KaYu FF: Hit and Miss Part 20 Page 16 - Page 5

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hai Darshu
Leela and Naina doing so filmy and soapy things. πŸ˜†
But good effort .
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Rupa abhi serial pe based story hain so going soapy way...πŸ˜†
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Ha Darshu.
But good someone is trying to bring kayu closer.
And did u see the forum rank is raised. And it's 34 now.
I am surprised. Hardly anyone comes to the forum these days except a few. .but it increased.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Forum ranking is very weird calculation...It's based on article being posted on channel and serial... So might be zee tv and KT had articles that's why rank increase...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks to all who are reading and liking my FF... Keep reading...next part is coming up
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Part 11
Leela was happy to see them going close. She went away from there and hinted Naina that their plan is successful while going back in room. Naina was happy again.

In room, Yug and Kali kept staring at each other. They had lived similar moments earlier too but each moment they had different feelings. They were so lost into each other "Mumma what happened?" Pavitra asked and both came to senses. Yug and Kali got up. Yug collected books from floor and thanked Kali hesitantly. He went back to room. Kali stood their trying to control her feelings.

In the middle of night, Yug was not able to asleep peacefully. "I should have talk to Kali" he was thinking about same. Suddenly he realized someone was trying to peep in room secretly. He suspected it to be some thief. Yug slowly got up and got hold of rod. He walked to the door and was about to attack the intruder. To the dead shock, it was Kali. Kali was scared due to sudden attack of Yug. He walked outside room and pulled the door to close it. "Kali what are you doing here? At this time?" Yug asked. "Wo.. actually..." Kali wanted to hide main reason. "Are you here to check if Naina asleep or not?" Yug asked. Kali avoided eye contact with Yug as she was caught. "If you still care for her so much. Then why all this Kali? If it's difficult for you then its difficult for Naina too. You don't know she was also missing you so much. In her every sentence she talks about you. I don't know what is the real reason behind your this step. But please dont hurt yourself and Naina much now" Yug pleaded her. "Yug i know her. She will get adjusted to it slowly." Kali replied. Yug was unable to understand her. "I think I should go now. Good night" Kali said to Yug and turned to leave. "Kali..." Yug stopped her. "I am not able to sleep. Can you please make a cup of coffee for me?" Yug asked with intention to spend some moments with her. "Sure" Kali replied. They went to kitchen ensuring they are not disturbing anyone's sleep. There was no need to tell Kali which coffee Yug prefers. She had not forgotten his taste still now. There was silence between two but their eyes and heart knew how to speak with each other. "You still remember everything" Yug said in his heart looking at Kali. "Few things can't be forgotten at all Yug" Kali said in her heart. "If you can't forget it then why this denial Kali?" His heart was pleading her again. "Because I am afraid. My mind and my heart don't go putting hand in hand." Her heart replied. "Listen to your heart once Kali. Everything will be sorted out" His heart was advicing her. "Please dont make me weak again Yug. Where I will be again making decision which will be against everyone" her heart pleaded. "I think we should stop" Kali said suddenly stopping their heart to heart communication. Yug looked at her puzzled as they didnt speak a single word. "I just wanted to stay we should stop gas as coffee is ready" Kali tried to cover up matter. Yug brought two cups from drawer. "Yug i wont take..." Kali replied to Yug. "Please dont make look like selfish goat who asked you to make a coffee at this hour and not offering that even." Yug said mischievously. "He hasnt changed" Kali thought to herself giving a smile. They both came in hall taking a coffee mug and grabbed corners of sofa. "Kali I am sorry for today morning incident. i should have come with you. But I am happy that Pavitra's admission problem is resolved" Yug said. "Its ok Yug and Don't worry about admission . I will handle it" Kali didnt wish to tell him about problem still there. Kali indulged Yug in different talks. After so many years they got chance to be with each other. So many years passed, so many calendar pages turned, but their smiles, their feelings were still same for each other.

In the night, Devri was thinking how to make Nandu agree to return to Chaudhary mansion. Jamuna pulled Devri out of house as she wanted answer to her questions. "Why did you went today to meet Kali?" Jamuna asked in anger. "Who is asking me this question? My mother or someone else" Devri replied. "Don't be try to smart Devri. Give me answer to my question." Jamuna fired back. "Answer is simple. I want to make my brother's life better" Devri replied. "You want to make his life better. Or you want to make Kali's life hell?" Jamuna asked. "Why I will make her life hell. Cant you see change in me?" Devri asked her. "Change and in you.. You are talking about impossible Devri. I know you very well. You definitely has some hidden motive" Jamuna fired Devri. "Think whichever way you want. But that will not stop me from my motive" Devri replied to Jamuna and went in. Jamuna was worried for Kali now.

Next day, Manjiri was talking to Raghu about Pavitra's admission to school. "Mukta i tried everywhere but no one is ready to give admission to daughter of single mother." Raghu told Mukta. Manjiri was upset on weird norms of society who is rejecting rights of education to child just because father name is not there. "Mukta what can be done? Unfortunately we live in small town Mithila and here it's hard to change people mind. But still there is way. Pavitra will surely admission in another city." Raghu replied. "Different city? She is too young Raghu Bhaiya." Manjiri replied. "Mukta I wished we had choice but we don't. You speak with Kali on this matter. Another school in city is ready to give admission to Pavitra. If Kali agrees to it, I will talk further." Raghu told Manjiri. Manjiri was worried now.

Kali was shaken when she heard this option from Manjiri. "She is too young Manji maa. I can't leave her alone." Kali replied emotionally. "I know Kali. Pavitra can't take care of herself alone. That's why I have suggestion. You too move to different city with Pavitra. It will help you out to bring Yug and Gauri close too. As you won't be there. Yug can think about Gauri" Manjiri put up another option. "Manji maa it's like making two part of hearts and asking me to choose one." Kali replied. "Though i asked Naina to stay with Gauri, she is still there in front of my eyes. I can see her, I can lover her. How will I do it moving completely away from her?" Kali started crying. Manjiri consoled her. "Why life takes my exam at every point Manji ma??" Kali hugged Manjiri.





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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hai darshu.
Loved the coffee scene. 😊
For a moment after reading the title, I just remembered the song⭐️ hum tum ek kamre me bandh Ho aur chaabi kho jaye..tπŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Thought Kayu r locked in room by Naina and dadi. πŸ˜‰ And that sounds a damn good idea too.πŸ˜³πŸ˜›
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Ha ha ha...u seriously want that?? Then ur wish my command ... Will write that...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: darshana23

Ha ha ha...u seriously want that?? Then ur wish my command ... Will write that...

And I would love to read that.
And r u active in Mehek forum Darshu 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Rupa not really... I m catching repeat telecast.. but I don't get time to be there... I have so many things running at my personal front so I really don't want myself to get stuck in forum activities again...
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