finally, you read it madam ... hope you like next one as well :)
Originally posted by: MayaFruitbae
Beautiful story..
Anum and Sohini and Fero too...
Vira, you wrote the dialogues exactly like Anum and Sohini speaks..
# tags was so cool.
Waiting for the marriage to stop, confession... and their story
Beautifully written and a long one... 🥰😍
Finally read it .....
Uff...
What a rollercoaster....
What a rollercoaster....
This chapter for me is the helplessness of love
A point when Whatsoever you may do seems insignificant and meaningless; it is never enough. ...The way you captured that helplessness is magic
Aniruddh's silent screams, his heart that is pounding to claim Jhanak as a part of his life,yet past and baggages is not something that leaves you easily..such a deep yet intricate portrayal...
How beautiful it is to see Jhanak among her friends...and how beautifully you have introduced our beautiful ladies Fero di, Sohini di and Anum di...So beautiful kind hearted women offering non-judgmental and compassionate ears to her.. I wish Jhanak in our show had a friendship like this... Women uplifting women.. terrific portrayal of sisterhood...
Cool hastag....
....
Beautifully written Vira di...
Sorry I have been a little busy...
Hence took some time to read it....but if the writing is so beautiful....I would not mind..
Thank you
Helplessness indeed... helpless to surrender at the end to your feelings
I really wanted Jhanak to be empowered by other women. In itv stories, I have found the portrayal of women very inaccurate. Especially Jhanak became an object of jealousy or desire whenever she came across a new human being, be that man or a woman! You caught that right, its a sisterhood!
No sorrys!
as always i love to read your summary 😘
Originally posted by: asmitamohanty
Uff...
What a rollercoaster....
What a rollercoaster....
This chapter for me is the helplessness of love
A point when Whatsoever you may do seems insignificant and meaningless; it is never enough. ...The way you captured that helplessness is magic
Aniruddh's silent screams, his heart that is pounding to claim Jhanak as a part of his life,yet past and baggages is not something that leaves you easily..such a deep yet intricate portrayal...
How beautiful it is to see Jhanak among her friends...and how beautifully you have introduced our beautiful ladies Fero di, Sohini di and Anum di...So beautiful kind hearted women offering non-judgmental and compassionate ears to her.. I wish Jhanak in our show had a friendship like this... Women uplifting women.. terrific portrayal of sisterhood...
Cool hastag....
Beautifully written Vira di...
Sorry I have been a little busy...
Hence took some time to read it....but if the writing is so beautiful....I would not mind..
Thank you
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