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Thanks all for reading and liking my FF... Increase in no.of views makes.me happy even though there is less activity on forum...
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Part 14
Kali was in her room when Naina came and projected she is very upset. "Naina what happened?" Kali asked. "I am not going to talk to Tina. I am upset on her" Naina said. "What happened? But she is your best friend" Kali said. "Yes but we had fight" Naina replied. "Then say sorry to each other and solve the matter" Kali replied. "Why I should say sorry always. It's her turn now" Naina said. "Ok. Tell me who started fight first." Kali asked. Naina made look like culprit and said "It's me" Kali looked at her with smile. "Its your mistake. So you should say sorry first. You have hurt your friend so first sorry should come from you." Kali replied. Naina smiled as she knew she hit the goal. "If that is so papa is upset because of you. Why you are not saying sorry to him?" Naina spotted it perfectly. Kali was unable to react and understood what Naina was trying to say.

As promised to Naina, Gauri took Naina to dance classes. Naina was practicing when Gauri saw pampered of couple dance too. She had an idea to spend time with Yug.

Back in home, Kali was restless. She opened up admission letter of Pavitra and was surprised how Yug managed to get admission in school for Pavitra. Manjiri came as she had something to tell Kali. "Kali, do you know what Yug have done for Pavitra's admission?" Kali was surprised. "He had given legal letter to school that if due to Pavitra their school's reputation is on stake. School can anytime file legal case on Yug" Manjiri broke the news. "What?" Kali was shocked. "Manji ma this is too risky. Right now his business is getting into right shape. One wrong move will destroy everything for his career" Kali replied. "I know Kali. He took such big step just for Pavitra's admission" Manjiri replied and Kali felt guilty more. "Manji maa, do you think I have done wrong by not telling Yug about this matter?" Kali asked Manjiri. "Kali I feel yes. You should have atleast told him. I also advised you same" Manjiri replied. "Manji maa I think I should apologies to him. He is very much upset on me." Kali replied. Manjiri supported Kali's thought.

For whole day Kali tried calling Yug but he didnt even pick her call once. Kali realized how much upset he would be. But he was right this time and she had to convince him. In the evening first time Kali was waiting for Yug after so long. Yug returned from office and Kali rushed with glass of water. "water" Kali tried to offer but Yug completely ignored her and he headed towards his room. Gauri saw this and grabbed the chance. Gauri happily showed pamplette to Yug for couple dance competition in Naina's dance class and Yug readily agreed for it purposefully in front of Kali. Kali felt bad. But Yug wanted her to feel how ignorance hurt a person. Gauri was so much happy. And Naina and Leela were not.

In Nandu's house, Devri somehow convinced Nandu to go Mithila for some work next day. Nandu agreed for sake of Devri.

Next morning, much to unexpected Leela came to Gauri and asked her to come with her to temple. "Daadi ji, you take Kali with you. I have to go for shopping" Gauri said. "Every time you have an issue that I don't treat you as daughter in law of house. And when I am asking you to do something for me. You have trouble there as well" Leela complained. "Ok. I will come with you to temple. Then I will go for shopping" Gauri shared plan. "Yeah let's go" Leela managed to handle Gauri. Naina went ahead for their next step. She went to Manjiri along with Pavitra. "Manji ma, we want to go to garden for playing" Naina said. "Ok. Let's all go with Kali too" Manjiri said. Leela came there and told Manjiri that she can go out with kids but keep Kali at home. She is expecting some guests at home and it's better someone should be at home. Manjiri agreed. Leela and Naina's plan was going successful. Leela took Gauri along with her first. Manjiri went later on with kids. "Manji maa, i forgot my ball in my room." Naina said. "Ok get it" Manjiri told Naina.

Naina ran upstairs. She peeped in Yug's room to notice he is still there getting ready for office. Naina run to Kali's room. "Mumma I am not finding my ball. Please help me finding it." Naina dragged Kali in Yug's room. Kali and Yug looked at each other. Yug again ignored Kali and paid attention to getting ready. "Mumma, search my ball" Naina said. Kali kept searching for ball in room. Though Yug was pretending to be getting ready, his half attention was on Kali. And though Kali was pretending to search ball she was also checking if Yug is looking at her. Naina smiled looking at their reaction. Naina slowly walked near bed; picked up Yug's mobile. She quietly moved out of room and quickly pulled door to lock it from outside. Before Kali and Yug can understand what happened; Naina put lock on door. "Naina open the door" Kali and Yug shouted from inside. "No mumma and papa. Till the time you solve problem between you two. I am not going to open the door." Naina replied. "Naina enough of kidding. Now open the door." Kali said. "Mumma, I am not joking. You know what you need to do" Naina reminded her. "Daadi Gauri Pishi ma open the door" Yug shouted everyone's name. "No use papa. No one is at home. Not even servants. Its only you two. Now enjoy!" Naina said and kept Yug phone on silent mode. She came downstairs and took out her ball from behind sofa which she already hide in the morning. She came out and asks Manjiri to let's go. "You took so long" Manjiri asked. "Yeah I was not able to find my ball. Then mumma helped me" Naina replied. "Ok" Manjiri smiled and left the house with girls.

Yug noticed Manjiri going with girls in car. "I will call Pishi ma and ask her to come back" Yug said and went to pick his phone. He found that his phone was missing. "Where is your phone?" Yug asked Kali. "It's in room" Kali replied. Naina's tactics were driving them mad. Yug went near phone in his room and found that is also dead. Kali too was puzzled at the way Naina planned everything. "Sanjeevna Sanjeevna" Yug kept shouting servant's name. "It's of no use." Kali said. "Why?" Yug asked. "No one is at home. Daadi had send all of them out for some work" Kali replied. Yug was going mad now. "I have important meeting at office" Yug was going upset. "We dont have another choice than wait" Kali said. Yug irritatingly sat on one corner of bed. Kali too quietly grabbed another corner on bed. This was epic moment for Kali and Yug where both were locked forcefully in one room.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Rupa... Ur wish is my command..thanks for giving me idea how to take this part between KaYu...πŸ˜›
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Thanks to all who are reading and liking my FF... Keep reading...
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Part 15

In locked room, though both Kali and Yug wanted to talk to each other no one was speaking. "She still didn't realize it was her mistake. Can't see realize I am upset on her" Yug thought. "Why he is giving so much attitude this time. I called so many times yesterday. But he didn't picked up my call once. Even he was behaving I don't exist in front of him. Why I should talk to him?" Kali thought. "But you know her. What if she stops talking to you completely." Yug was afraid inside. "No Kali. It was your mistake. You should apologies" Kali thought. She turned to talk to him but he got up and picked up the remote control of TV. Kali had enough of it. She was trying hard to talk to him. But he was throwing all tantrum on her. He switched on the TV and ignored her again. "Leave it. If he doesn't value my presence here. Why I should care?" Kali decided to herself.


Manjiri reached in garden and both girls were playing. Manjiri was taking good care of them unaware about Nandu and Devri's presence at same spot. Devri saw Manjiri with both girls and knew what to do? "Manji ma I am thirsty" Naina came to Manjiri. "I forgot water bottle in car" Manjiri said. They asked Pavitra to play in garden and meanwhile Manjiri took Naina to make her drink water. Pavitra was playing with ball but Devri's tricks made ball to go away from Pavitra. And soon Pavitra landed on middle of road following ball. A car in full speed was approaching to Pavitra and both Naina and Manjiri were frozen. But Nandu saw her in Nick time and saved her. Naina and Manjiri rushed to take Pavitra but Manjiri was stood dumb at the moment when she saw it's Nandu with Pavitra. She was happy to see Nandu and decided to go to him. But she stood dumb at the moment when she saw Devri next to Nandu. "Devri, is he alive?" She was unable to react. "Are you ok?" Nandu asked Pavitra. He caressed her face and Pavitra felt unknown connection with him. Naina rushed to Pavitra. She hugged Pavitra. "Pavitra are you ok" she asked. "Thank you uncle" she said to Nandu. Nandu asked them to go their mom and not play on road. Manjiri was watching them standing dumb their and Devri's eyes were fixed on her. Nandu didn't notice Manjiri and said to Devri let's go home back. Devri took Nandu and turned to leave. Both girls came to Manjiri. "Manji ma, manji ma" Naina shouted to bring Manjiri back to senses. "Errmmm" Manjiri was still bot able to understand anything "Pavitra is fine Manji ma" Naina told. Manjiri came back to senses and hugged Pavitra. She looked around and couldn't see Nandu and Devri. "Let's go home Naina" Manjiri said. "But Manji maa i want to play more" Naina said. "No Naina we are going home." Manjiri said and pulled both girls to car. "Ohh mo our plan will be flopped. With so much efforts i locked mumma and papa in room. I hope mumma says sorry to papa before we reach home" Naina thought.

Manjiri put both girls in car. "How much will you run?" Manjiri was frightened with Devri's voice. She turned and tensed to see him in front of him. He kept moving towards her and Manjiri aas fragile. All those memories were still fresh how cruel he was with Naina. "Dont you dare to..." Manjiri said. "I am not here to do anything. If I wish I could have come back much early to all of your lives. And you know you coudnt have stopped me" Devri said and Manjiri gave disgusting look."She is a naina right. And other girl is Nandu's daughter Pavitra" Devri said. "How do you know Pavitra's name?" Manjiri asked. "I know everything. But I told you I don't want to come back to your lives.I am happy with my family" Devri replied. "It's better you stay away. It's good for everyone." Manjiri replied and turned to leave. "I will stay away. But you have to help me for that" Devri said and Manjiri looked at him with surprise. "Because of me my brother had lost his family. He had moved away from kaali and his daughter. I want to bring happiness back in his life" Devri said. "Impossible. Don't think we will fall to your tactics now. Kali won't back till the time you are there. Stay away from our family." Manjiri replied. "That's in your hand" Devri replied. "What do you mean?" Manjiri asked. "If you want me to stay away from your family, bring Pavitra to same place tomorrow evening" Devri told her. "Forget about it." Manjiri told him firmly. "I will wait here" Devri was also stubborn. Manjiri sat in car and left with two girls. Devri looked at moving car determiningly as he knew his moves are clear for his vision.

Yug sat on bed and flipped TV channel. "Hum tum ek Kamre main band ho aur chaabi kho jaaye" song played on TV and both became uncomfortable. Both looked at each other and Yug flipped the channel. "Accha ji main haari chalo man jao na, dekhi sabki yaari mera dil jalao na" another channel too didn't leave them peacefully. Yug flipped the channel one more time "I am sorry I am sorry jaane bhi do" another song played on TV and Yug was irritated. Kali couldn't control and smiled at his irritation. Yug in fake anger turned off the TV and turned her face. Kali realized it's enough of game between them. She got up and stood in front of Yug.


"I am sorry Yug" Kali said and Yug looked at her. "I know it's mistake. I should have told you about Pavitra's admission" Kali said and Yug got up. "So finally you accept your mistake. But don't think that I am going to forgive you easily " Yug said and Kali looked at him in pleading way. "Have you realized all those your weird decision can cause adverse impact on Naina and your relationship. You have done so much for her which her own mother can't do. You love her ao much. Then why suddenly you are moving away from her" Yug asked. "Yug i know my mistake. You are right. I shouldn't take such decision which will disturb Naina" Kali said. "Good you realized it." Yug said. "Friends?" Kali extended her hand. Yug smiled and shake his hand with hers. "But this doesn't mean you will get rid of your punishment" Yug said mischievously. Kali gave him wild look. "Ok. Tell me what I need to do" Kali asked in friendly tone. "Well I haven't decided anything yet. So I keep it reserved." Yug replied with smile. "But promise me whatever I will ask you have to do it" Yug said and put his hand in front of her. Kali was blank for a moment. She was unsure to make blind promise to Yug or not.

Manjiri reached home with both girls. She was surprised no one is at home. She was restless and wanted to meet Kali. "Kali kali" Manjiri shouted her name. Naina realized she is caught now. She decided to tell truth to Manjiri. "Manji maa, mumma is in Papa's room" Naina said. "with Yug?" Manjiri was surprised. "Yes I locked them together so they can sort out their differences" Naina told Manjiri. "Naina let's open the door and set them free first" Manjiiri was bit upset on Naina.
Kali was confused to make promise to Yug or not. Yug who was waiting for her reply understood her dilemma. "Don't worry I won't ask something which will put you in difficult situation." Yug assured her. Kali smiled. "Ok whatever thing you will ask me I will agree to it as my punishment" Kali said keeping her hand on his hand. She promised Yug and he had smile on his face. He had her hand in his and he wished this moment last forever. Anytime she decides to come back, he will keep holding her hand forever. Kali saw reflection of his truth in his eyes. She knew he will not break his promise anymore. He brought their relation back to the stage where she can rely on Yug again.

Kali and Yug were still holding each other's hand when Naina and Manjiri opened the door and came in. Naina saw them this way and she was extremely happy. Manjiri had reason to worry but. "Yeeaahhh..." Naina rushed to them. "Papa mumma, you finally sorted your differences." Naina asked. "Yes. But don't lock us again" Kali said smilingly. "Sorry" Naina said holding her ears. Yug squeezd her in embrace as he was happy that Naina did this step. And he got few moments with Kali. "Papa your phone" Naina returned Yug's phone. "Ohh I had important meeting at office. I will inform them I am not coming today" Yug said and went out to make phone call. Kali looked at Manjiri and saw her tensed. "What happened Manji ma" Kali asked. "Nothing" Manjiri replied. "Mumma, Pavitra almost mate an accident today. But one uncle saved her" Naina told Kali. "Pavitra, are you ok" Kali hugged Pavitra. Pavitra said yes. "Really thankful of person who saved you" Kali said and Manjiri was thinking whether to tell Kali it was Nandu? "Chalo everything is set. I am going to spend time with Naina and Pavitra today" Yug said coming in room. Manjiri was still confused. "Papa let's play carrom" Naina said. "Me and you in one team. Manji ma and mumma in another." Naina said. "That's good plan. Right pishi maa" Yug asked and saw Manjiri was still thinking. "What happened?" Yug asked Manjiri. Manjiri avoided answer.

They all were engrossed playing carrom. Yug held Pavitra in his lap. Kali was too happy today. Naina was doing cheating while playing. And Yug was backing her up. Kali was faking her anger on both of them for not playing properly. All happy faces around except Manjiri. She kept looking at Kali and Yug whose bond was rebuilding again. She saw Pavitra happy with Yug. She saw Kali smiling from heart after long time. She put glance on happy faces of Yug Kali Naina Pavitra. "No this is going perfect. I shouldn't bring any havoc to Kali's life. Better i hide truth. Better i never tell her about today's incident" Manjiri concluded.

Edited by darshana23 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: darshana23

Rupa... Ur wish is my command..thanks for giving me idea how to take this part between KaYu...πŸ˜›

Ohh that's so sweet of u Darshu
Thank u
I liked it. Everyone r s good timed and kayu r locked. πŸ˜›πŸ‘
Sorry I could not be online from two days. Just read the previous part. Yug did a deal with the school management risking his own future. πŸ˜›Good Yug is getting to do some things atleast here unlike the show πŸ˜† where everyone r dumb except the two super women. 😑 Actually all r doing something even kids. πŸ‘πŸ˜›
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Hai Darshu.
Good one Darshu. It's interesting. So who will become a happy family finally? Is to be seen.
I liked that song a playing on TVs and kayu situation. Ha ha so funny and light hearted
Thanks again for writing on my wish. Dear.
Mean while how r u! How is ur multi taking work going on ?
how is u r kid?
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Rupa first thanks to you for giving me situation to write...even I enjoyed it to pen down... Life is going crazy... I still have many things running... But luckily it'd Xmas vacation period so client work is reduced... But still i am busy... Specially weekends... thefe is lot more coming and there is lot to do...
But I am all excited for it... πŸ˜› Sometime it's good to spend time on something when you can see all good things going to come...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome!
stop changing the name of the epi after every part though🀣
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Originally posted by: __shibani__

Awesome!
stop changing the name of the epi after every part though🀣


You replied something than just awesome and nice today!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
I m changing name so other can understand i have updated next part.
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