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Originally posted by: duhasaad

very sad Chappy

I hate Jalal so much

he raped her again and again

I thought he had changed but this chapter made me shock

poor Jodha she cann't do anything

BTW you always forget to give us a small precap

waiting for next Chappy sissy

and way more ❤️

Thanks sis InshaAllah jaldi dungi

Originally posted by: misty22

Amazin chappy... It was soo emotional indeed... Nd i hv one doubt.. Does jalal really lv jo nd consider her his wife or its only fr fulfilling his physical needs... Hp its d positive way... Cz i cnt see my sweet caring ja ds way.. In d previous chappy lk he said... Dose bfull wrds i thought he is changed...but how cd he.. If jo was comfortable dn it wd be a different thing... Bd moreover ja is using d word rape... Had he really been into dat way,, the good one he ws hv said ds relation smthng else... Not to taint it using dat word... I feel sooo bad fr jo... Is ds lv or wat...

But ur commendable... D way u hv potrayed each nd every character.. Its wS sooo enhancing... Lv u soru baby... Fr such an amazing chappy...

Thnku fr pm nd update asap.. Waiting... 👏

Thanks sis sis you're sweetie pie thanks to you that you have felt for jodha its real story of someone

Originally posted by: shyana3

Amazing update

Poor jodha

Jalal us so cruel

Eagerly waiting for next chapter

Thanks for pm

Update soon

Thanks sis my sweet sissy jaldi update dungi pleasure

Originally posted by: lolo91

actually soru ..i dont know what to say ..i feel so much pain ..i cant even describe ...i even started to doubt this story will have a happy ending or even any happiness for jodha ..will it ??? i hope u pm me with the answer ..is this story have happy ending ..will jalal be human and regret his deeds????

#anyway based as its true story and your own imagination ..u have the right to write it bear ur wish and we will love every writing from u dear 😳

#actually indifference with most of the buddies opinion i am not confused with jalal character at all ...!!!

i understand his behavior and they are so rational for such an animal that degraded from every human emotion ...i still dont know the reason for revenge but i dont think there is an excuse for it ..!

#what i dont understand is jodha behavior ..i dont understand how she can accept jalal and make for him food and care for his opinion as well ...

rape victims were once my study ...i saw many types of them and talked to some as well ..believe me jodha is something i never met before

at first i though jodha will accept jalal so called love after first rape as a string of hope and out of shame from what happened to her and blaming herself and all that which i strongly dont agree with it ..never it was the victum fault ..never 😭

but when jalal raped her again and she made to him his favorite food next !!!!!!! ? .i think the poor girl has lost or her sense and broke completely she need medical help asap ..ofcourse she loved him and trusted him and he betrayed her not once but three times and multi times 😭 why he is doing this soru ..what is wrong with him 😭?????? he never love her nor know love😭

jalal raped her all night🥺 ???!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and she still dont scream nor complain to some one ????? i think she will do an action 😉..i am sure she will find a strength after all this injustice in next chappy😉

..she should go to the police ...she should tell her parents ...she should beat him with her bear hand😡 ...she should save herself to her last breath😡 !!!!!! he kills her every night a slow painful death ..he should be punished 😡

i never in my life hated a jalal like i hate this one and knowing the future of the story is only more painful ..jodha will marry him and they will have a girl and he will never show her one good day !!!!!
i hope after having a girl he will know what it means !!!!!! yet i dont think i will never accept him 😡

god how i hope from bottom that jodha tell the police on him and he should stay in jail for years and learn a lesson

jodha should have some strength , she should stand for herself

# ..you write very well 👏really i am so proud of you and love all your work but jodha suffers so much and i cant bear her pain ..please , please make jodha take a good action , its your imagination dear ...yet u are talking about a very important case..millions of girls suffer so much from this sinful act

give them a good role model

a strong girl who wont bend her head and will fight for her rights and no one can do better than u soru

thanks for the chapter dear and i love u ❤️

you really write very well and your unique bold concept i like the most 🤗

thanks for pm and please update next very soon

i cant wait to know what happens next

by the way how can jodha dont have any visible wounds or bruising as every one fight a rape ?????? and how moti dont notice ???? please clear that dear..did she fight jalal or did she become shocked that she lay lifeless and tearing😭????

loveee u🤗

First of all a very big thanks to you sis

Maybe she will get happiness ... maybe this story will have a very happy ending ... Maybe a bit latter he will regret ... You're so sweet sis ... Jodha didn't have another choice sis ... ❤️ maybe jodha will make him good person ... love you you read story from heart common people won't understand this story but you're special ... Jodha is so alone and she isn't losing hope she can fulfill every relation she wants jallu's sath jodha's parents n jallu's parents aren't understanding now jodha is so alone but still she haven't lose hope she's trying let's see what will happen n sis i have told you this story is a real story of someone this story is of my neighbor

Originally posted by: Sony.S

Jallu 😡 😡
Update next chappy soon..
nd Thanks for pm soru..

Pleasure sis

Originally posted by: Naazrt

my god jaanu this man is I think worst fiance ever and he will never change bechaari Jo i really cant imagine that poor girl bear sooo much in this age and he cant even think once before raping her again and again i hate him .. continue soon jaanu cause day by day its began to damn intresting sooo plzzz update soon .. and thank you thank you sooo much jaanu for pm me and sooo sorry for late sissy..

My sweet sis thanks i felt so happy after reading your comment you read jodha understand her this story is of my neighbor totally true jodha is so alone nor parents and neither jallu's parents understand her jallu is a man nothing is to him jodha is a woman who's life is destroyed fully how much in a strong way she's walking to fulfill relation cause she don't have any option if once woman's life is destroyed then it won't repair again i'll update soon

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Nice chapter Soru😃

I hate jalal😡

Thanks sis

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Nice chapter Soru😃

I hate jalal😡

Thanks sis sis you have only seen jalal in one appearance doesn't you hope to see him in other appearance itni jaldi himat mat haro try to understand

Originally posted by: ParijatDeewani

Sucha horrible thing

I knew Jalal hadn't change and Jodha was really stupid to trust him.How can he do this.He's sucha an animal

Goshhh I just hate this Jalal.Hope Jodha gets her lesson now and will not trust him hence

Feeling so bad for Jodha yaar and this Jalal feel like arghhh😡

Jodha doesn't have another option nobody is trying to understand what's jallu and jodha's compulsions only jalal has became rude only this everyone see see how jodha will fulfill every relation and jallu

Originally posted by: Aaradhya01234

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