Lets Relive Romance- p48 pg25- Mar 14, 08 - Page 4

Originally posted by: hmala

kashish, I don't really understand what's going on here... I was about to congratulate you for hitting 150 runs.. today I was shocked to see 4 pages in LRR post, what's the reason for opening new thread 😕 ..

Honey its IF rule that a post cant exceed 150 pages due to speed issues. therefore i had to open a new post. 😊

Anyway, Let me congratulate for this grand success and honey you don't need to say thanks to us, Its our luck to have you and this wonderful FF with us 😊 ,

and coming to your part.. I thought you are going to show the morning scene, glad god the night is not yet completed, scripting kaajju's feelings, right after being claimed by her dev is some fresh thought 👏 👏 .. these two crazy and greedy ones, going crazy to claim and to be claimed again and again.. itnee jaldi second innings bhi...dk: the most greedy fellows

Hahahha morning already .. nahi nahi, we have waited soooo damn long for this night, i cant speed it up. DK's passion for each other has been pending for sooo long ad tonight they will show each other how important they are to each other and how their life depends on each one. so some more of this night before we go to the morning. 😊

and the scene with those silk sheets..let me close my eyes, and dev again proved he is the great DPS, nvr wants to make her kaju uncomfortable, this is for our dps 😳 , tannmann ki pooja hogayi, now its time to pet ki pooja😳

ahhh Mala, thats DPS the ever sooo thorough gentleman who when loves can do anything. And kaajjal, wo tu us ki zindagi hai, anything for her.

mmmmmm see, I am very poor in english, I can't bring more words to praise you, ke jitnaa karu, utnaa kam hein so this is for my own kashish 👏

awww thankyou honey .... i am sooo touched. you are my dearest friend.

now its time to get back to my duty, I know I am the late entry to this part 😭 , as nowadays you are following US timings and going to sleep tooooo early and posted this part when I was on my deep sleep

This song is for dk's union:

Do sitaaron kaa jameen par
hai milan aaj kee raat
muskuraataa hain ummeedon kaa
chaman aaj kee raat
rang laaee hain mere dil kee
lagan aaj kee raat

saaree duniyaan najar aatee hain
dulhan aaj kee raat

husnawaale teree duniyaan mein
koee aayaa hain
tere didaar kee hasarat bhee
koee laayaa hain
tod de, tod de, parade kaa chalan
aaj kee raat

jin se milane kee tamannaa thee
wahee aate hain
chaand taare meree raahon mein
bichhe jaate hain
choomataa hain mere kadamon ko gagan
aaj kee raat

this was beautiful song for the scene Mala. just beautiful and one of my fav song, "do sitaron ka milan" wah wah wah, made for DK. 👏

2. Tere Mere Milan Ki Ye Raina
Naya Koi Gul Khilayegi
Tabhi To Chanchal Hain Tere Naina
Dekho Na
Dekho Na, Tere Mere Milan Ki Ye Raina

Tujhe Thaame Kai Haathon Se
Miloonga Madbhari Raaton Mein
Jagake Ansuni Si Dhadkan
Balamvaa Bhar Doongi Tera Man
Nayi Ada Se Satayegi
Tabhi To Chanchal Hain Tere Naina, Dekho Naa...

ahhhhh Mala, i love this song sooo much i cant even tell you. the tune the wording and the meaning of it, sooo touching. i hum this song a lot. infact i remember every word of it. great choice Mala 👏

and the way you showed abt kaajjal's feelings and her desire for dev, I remembered this one.. thought its bilkul fit for kashish's kaajjal

Jiya jale, jaan jale
Nainon tale dhuaan chale dhuaan chale
Jiya jale, jaan jale
Nainon tale dhuaan chale dhuaan chale
Raat bhar dhuaan chale
Jaanoon na jaanoon na jaanoon na sakhi ri
Jiya jale, jaan jale

Dekhte hai tan mera mann mein chubhti hai nazar
Hont sil jaate unke narm honton se magar
Ginti rehti hoon main apni karvaton ke silsile
Kya karoon, kaise kahoon raat kab kaise dhale
(Jiya jale, jaan jale
Nainon tale dhuaan chale dhuaan chale
Raat bhar dhuaan chale
Jaanoon na jaanoon na jaanoon na sakhi ri)
Jiya jale, jaan jale

Ang ang mein jalti hai dard ki chingaariyaan
Masle phoolon ki mahek mein titliyon ki kyaariyaan
Raat bhar bechaari mehndi pisti hai pairon tale
Kya karoon, kaise kahoon raat kab kaise dhale
Jiya jale, jaan jale
Nainon tale

O my Mala, i could never have thought about this one, "jiya jale jaan jale". really, but now that u have posted the lyrics and i read them, this one is surely sooo apt for kaajjal. the way she feels for dev. this was a very very good one darling. 👏

and kashu, this is my last choice, and its our own appu's song

do dil mil rahe hai, magar chupke chupke

sab ko ho rahee hai, khabar chupke chupke(its b'cause kashish giving updates of their romance😳)

saason mein badee bekaraaree, aankhon mein kaee rat jage

kabhee kahee lag jaaye dil to, kahee fir dil naa lage

apanaa dil main jaraa thaam loo, jaadoo kaa main ise naam doo

jaadoo kar rahaa hai, asar chupke chupke

ayese bhole banakar hain baithhe, jaise koee baat nahee

sabakuchh najar aa rahaa hai, din hain ye raat nahee

kyaa hain kuchh bhee naheen hain agar, hothhon pe hain khaamoshee magar

baate kar rahee hai, najar chupke chupke

kahee aag lagane se pahale, uthhataa hain ayesaa dhuwaan

jaisaa hain idhar kaa najaaraa, waisaa hee udhar kaa samaa

dil mein kaisee kasak see jagee, dono jaane baraabar lagee

dekho to idhar se, udhar chupke chupke

ahhhhhhh another one of my all time fav.

what a soothing song, what soothing melody and what delightful lyrics. simply beautiful.

Hope you like them😛 and sorry in advance for overloading your post... eisaa karungi tho again you may need to open new thread for LRR...what to do , I wanted to share all these songs with you, the magic of your FF is like that... apni mala ko daatnaa math please.. and I promise I'll bring only one song from nxt part.

Array dear i loved the songs and never say u r overloading my post. to be frank, your reply makes my day and brings a smile on my face. please give as many songs as you like and dont worry about the space. its all yours honey ... Your kashu loves your songs and your replies.

love you lot
mala 😛

Me toooo .... lots of Love and gratitude

Kashish

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Originally posted by: india05

Congo Kashish for ur FF going 150 pages !!! 👏 👏 👏 .. You are truly a gifted writer!!! 😳 Beautiful Suhaag aat episode!!! I loved every bit of passion and romance in them !!! Dev and Kaajjal finally one !!! You are truly amazing in your writing God bless you and please continue!!!Lots of 🤗 from me!!!

Awww thanks for the congs shanti ... i am soo glad you all loved the FF so much and appreciated it like the way u did.

Sooo glad to have you back. 😊

Wow Kashish!!tht was wonderful yaar.very well written..i realli enjoyed it yaar..bhot acha tha..i srslii cant explain how much i loved it..n sry foe replyin a bit late!!srslii dev has completed kajjal..its soo sweet jaise kajjal sharmati hai dev se...srslii yaar dev n kajjal r like da best husband n wife da whole world 😳

here's mi shair..hope u lyke it!!

Pyaara sa aik ehsaas hain aap,
Har pal humhare paas hain aap,
Jeenay ki ek aas hain aap,
Mann ka ek vishwaas hain aap,
Shayad is liye kuch khaas hain aap.

Hope u lyke it..continue soon kashsih!!cant wait to read moe 😉 😉

lotssa luv;Hira 🤗 🤗

Originally posted by: hira_786

Wow Kashish!!tht was wonderful yaar.very well written..i realli enjoyed it yaar..bhot acha tha..i srslii cant explain how much i loved it..n sry foe replyin a bit late!!srslii dev has completed kajjal..its soo sweet jaise kajjal sharmati hai dev se...srslii yaar dev n kajjal r like da best husband n wife da whole world 😳

here's mi shair..hope u lyke it!!

Pyaara sa aik ehsaas hain aap,
Har pal humhare paas hain aap,
Jeenay ki ek aas hain aap,
Mann ka ek vishwaas hain aap,
Shayad is liye kuch khaas hain aap.

Hope u lyke it..continue soon kashsih!!cant wait to read moe 😉 😉

lotssa luv;Hira 🤗 🤗

wah wah Hira, kya baat hai. simply loved the shair ... waqaee, DK are sooooo special and they indeed are the bestest couple in the world. i can go on and on talking about them, but for now, i think i'll just say, they are marvelous.

I am soo glad u liked the part and enjoyed it soo much. ahh kaajjal ka sharmana, i love it too. Is sharmanay ka bhi apna hi maza hai, haina?

Hey guys, please don't forget to comment, for your comments gives me the strength to carry on. Thanks

Part 42

"bohat bhook lag rahi hai," he touches his stomach with a hand sweetly, giving her another reason to smile.

"mujhay bhi. Bas 2 minute main ayee." she closes the door behind her.

She came out wearing her night suit looking absolutely stunning. The pink lace of her neckline and almost bare shoulders made her seductively beautiful. Dev looked at her for a few seconds – lost in her newly explored beauty, when she smiled shyly.

"kya dekh rahay ho?"

"lagta hai aaj main tumhain pehli baar dekh raha hoon Kaajjal," his husky voice pours honey in her ears and she bends her eyes instantly – blushing along. "You are beautiful, magar aaj, you look even more beautiful. janay kya baat hai?." he voice fills with emotions and she looks at him,

"tumharay pyar ka asr hai." she says and a broad smile touches his lips. He knows this conversation can very well lead to bed rather than dinner and so he moves forward and holds her hand.

"chalo, lets have food." And she willingly follows him.

"Dev, why are we going to the terrace? kitchen to neechay hai." Kaajjal asks surprisingly when he moves towards the terrace. He had warmed the food while she was asleep and had arranged it in the terrace, which was sooo nicely decorated for a perfect romantic dinner.

"chalo tu sahi," he says and she keep following. They enter the terrace and she sees the terrace table and chairs arranged near the wooden swing. The table was arranged with plates and heatproof containers of food. Two candles were lit on the table and a beautiful red rose stood high and proud in a sleek crystal vase. Kaajjal looked at the table and back to him,

"Devvv …" her expressions were awed,

"khana tu tum nay bana hi liya tha, main nay socha laga main daita hoon." His lips twist in a beautiful smile and he bends a little forward to guide her to the chair and have her sit. He takes his place and she starts to serve him. All of a sudden, her love for him shifted for deep desire to deep caring.

They enjoyed some quiet moments of feeding, for both were very hungry.

"tum betho main aati hoon," she says after finishing her food.

"kahan ja rahi ho,"

"tumhari man pasand cheez lainay," she starts walking towards the door, when Dev's sweet and melodious voice touched her ears and held her feet. "abhi na jao chor kay,

kay dil abhi bhara nahi." He sings sweetly and she turns towards him in an instant. A smile lingering on her lips,

"Dev …" she interrupts his singing, though she wished she would just sit quietly and hear him sing. His voice was sooo heart-warming. "Main tumharay liyay gajar ka halwa lainay ja rahi hoon kitchen say." She says and turns around to go, but he gets up his seat,

"abhi abhi to aayi ho
bahaar ban ke chaayi ho
Hawa zara mahek to le
nazar zara bahek to le
Yeh shaam dhal to le zara
yeh dil sambhal to le zara
main thodi der jee to loon
nashe ke ghoont pi to loon
abhi to kuch kaha nahi
abhi to kuch suna nahi

abhi na jao chor kay,

kay dil abhi bhara nahi"

She is still turned towards the door, trying to go but his voice held her right there. He comes and stands behind her, without touching her, just pouring the honey of his melodious voice in her ears. He finishes the antara when she turns around immediately and lands in his arms. With her arms around his neck and his around her waist, they stayed there for quiet a few moments. Candle light dinner, full moon, white roses, and on top of that, Dev's voice and his presence – Kaajjal was not in control any more. The touch of his hands on her lace shirt was suggestive and passionate.

"choro Dev, main halwa lati hoon," she says in a weak voice,

"Nahi," her heart stops at his husky voice and felt her body heated at his passionate whisper, "tum us say zyada meethi ho." He presses his fingers in her lace, almost touching her skin. His lips move towards her neck and his presses them lovingly. The warm touch of his tongue melted her inside like chocolate and she grabs his shoulders tighter for support.

"tumhain yaad hai Kaajjal, jab hum last time yahan aayay thay aur is terrace pay bethay truth and dare khel rahay thay." He says with his face still buried in her neck. His breath fanning not only her skin but her senses.

"kaisay bhool sakti hoon," she manages her words,

"us raat main nay kitna chaha kay tumhain apni baahon main lay loon. Tumhain bataoon kay main tum say itna pyar karta hoon." He holds her tightly at this, as if he might lose her again. She felt his arms wrapping around her tightly again and sense his feelings.

"aik baar keh kay tu dekhtay Dev, tumhari Kaajjal tumharay liyay sari duniya ko chor daity." She tightens her arms around his neck tightly and makes him feel her love and passion. Dev feels her love and think about the time when dhruv said to him that night, 'Kaajjal Raichand.' How had he cried that night. How had he wished he could hold Kaajjal and run somewhere far away, where no one could even see them. Kaajjal immediately senses his distress and tries to step back to look in his eyes,

"Dev …" she manages to get a glimpse and he drops his eyes, for he was too vulnerable at the moment. She cups his face and lifts it up, "jo beet gaya, ussay bhool jao." She looks deep in his eyes, "main kal bhi tumharai thi, aaj bhi tumhari hoon, aur anay walay hark al main tumhari rahoon gi …. Sirf tumhari. Dev ki Kaajjal." she smiles and succeeds in bringing him out of the thought of that miserable moment. He smiles and touched her nose with his finger gently,

"Love you." He says lovingly and she reciprocates lovingly.

"love you too."

"halwa aur baqi sab baad main, abhi aao meray saath betho. Bas meray paas." He holds her hand and walks her to the swing. They sit on the swing and Dev gently rocks it with his feet. she puts her head on his shoulder and closes her eyes. It was a long moment of just feeling each other's presence and love when Kaajjal spoke softly,

"yeh sab aik khawab sa lagta hai Dev. Kabhi kabhi dil karta hai, sab kuch chor kay bas yaheen reh jaain." Dev listens to her intently, gently putting his arm around her shoulder.

"Sahi keh rahi ho." He says quietly.

"Dev, Karan aur Ameesha aisa kun kar rahay hain?" she sounds her thoughts. "specially Karan bhaiyya. Koee apni hi mom aur bhai ko kuin marna chahay ga?" Kaajjal voices her confused thoughts and Dev engages in these thoughts as well.

"kaash main janta Kaajjal. Sometimes I wish I could hold Karan's collar and ask him why????" His voice sounded agonized.

"Had I not heard Karan, Ameesha and Payal's conversation that night, I would have never believed someone can go to this extent." She pauses for a second, as if trying to make sense and then her words voiced fear and concern. "wo kuch bhi kar saktay hain Dev. Kuch bhi. I am really afraid."

"tum paraishan na ho Kaajjal. Main hoon na tumharay paas." Dev senses her fear and tightens his hold on her shoulder. "but before anything, we have to promise to each other that we will always trust each other. They are following the divide and conquer strategy Kaajjal. wo hamaray darmiyaan daraar lana chahtay hain, because they know, if we are together we are strong – stronger then them."

"tum sahi keh rahay ho Dev." she shivers in his arms. "After what they did that night, I can see how badly they want us separated."

"and this is exactly how we will play their game with them." Dev's voice brightens all of a sudden.

"kya matlab." Kaajjal asks

"We will show them that you still think I was with Payal and that you still hate me." he is still saying when Kaajjal's innocent words brings a smile on his lips,

"magar, I love you Dev."

"oho jaan, I know you love me and I love you, magar we have to make them believe their plan has worked. This way someone amongst them will definitely make a mistake and that will be our cashing point." he devises his plan. "As you said, you heard Ameesha saying, they have to wait till your hatred for me increases and you leave the house. So, we will give them that."

"hmmm .. sounds interesting. Haan Dev, in logon say deal karnay ka yehi tareeqa sahi hai." Kaajjal smiles and look in his eyes, "boahat hue Karan and Ameesha ki baatain. Ab bas." An instant flare of desire burns in his eyes and he touches her chin with his finger, lifting it up,

"Right. I don't think I want to talk anymore." He smiles seductively and gently bends forward pressing his lips on her right cheek. Lifting his head and catching her eyes again, he bends forwards and kisses on her left cheek and then her nose and her eyes lids. He lifts his head again and this time their eyes meet with a new passion and need. His eyes rest on her lips and hers rest on his. They lift their eyes back to look at each other one more time before shifting back to their lips, only to claim what belonged to each other. Their lips touched and explored each other even more passionately this time while their hands touched their heated bodies everywhere.

After a long moment of exploration, Dev gently laid her back on the mattress of the swing. With their eyes locked, he slides his hand down to her stomach and gently caresses her there. She closes her eyes with the mere feeling of pleasure. His hands move up from her stomach, sliding over her ribs and finally resting on her heart. This touch, this warmth, this feeling, this sensation, everything was driving her insane. She closes her eyes and he presses his hand even harder, leaving her with no other option but to beg for more. He shifts his lips to where his hands were a moment ago. And this time the havoc his lips played with her senses were more than what she had bargained for. She never knew this pleasure existed. His head bent on her heart, rising and falling with her uneven breathing, mesmerizing her with every kiss, and every nibble. She is completely awed, unable to understand her own state of mind and body. Her stomach ached with desire, her muscles ached for his touch, and her body longed for the fulfillment only Dev could give her. She knew she could not take this any more; she just could not; and his name came on her lips – requesting and begging …

"Devvvv ……" she calls out with closed eyes and Dev toooo engrossed in his passion play.

"Devvvv ….. Devvvv ….." she continues and he lifts his head to look at her. Too overwhelmed to speak, the yearning on his face was much evident. Feeling his heated gaze on her, she opens her eyes and looks at him. She wished to beg him, plead him, implore him to make her his now, here and now but all of a sudden shyness engulfs her. Her lips seal and she just keeps looking at him.

"I love you …." She finds refuge in this. However, her eyes had conveyed here every message. Dev knew exactly what she was feeling for he shared the same craziness and longing.

Episode Ends ….

Kashish dear you have blown me away once again with your amazingly passionate narrative of Dev and Kaajjal and the love and desire they share for one another. 👏 I loved how Dev had laid the table on the terrace for Kaajjal - sooo romantic...I must confess I was sighing dreamily while reading that part. 😍 😍 And I like the sound of the plan they have come up with to fool Karan, Ameesha and Payal, and I am sure along the way they will have a lot of fun playing it. 😉

Thanks once again Kashish for sharing these beautiful moments with us. You are simply wonderful!! 👏

Anu

Kashish I was just wondering when u r continuing with your next part..and here u r back with a bang 😳

Mindblowing and Fantabulous 👏 /..DK and their passionate tale is something which I never get bored of reading 😳 ...It simply takes u into an alltogether different world of never ending passion and desire 😳 😳 ..

Kaajjal in a pink nighty and Dev's passionate eyes wanting to capture the beauty of Kaajjal was really very well narrated by u Kashish 👏 😳 ..Also I loved their entire Dinner scenario with Dev singing that beautiful classic old song 😳 😳

Good that both DK will b together involved in a plan to checkmate those Karan-Ameesha-Payal Trimurti Company 😡 😃

Once again Kashish beautifully and aesthetically described part 👏 ..Do continue soon 😳

Kashish......yur brillant........wow.....Sorry i dont get to comment regualurly.....to busy in my personal life..that i dont even get time to spend on the computer these dayz....This is better than the story that is playing in kaajjal rite now! 😳

kashuuu darling... i was wondering where u are lost yaar!!

and wow.. U ARE BACK WITH A BANGGG INDEED!!!

i really missed this yaar!!

it was just outstanding!! really... i am totally speechless!!

each and every time u surprise all of us with more passion!!!

uve got talent girl!!!!

hats off to u!! 👏

i cant wait to see how dev and kaajjal will deal with karan, ameesha, and payal!!
ab aega mazaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

hehehe..

lots of love, kaj

Originally posted by: nimmo20

Kashish dear you have blown me away once again with your amazingly passionate narrative of Dev and Kaajjal and the love and desire they share for one another. 👏 I loved how Dev had laid the table on the terrace for Kaajjal - sooo romantic...I must confess I was sighing dreamily while reading that part. 😍 😍 And I like the sound of the plan they have come up with to fool Karan, Ameesha and Payal, and I am sure along the way they will have a lot of fun playing it. 😉

Thanks once again Kashish for sharing these beautiful moments with us. You are simply wonderful!! 👏

Anu

hehehhe yes Anu, they will surely enjoy their plan. but they have to remin quiet reserve in front of KAP. but that will also be a lot of fun.

i am soo glad u liked it dear. u r a darling urself. 😊