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Posted: 7 years ago
#81
Amazin chappy... It was soo emotional indeed... Nd i hv one doubt.. Does jalal really lv jo nd consider her his wife or its only fr fulfilling his physical needs... Hp its d positive way... Cz i cnt see my sweet caring ja ds way.. In d previous chappy lk he said... Dose bfull wrds i thought he is changed...but how cd he.. If jo was comfortable dn it wd be a different thing... Bd moreover ja is using d word rape... Had he really been into dat way,, the good one he ws hv said ds relation smthng else... Not to taint it using dat word... I feel sooo bad fr jo... Is ds lv or wat...
But ur commendable... D way u hv potrayed each nd every character.. Its wS sooo enhancing... Lv u soru baby... Fr such an amazing chappy...
Thnku fr pm nd update asap.. Waiting... 👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
#82
Amazing update
Poor jodha
Jalal us so cruel
Eagerly waiting for next chapter
Thanks for pm
Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#83
actually soru ..i dont know what to say ..i feel so much pain ..i cant even describe ...i even started to doubt this story will have a happy ending or even any happiness for jodha ..will it ??? i hope u pm me with the answer ..is this story have happy ending ..will jalal be human and regret his deeds????
#anyway based as its true story and your own imagination ..u have the right to write it bear ur wish and we will love every writing from u dear 😳
#actually indifference with most of the buddies opinion i am not confused with jalal character at all ...!!!
i understand his behavior and they are so rational for such an animal that degraded from every human emotion ...i still dont know the reason for revenge but i dont think there is an excuse for it ..!
#what i dont understand is jodha behavior ..i dont understand how she can accept jalal and make for him food and care for his opinion as well ...
rape victims were once my study ...i saw many types of them and talked to some as well ..believe me jodha is something i never met before
at first i though jodha will accept jalal so called love after first rape as a string of hope and out of shame from what happened to her and blaming herself and all that which i strongly dont agree with it ..never it was the victum fault ..never 😭
but when jalal raped her again and she made to him his favorite food next !!!!!!! ? .i think the poor girl has lost or her sense and broke completely she need medical help asap ..ofcourse she loved him and trusted him and he betrayed her not once but three times and multi times 😭 why he is doing this soru ..what is wrong with him 😭?????? he never love her nor know love😭
jalal raped her all night🥺 ???!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and she still dont scream nor complain to some one ????? i think she will do an action 😉..i am sure she will find a strength after all this injustice in next chappy😉
..she should go to the police ...she should tell her parents ...she should beat him with her bear hand😡 ...she should save herself to her last breath😡 !!!!!! he kills her every night a slow painful death ..he should be punished 😡
i never in my life hated a jalal like i hate this one and knowing the future of the story is only more painful ..jodha will marry him and they will have a girl and he will never show her one good day !!!!!
i hope after having a girl he will know what it means !!!!!! yet i dont think i will never accept him 😡
god how i hope from bottom that jodha tell the police on him and he should stay in jail for years and learn a lesson
jodha should have some strength , she should stand for herself
# ..you write very well 👏really i am so proud of you and love all your work but jodha suffers so much and i cant bear her pain ..please , please make jodha take a good action , its your imagination dear ...yet u are talking about a very important case..millions of girls suffer so much from this sinful act
give them a good role model
a strong girl who wont bend her head and will fight for her rights and no one can do better than u soru
thanks for the chapter dear and i love u ❤️
you really write very well and your unique bold concept i like the most 🤗
thanks for pm and please update next very soon
i cant wait to know what happens next
by the way how can jodha dont have any visible wounds or bruising as every one fight a rape ?????? and how moti dont notice ???? please clear that dear..did she fight jalal or did she become shocked that she lay lifeless and tearing😭????
loveee u🤗

Edited by lolo91 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#84
Jallu 😡 😡
Update next chappy soon..
nd Thanks for pm soru..
Edited by Sony.S - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#85
my god jaanu this man is I think worst fiance ever and he will never change bechaari Jo i really cant imagine that poor girl bear sooo much in this age and he cant even think once before raping her again and again i hate him .. continue soon jaanu cause day by day its began to damn intresting sooo plzzz update soon .. and thank you thank you sooo much jaanu for pm me and sooo sorry for late sissy..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#86
Nice chapter Soru😃
I hate jalal😡
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Posted: 7 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: Kavya_P



SORU PLZ BATA DONA YAAR
MUJHSE USKI DARD DEKI NAHI JAATI
JAB TUNE FIRST TIME CS POST KIYA THA MERA DIL THO DHAKNA BAND HOGAYA
SIRF EK KI KHYAL THI JO KI KYA HALAT HOGI ENDING MEIN
SO PLZ BATAO NA SISSY

Hey sissy nhi bata sakti sachi phir maza nhi ayega aapko 😃
Edited by sorathsheikh - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: misty22

A biiig congooo honey... May we continue ds journey more n more... Lv u... Nd update asap... 😳😉

Hey Thank you sissy 😃 Hehe InshaAllah love you too i'll update soon InshaAllah
Edited by sorathsheikh - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: shyana3

Congratulations for new thread dear

Thank you sissy 😃
Edited by sorathsheikh - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: Naazrt



wa-alaikum as-salam jaanu now update fatafat hehe

Hey , I'll update soon 😃
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