Originally posted by: Unbeknown
What a great OS lana 👏
Finally i get to read the full blown version of your shayaris. All you guys here have flair with words.
Subtlety with which they both expressed each other is His explanation, him being close to her, using binoculars as object is worth praising. How well you've used an inanimate object to connect to feelings 😊 Even use of diamond necklace to express his love for Heera is praise worthy. Her jealousy, his mischief, their possessiveness, his advice on change in perspective to view things are really a treat to read.
Above mentioned lines from the OS are the ones I liked the most. Thank you so much for this, Lana.
Thanks Aparna!! 😃 Hope your research went well yesterday, hopefully in all peace and quiet?! Are you doing your postdoc in University of Chicago? On what subject? All the best for it! 👍🏼 👍🏼
Thank you for liking the OS. And you are absolutely correct in saying this house is a house of talent! Everyone here is amazing with their analysis, in their creativity, their unique style in writing, their poetry...you name it and you will find it here. 😃 The day passes in a jiffy when there is a full house not to mention the laughter-thon we have!! 😆
I am happy you liked the mundane effort of my OS! Thank you! 😃
I had a good Thanksgiving with friends. Are you utilising the Black Friday to do some shopping for upcoming India trip? 😃
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