

A tear rolled down from his eyes.. he was silently crying he came to susheela and sat beside her and took her hand..

Yeh pehli baar hua

Yeh kyun ehsaas hua

Mera dil toot raha

Isse bas ab tootney do

He put her hand on his head and cried.

And after this he leaves from there and goes to his home... Because he promised Dharmpal he will stay away from Susheela .

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Posted: 3 years ago
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TBH I can't really understand dharmpal's character in the show I mean ek moment mein woh kuch Kehte hai and next moment woh just uska opposite karte hai

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dwanstar

TBH I can't really understand dharmpal's character in the show I mean ek moment mein woh kuch Kehte hai and next moment woh just uska opposite karte hai

Woh toh hai just like chanchal chachi said "Baap ka dil mom ki tarah hota hai turant pighal jaayega" so he is just acting like a father would act angry with her daughters but can't ignore their pain

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Ok so it's a nice story. When are you going to update the next chapter. Please do it soon . I am busy with my studies so can't give a detailed review but promise I'll give it when I am free may be by Friday I can .😊

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