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Originally posted by: Linsie

Originally posted by: Fairy...

Awsome update

loved it

pls update soon...:)

Originally posted by: makunoor

NC update

Plzz update the next chappyy took

Eagerly waiting for it

Originally posted by: aina111

Update

Originally posted by: shyana3

Amazing update

Poor jodha

How can jalal say such things to jodha

Update soon

Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: zynahsiddiqi956

first of all well penned..
I have read both the threads in one go..at beginning d story was nice but as I proceed I Jst felt speechless..!! I was fully engrossed in the story dt I was imagining myself at the site..what shall I say about Jo( as u said its a real story) her condition was worse. it was heart wrinching one..I cried reading her state both mentally and physically.. she is living like a lifeless doll ,neither she can cry her heart out loudly nor can she complain..in this story only jodha Moti n bharmal were nice people and d rest I hate ..even jalal. how can he be so cheap , I just felt disgusting even to take his name .I don't knw whether its d effect of black magic on him or not but I just hate himm..(in this story). both the mother's are so disgusting in themselves.
n jo received d biggest shock from d person she loved..seriously..!! how can jalal do dt ..after reading those things which jalal did with jodha m scared of stepping out from my house.. this reminded me of story where a relative does such crime to a girl..can't even trust relatives ..
but seriously u have superbly scripted it..hats off to those victims who had gone through such pain and depression in their life and still stood up for themselves..and their families who supported them.. a big salute to those.. at last fantastic work soru dear..

Originally posted by: zynahsiddiqi956

soru dear as a writer Dnt take my comment personally about hatred towards jalal
coz u had scripted it very well that I have imagined Jo as my best friend .. n can't see her like that. .it was nice chappy dear..

Originally posted by: zynahsiddiqi956

thanks for PM
n next tym do PM without forgetting..

Originally posted by: Heatsha8176

Welcome back sis
Looking forward to story continuing
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

Originally posted by: Dhrubata

Bohhot accha story hai 😳 😳 👏