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She knew she was caught and yet she was not embarrassed but was happy enough to let him know that she enjoyed her rendezvous in his room middle of the night on his bed, on his pillow, under his blanket yearning for the warmth that only he could give, the cosiness that he could provide, the passion that he could offer, the Love that only he could bestow on her and the heavenly abode of his arms encircling her making her reside on top of his heart, that only he could proffer!'Ai Khuda...why do you always do this'? Before entering the room he turned to look back at her one last time and he could see an uninhibited gorgeous smile playing on her lips coming his way that lifted his spirits thinking she is happy and content for some time, let her be!! "Ya Allah, keep her smiling like this forever...with me at her side'', he added that as an afterthought and with a satisfied sigh entered his room!
What a great OS lana 👏
Finally i get to read the full blown version of your shayaris. All you guys here have flair with words.
Subtlety with which they both expressed each other is His explanation, him being close to her, using binoculars as object is worth praising. How well you've used an inanimate object to connect to feelings 😊 Even use of diamond necklace to express his love for Heera is praise worthy. Her jealousy, his mischief, their possessiveness, his advice on change in perspective to view things are really a treat to read.
Above mentioned lines from the OS are the ones I liked the most. Thank you so much for this, Lana.
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