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hahahahha, ok Deal ... My DPS is mine ... heheheheh
hmmmm next part will be up soon. i'll try to work on it sooner. yar u guys enjoy it soo much and that gives me the drive to write more. Thank you for all the support.
Love, Kashish
Originally posted by: IndianPari
Just wanted to say BRAVO once again!
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Originally posted by: hira_786
omg kahsish..tht was a wonderful part as always..jus love it.. n sry foe replyin a bit late..i realli enjoyed readin da whole part..it seems like evrythin is happein in front of my eyes 😛n totalli love da song dev sings for kajjal 😉 soo sweet..yar i cant write down da shair..is baar ka ka tumhara shair mujhe udhaar raha.. m in a hury so..so i'll write later 😃 it was superrb kashsih 😛
lotssa luv:Hira 😊
Originally posted by: buddythind
sorry kashish for responding late like u my life is little too busy these days but i love ur ff...........was waiting for it.....and wow ....the romance betwwen two was perfect i actually imagined apu coming behind surveen singing one of my favourite songs...how i wish apu could have sung this song in the serial 😳
for u i can go on and on and on u r life line for us way to our beloved apu and surveen just u make us relive the romance truly.....waiting for the next part........
love, sameera
Originally posted by: pyylomena
thanks kashish, really beautifull.
and after hearing goodnews about apu returns on small screen i am little upset because now we will have to watch him with someone else instead of surveen i miss both of them but nevermind please give them all romance in your FF's
thanks once again.
Please continue your other FF (i.e. After M.L).
He opened his eyes and blinked them a couple of times to get hold of his drowsy senses. She was sleeping next to him with her head rested in the curve of his shoulder. Her hand lay on his chest, and her even breathing fanned the side of his chest every time she exhaled. He bent his head a little to look at the one woman he had loved sooo much in life. Her face was pure and shinning. Her face was calm and serene and he felt that serenity sweeping deep down in his heart as well. Seeing his Kaajjal, relaxed and in his arms, was one of the best blessings of life. For an instant, he wished this moment would never end and they spend their whole life loving and caring for each other. He lifted his hand and removed a hair lock from her cheeks, pushing it behind her ear. She muffled a little and then went into deep sleep again. Dev looked at the wall clock to get track of time; it was 6:30 am. His gaze shifted back to Kaajjal's face and a gentle smile touched his lips. he kept looking at her for some quiet yet beautiful moment and does not when he closed his eyes and went back to sleep.
Scene Change
"Good morning," her soothing voice poured honey in his ears and he opened his eyes to find her sitting on the bed, right in front of him – legs crossed and upright. The laziness in his eyes made him look even sexier and more vulnerable. She felt her heart pound at his handsomeness and said immediately,
"chai laee hoon." She points to the mug she had placed at the side of his bed while sipping on her own.
"Good morning," he smiles.
"uth jao, its 11 AM."
"O gosh, really!!" Dev lifts himself up on the bed and quickly glances at the clock. But all of a sudden he relaxes. "Who cares … if I am with you, time doesn't matter." His husky voice, which sounded huskier in the morning, was making her dizzy anyways.
"We have to go back Dev," Kaajjal says reluctantly, as if she was not happy with the idea.
"What? No way, not today." he raises his hand giving his final decision. "aaj, tum sirf meri ho aur main sirf tumhara. No one else."
"but Dev, kal karva-chauth hai, and we have to be there for sure." Kaajjal informs him.
"haan tu kal hai na, aaj tu nahi, we will leave in the morning tomorrow. Not today." he says decisively. "waisay, really, is it karva chauth tomorrow? Wow, time goes by so quickly." He lifts his eyebrows in surprise. "I remember last year, chahchi, Nandani bhabi, and Ameesha were fasting aur ghar main kafi log jama thay sham ko. Though I didn't care back then." His voice turned in a quiet whisper on the last words and Kaajjal instantly looked at him. "Magar ab …" he was saying something but stopped in between his words.
"ab kya," she asked softly, giving him all the time to complete his sentence,
"ab meri zindagi main tum ho, and that, my dear wife, is reason enough to love life and everything beautiful in it. Haina?" the sincerity in his eyes makes her heart go out for him. she nods with a gentle smile.
"Dev"
"haan?" he looks up while sipping his tea.
"mujhay mandir jana hai."
"Mandir? Abhi?" he looks surprised.
"Kal raat hum nay zindagi ki aik naee shuruaat ki hai Dev. itni mushkilon kay baad bhi we are together. God has been very kind to us and I want to go and say special thanks to him." He looks at her intently while she speaks, "aur waisay bhi, mom bata rahi theen, yahan say about half an hour away, there is a mandir, which has great significance. Main wahan jana chahti hoon." She lifts her eyes to look directly in his, "tumharay saath."
"Oh, so mom told you." Dev says, "I have heard a lot about it as well. Theek hai, lets get ready and then we can go." he puts his cup back on the side table. She starts to get down the bed when he grabs her hand suddenly.
"kya?" She looks back at him,
"kahan ja rahi ho?" he asks,
"nahanay …." She is confused, "abhi tu tum nay kaha, lets get ready."
"Na na na na Mrs. Kaajjal Pratap Singh. You are not going anywhere unless you tell your husband how much you love him." that naughty look comes back in his eyes, for he had a different plan of starting their day today.
"Dev …" she gently wriggles her wrist in his hand and he pulls her towards him. She almost lands on his chest and he wraps his arms around her instantly. "Dev …" she wiggles again, this time in his arms.
"shhhhhh," he hushes her gently,
"par Dev," she tries to talk,
"shhhhhhh," he hushes her again,
"par suno tu," she tries again, but this time instead of trying to hush her, he presses a gentle kiss on her lips. Catching her completely off guard, words instantly stops and she holds her self there. How can she say no to this? How can she say no to the moment, which makes them belong to each other completely? How can she deny how attracted she was to him right now? How can she deny how he was capturing her senses. Her fingers lift towards his hair, touching the curls at his nape and sending shivering waves down his spine. He slides his hands inside her lace-shirt and the moment his heated skins touched hers, their senses blazed. He pushes her back on the bed and covers her completely. The weight of his body, the sensation of his touch, and the feeling of skins touching was enough to drive them to a point, which was the only way their bodies could find peace. This was the best morning both had ever had in their entire life. Seeing their love in their arms when they opened their eyes, and loving them completely; what more could two crazy people in love possible ask for.
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They were driving to the mandir when Kaajjal's cell phone rings. She sees the name flashing on the screen and then looks at Dev strangely. Dev senses her tension instantly. She seems worried and despite the cell in her hand, she refrains from picking.
"kya baat hai Kaajjal, take your call." He looks at her, wondering whats is the matter. She reluctantly takes the call.
"Hello Mr. Arora" Dev looks at her instantly when he hears the name of their lawyer. The moment she had seen his name flashing, she remembered she had asked him to prepare the papers to transfer the shares back in Dev's name. She had completely forgotten about it, else she would have told Dev earlier. Mr. Arora mentions that the papers are ready and she can pick them anytime she wants.
"Please keep the papers with you, and I will drop by tomorrow or day after." Kaajjal instructs him and then disconnects.
"Kaisay papers Kaajjal?" Dev ask as soon as she disconnects.
"wo … wo …" she struggles with words.
"what is it?" he sees her tension which tenses him as well.
"wo …. When I saw you and Payal that night, I went to the lawyer the other day." Kaajjal said in a low tone, almost embarrassed on her own actions. Dev instantly pulls the car towards a sidetrack, off the road, and brings the car to a halt. He was horrified. 'Was Kaajjal thinking of getting a divorce,' was the first thought that crossed his mind.
"What did you go to the lawyer for?" he asks reluctantly,
"I didn't want the company's shares Dev. Especially after what I saw that night, I never wanted anything from you." Dev relaxed a little, for this was better than the divorce idea that struck his mind a moment ago. "I love you Dev. All I want is your love and honesty. If I don't have these, what will I do with all those shares and money?" Dev looks at her - surprised; proud of his Kaajjal, proud of the fact that he loved a girl who was not after money or anything material. Who had only loved him for the man he was and was ready to do anything for him.
"But it was a lot of money Kaajjal, why would you do that." He does not know why he asked; maybe to hear her say again how much she loves him.
"Meri daulat aur meri har khushi tu tum ho Dev. Tum nahi tu kuch bhi nahi." Her voice was truthful and full of love. He bends forward and pulls her towards him, feeling her presence; her love; and her genuineness; which was such a rarity nowadays.
"main tumhain kaisay bataoon Kaajjal, kay tum meray liyay kya ho?" his voice soothes her senses, "pyar tu main tum say deewanon ki tarah karta hi hoon, lekin today I respect you even more. Time and again, you have proved your love for me, and I promise Kaajjal, I won't let anything bad come to you. I will never ever break your trust." He was lost in his love for her and words came straight from his heart, touching the depths of her heart. They were lost in the moment when a knock on Dev's window brings them back,
"sahib, sahib phool lay lo." A small girl stood there with a basket full of beautiful gajras. Kaajjal sits back up and Dev opens his window while looking at Kaajjal. Kaajjal was wearing a yellowish-orange sari and the girl had many yellowish-orange gajras to compliment it.
"in ki sari say miltay saray gajray dai do." Dev smiles at the little girl and says softly while pointing towards Kaajjal.
"saray sahib?" the girl gets stunned, just like Kaajjal was stunned.
"hmmmm, saray." Dev emphasizes and the happiness on the little girls face was beyond words. She picks up a whole bunch of these flowers and hands them to him. He pulls his wallet out, gives the girl much more then what she asked for, and she leaves happily.
Episode Ends ….
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