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Thanks all for reading and commenting on FF..keep reading...
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Part 5

Kali was sitting helpless in her room. She was unable to understand why everyday was new challenge in her life. Like every other normal girl she also wished her life to be peaceful but it wasnt. All moments of her life was rolling in front of her eyes.. starting from how she met Yug in childhood.. how their love went strong after they met.. their marriage... Storm in their life in form of Gauri... Yug throwing her out of her life... She meeting Naina.. her marriage with Nandu to save Naina.. she accepting Nandu... Nandu again leave her stranded for Devri... And Pavitra's birth... Recalling every moment was painful... She wished to could relax her head on someone's shoulder and cry her heart out. Next moment she had someone giving her support. She turned and surprised to see Yug there. "I am sorry Kali." Yug said softly. "Yug..." Kali wished to say something but Yug placed his finger on her lips. "Dont say anything Kali. Just listen... I know it's hard to accept but that won't change reality between us. We both have tried to give another chance to our life with someone else but we both knew it has not worked. Neither me nor you can deny we still hold place in each other's heart." Yug cupped her face in his hand "Don't try to suppress your feeling Kali. Just give another chance to your life. It's enough of thinking how others will feel. How others will react. Some time we need to be selfish. Some time we need to listen what our heart says. Tell me what your heart says? Have you forgotten all that moments between us? Don't you feel there is still some strange connection between us." Yug continued and Kali found herself going emotionally weak on those words. "Yug moved a bit closer to her. "Kali your silence says it all. That you still have place for me in your heart. Our love can not die Kali. It will be live... Forever..." Saying this Yug even moved more closer and tried to lean on her to wrap a kiss on her lips. Kali didn't understand but she was going weak with every moment between them. Whats wrong, whats right didn't cross her mind for that moment. "Yug..." She tried to avoid but Yug didn't stop. He kept moving and Kali lost her zeal to defend. She didnt even realized when she closed her eyes giving him consent to go ahead.

But for next few moments there was nothing... Kali was surprised and opened her eyes slowly. She was shocked now. Because Yug was not around her and whatever she saw was merely her dream. "This is wrong. How could I even think about this. Yug is Gauri's husband now. I had moved on with Nandu. I have Pavitra with me now. Then all this thoughts..." Kali wondered and was angry on her own imagination.
"Why it is wrong Kali?" She found her reflection questioning from mirror. "It is wrong. Yug and I got married to someone else. Our path are different now." Kali replied. "In which world you are leaving Kali? Whom you are trying to make fool. You very well know neither your marriage was fruitful nor Yug's. You both are just compromising for other's sake" Her reflection was questioning her. "No. This is not truth. Our paths are different now. Our destiny is different. Thinking this way for Yug is big sin for me" Kali replied. "But still you thought that way right? It's because you still love him." Her inner voice was going firm. "No. It can't be" Kali's mind was going strong trying to suppress her inner thoughts. "No matter how much you deny it. He is your first love and no matter what you will never forget him. You still love him kali.. you still love him" Kali was being haunted now. She got so much angry to herself that she broke mirror from her room. "This is wrong. And no matter what I have to stop it" Kali was determined.

"Mumma lets go" Naina said peeping in room. Kali was cleaning broken mirror. "What happened?" Naina asked looking at mirror. "Nothing just this mirror was broken" Kali replied trying to hide her tears. "Someone else will do it. You get ready. We have to go to my school" Naina said trying to pull kali. But Kali held it back. Naina was surprised. Kali held Naina by her shoulder. "Nainu i know it's big day for you. But... But i cant be there..." Kali threw sudden surprise on Naina. "What?? Why cant you come?" Naina questioned her. "You know my all friends wants to meet you. I have told them so much about you. And what they will say if my mumma is not there today" Naina's questions was unstoppable. "Who told you that your mumma won't be there. I have asked your Gauri mumma to come with you. She will be there" Kali tried to explain. "No. But i want you. Why you can't come?" Naina started going stubborn. "Naina i cant explain each and everything. I have decided that you will go with your papa and Gauri mumma to this function. And you have to listen to me." Kali tried to be strict. "No. I want you and papa to come with me and not anyone else." Naina too was going more stubborn. Arguments between Mother and daughter was stretched and Kali ended up on shouting Naina loudly. Naina felt very bad and she ran away out of room crying. Kali sat helplessly on bed. She was feeling so bad to shout on Naina.

Naina came out running in hall. Yug and Leela was there. "What happened?" Yug asked. Naina narrated whole incident to them. "I will talk with her." Leela said. "No Daadi, i will talk to her" Yug said and went to Kali's room. Kali was standing near window all upset with incident. "Kali whats wrong with you?" Yug asked. Kali wiped her tears secretly and tried to impose she is all fine. "Nothing. I am all ok" Kali said. "Then why are you not coming to Naina's school?" Yug questioned. "There is so much to do at home. Look how messy these room is. These girls are just..." Kali tried to wind up stuff in room and tried to show there is nothing big reason she is not coming. "Kali don't try to enact when you can't. There is really something. " Yug said holding her hand and stopping her from enacting. "There is nothing wrong. I am just tired" Kali put up excuse. "See if you are upset with me give punishment to me. Not to Naina. You know very well she wants you today. You are her mother". Yug said. "No I am not." Kali screamed loud. Yug looked at her in astonishment. For a moment he though whether she is in her senses. "Naina is Gauri's daughter. And Gauri has full rights to enjoy time with her daughter. Not needed i should be there with her all the time" Kali replied. "Do you know what are you talking? " Yug asked. Kali still tried to hide matter. "I am completely in senses. I have decided I m not coming to her school. You can go with tour wife and daughter" Kali replied. "Kali..." Yug tried to argue again. "Nothing will change my decision Yug. And you know that" Kali replied strong. Yug was helpless. He moved out of room knowing there is some big reason behind Kali's behaviour.

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Good one Darshu.
What s going in Kali mind?
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Rupa u have to read next part for that..😆
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Originally posted by: darshana23

Rupa u have to read next part for that..😆

Ok Darshu. Forum rank dekha 😲 it's 51. Omg - 20😃😕
Credit to the great cvs of KT 😡
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Kaash itane rate TRP for jaaye... Fir CVs royenge and hum hansenge 😆
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Part 6

Gauri got dressed nicely and arrived in hall. "Let's go Naina" she held Naina's hand. Naina kept looking at Kali's room door hoping she will be out and will agree to come with them. Yug came and placed hand on Naina's head hinting Kali won't come. Naina was disappointed. With off mood she leave with Yug and Gauri for school.
Kali rushes to window. She feels sad looking at Naina who is upset more. When car departs Kali couldn't hold her tear more and bursts out. Manjiri comes to support her. Kali hugs Manjiri. " Why my life is turmoil Manji maa." Kali asked. Manjiri consoled Kali. "Why did you do this Kali? You know much Naina loves you then why did you break her heart?" Manjiri asked. "I had no choice Manji maa" Kali replied. Kali told everything to Manjiri that Yug still loves her and dont want to accept Gauri because of her presence. "This is wrong. I will talk to Yug. He had to give all rights to Gauri" Manjiri said. "Manji maa there is no use of making him understand by words. We both know he won't listen. That's why I have decided..." Kali's pause skipped Manjiri's heartbeat as she realized Kali again have to sacrifies something to make it work. "Naina was reason Yug married to Gauri and Naina is only one who can bring them close" Kali said. "Kali, but do you know while doing this you have to keep Naina away from you. You can't stay without her for few hours how will you tolerate distance from her?"
Manjiri asked. "I know Manji maa, it's not easy for me. But i will be there whenever she needs me. Though i will stay physically away from her but my heart will be always there for her" Kali said. "Kali is that reason you didn't go to Naina's school" Manjiri asked. "Manji maa, I had to start it from somewhere so I did" Kali replied. Manjiri wrapped Kali in her arms knowing her daughter needs her support now.

In school, all parents came along with their children. Kali could not control her feelings and came to school as well ensuring Naina or Yug dont spot her. After all it was first prize which Naina is going to receive of her life. So proud moment it was for her. Yug and Gauri acquired chairs along with Naina. Yug kept looking around in a hope Kali will come. But she was nowhere. Where as Kali ensured she is hiding behind curtain so that no one will spot her. Prize distribution ceremony strated and soon Naina's name was announced. Naina walked on stage. Kali had teary eyes. She wanted to see her daughter receiving award and she was seeing it. Naina came on stage but was not ready to accept prize. "What happened?" Principal asked her. "Mam I want to say something. I want this prize from my mumma's hand" Naina reolied. All crowd looked at her in astonishment. "Beta what are you saying. See this uncle is giving prize to everyone and so to you." Priciple said looking at MLA. "I know mam. But this uncle didnt help me out in my studies. He was not awakened for whole night during my exams. He was not there to feed me while I was studying. It was my mumma" Naina replied innocently. Everyone was surprised at her answer including Kali herself. Principle wanted to intervene. But MLA gave consent and asked Naina to bring her mom on stage. Naina was happy and run down the stage. Yug was disappointed. He knew its Kali's effort Naina was talking about. But for whole world, Gauri will be represented as Naina's mother. "Why you did not come Kali?" Yug wished. Gauri was all excited for the moment but Naina led her to biggest disappointment when she simply passed by her and went near curtain. Naina pulled Kali from behind the curtain and walked to stage. Yug was happy to see Kali there. And Kali was surprised how could Naina spotted her all crowd. Naina took Kali on stage and presented her to everyone. "Mam she is my mom. Mrs. Kali Chaudhary" Naina said. Kali kept looking at crowd blindly. Kali was asked to give trofee to Naina. Kali had teary eyes and Naina's face was full with smile. Kali handed over prize to Naina and heard first clap from crowd. It was Yug. Soon entire crowd stood up and clapped for the great bond between Mother and daughter. Kali pulled Naina and hugged her tightly. All she could not stop tears flowing through her eyes. And there was nothing which was stoppijg smile

Naina, Kali and Gauri were standing together. Naina introduced Kali as mother to all her friends. Yug came there "Thanks for coming Kali" Yug said. Kali was all apprehensive. She knew Gauri didnt like her coming to function. "So Naina are you happy now?" Yug asked smilingly. "Yes papa" Naina hugged him. "Go play with your friends." Yug said to Naina. "Kali we need to talk to principal for Pavitra's admission." Yug reminded Kali. Kali didn't want to get stuck in situation where Gauri getting upset for her being with Yug. But her daughter's future was more important to her. Yug and Kali left for principal office and Gauri was standing alone looking at Naina playing.

Gauri was all angry on fact Kali came to function despite she promised her she won't come. On top of that gossip around her added to fuel as how Kali and Yug makes beautiful couple and how good Naina's upbringing is. Everyone was referring Kali as Mrs. Yug Chaudhary and she lost her control. "Excuse me! Whats your problem. Do you know who is real Mrs. Yug Chaudhary is?" Gauri shouted on lady. "Anyone will come. Stand next to my husband and you all will call her Mrs. Yug Chaudhary? I am Mrs. Gauri Yug Chaudhary. Not she. You got that. I am wife of Yug and not that Kaali." Gauri created a scene over there. Unaware of fact Naina witnessed that moment and it created lots of questions in that little girls mind.

In the night, Yug was happy in his room. He could not get over the moment when Naina called Kali on stage and introduced her to everyone. He recalled moment when he did same in closed auditorium one day. The dream of Kali having her identity which he saw...his daughter completed that. Today for the world she was Naina's mother and he knew nothing else would make Kali more happy. With that smiling face, he was packing birthday gift for Naina. But Gauri was restless. All she was recalling how Naina called Kali on stage and introduced her as Kali Chaudhary. And later everyone calling Kali as Mrs. Yug Chaudhary and they praising Kali and Yug together. "Gauri Gauri" Yug was calling her. Gauri came to senses. "Have you brought something for Naina? It's her birthday tomorrow. I hope you remember" Yug asked. "Yug she is my daughter and I do remember important things about her. But you won't understand this " Gauri snapped angrily. "Ok" Yug didn't reply more. He got busy wrapping up gift again. Gauri was irritated again.

Kali made Pavitra sleep on bed. Naina was restless. Gauri's word were echoing in her ear that Kali is not Yug's wife. Kali saw Naina disturbed after returning from school. Kali pulled her close. "What happened Naina" Kali asked. "Mumma, are you not Papa's wife?" Naina questioned innocently. Kali looked at her in shock. She was too young to understand their relationship dynamics. "Who told you this?" Kali asked. "That's not answer mumma. Tell me are you not Papa's wife" Naina asked again. Kali was hesitant to answer but she had to tell truth to Naina "No. I am not" Kali replied. "But my every friend tells their mom and dad are husband and wife. But why you two are not. Why Gauri mumma is Papa's wife" Naina asked next question. It was difficult for Kali to make Naina understand. But Kali knew how to handle her. "See who says that your mumma papa are not husband wife. Gauri is your mumma to and she is wife your papa. Isn't it?" Kali answered other way round. Naina tried to understand what Kali said. "It's too much late now. Sleep." Kali asked Naina. Kali pull Naina on lap and tried to make her sleep with worrying about questions from Naina.

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Ahi Darshu
Good slap on Gauri ego.
Liked the school function thing.
And here the Naina is so cute unlike the one in the show.
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Thanks Shibu and Rupa... And all those who are reading and liking it... Postung next pary
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Part 7

Kali tried to put Naina asleep but all those Gauri's words were still echoing in her mind. Why Kali is not Yug's wife that question haunted her most. Soon clock struck 12.00 at midnight and Naina got up excitingly. Its her birthday today. "Happy birthday Naina" Kali wished her pulling in embrace. "Happy birthday di" Pavitra was too awakened. Someone knocked at door and Kali opened it. Nothing to surprise Manjiri Yug and Gauri was there. They too wished Naina. Yug handed over gift to Naina. Naina opened it up. It was her favourite Barbie doll she wished to have since long. "Thank you papa" she was happy. But then she looked at Pavitra. "Papa but where is doll for Pavitra" Naina asked. Yug looked at her in amusement. He promised he will bring another one for Pavitra tomorrow. To everyone's surprise Naina returned doll to Yug and asked him to give it again when he bring same doll for Pavitra too. Everyone was happy with her upbringing this way. "Nainu let's make wish" Gauri said to her. "What wish?" Naina asked. "As its your birthday you can look at stars and wish whatever you want. God surely grant that to you" Gauri said. She took Naina to window and Naina looked at stars. And closed her eyes...There was only wish she had to ask for ... bring Kali and Yug together...

Star fell down for sure ...but destiny had another game planned in store. The time clock struck 12.00 devil Devri too woke up from his sleep after long wait. Nandu was so happy but Jamuna was not. "Bhaiyya" Nandu hugged Devri and cried. "I am glad bhaiyya that you are back." Nandu said happily."Six years I have been waiting for you to be back" Nandu was emotional "Six years..." Devri was puzzled. "I am sorry Nandu for all my deeds. I was so wrong. I tried to ruin everyone's life. But despite that you loved me so much. It's power of your love that I am back" Devri said. Nandu smiled. "Maa!" Devri called Jamuna. "Don't call me maa. For me you are dead long back" Jamuna replied and went away angrily. "Amma " nandu tried to stop Jamuna but she didn't. "Nandu leave it. I know it will take time to heal her wound. But where is Kaali. I want to apologize to her. I did so much wrong to her. " Devri said. "Don't take her name" Nandu was upset. "Nandu what are you saying.?" Devri asked. "She did so much plotting against you. I said to her dont do this to you. But she didnt listen. " Nandu was upset . " Nandu it was not her mistake. What she did was right. Call her. I will talk to her" Devri said. "She is not with me anymore" Nandu said. Nandu explained all past events to Devri post attack on him. "Nandu you did wrong. You left her at time when she needed you most. Let's go we will bring her back." Devri said "No i dont want to see her face again." Nandu said and left. "You have to face her again Nandu... Else how new storm will barge in her life... Kaali... I am coming to destroy everything in your life..." Devil Devri was back again...

In the morning, Naina came to temple early in the morning. Leela was there doing pooja. Leela pampered her and wished her for her birthday. Naina still had her question unanswered and she thought of getting answer from Leela now. "Badi daadi can I ask you one question. Promise me you will give me true answer for this." Naina asked her. Leela promised her unknowing whats going in Naina's mind. "Why Kali mumma is not Papa's wife? My every friend says their mumma and papa are husband and wife. Then why not mine?" Naina's innocent question bowled over Leela. She recalled all her deeds. "Badi daadi tell me.You have to answer me as its my birthday. " Naina asked her again. "I will answer you. " Leela decided and took her to her room. From her old trunk she took out wedding album of Yug and Kali. "Your Kali maa was wife of your papa" Leela told her truth showing pics Kali and Yug marriage. "She was means... " Naina was puzzled. "Yes she was. But then I made your papa get married to Gauri" Leela replied. "See Naina, there is lot more thing but I can't tell you. You are still young to understand. But you know that your Kali maa loves you most. She had done so much for you no one can do. She is really good" Leela told her with wet eyes. "If that is so why you got Gauri mumma married to papa?" Naina was clearly hurt. Leela was afraid to reply. How could she ever reply Naina that she herself was only reason. Naina trapped Leela and asked her to swear on her and give answer. Leela was trapped. She could not tell lie. "That reason was you Naina." Leela's answer shocked Naina. "Please don't ask me anything more. I cant answer. But just remember one thing. Everyone loves you. And for that love only Kali was moved away from Yug." Leela replied. Naina could not take that truth. She was hurt. People she loved most were separated due to her. "Naina Naina... " Kali came to daadi's room searching for her. Naina could not control and hugged Kali tightly. "I am sorry Mumma" Naina said cryingly. "Sorry?? For what?" Kali asked . Leela hinted Naina not to tell Kali about it. Leela manages to cover up matter somehow. Kali takes Naina with her for her birthday preparation.

Kali was busy in doing birthday party preparation. Pavitra was playing with Naina in hall. But Naina was lost. She had too much to handle in last two days. She couldn't imagine she was the reason for separating Kali from Yug. "Hi Naina" Yug came to her. "See i brought exact same doll as I gifted you. Now this one for Pavitra" Yug gifted other one to Pavitra and gave gift to Naina. But she was not interested. "What happened Naina? Whats wrong with you?" Yug asked. "Nothing!" Naina answered and went to her room. Kali was looking at them unable to understand why Naina is so upset.

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