The Shoot- RuNak OS - Page 2

Originally posted by: Anusha16

My first one was a 5 page document on the word. This one came to a huge 11. Even I was surprised I wrote so much lol. No wonder it took time to complete, edit and proofread! Glad to know you liked it!

I wish they explored more on Ani's attraction/monologues about the different avatars on the shoot. But nope, the cut shot the bridal attire and Bharatnatyam one which was the best of the four. Especially the bridal one... Hayee Hiba looked so innocent and beautiful in that. I wanted something akin to the pink saree scene! It was simple, and elegant, and displayed her beauty so fine. She would have looked like Ani's type. I want to see and imagine Ani's expression of pure physical attraction to her. I get that the attraction between them is more than skin-deep. But they have this insane chemistry of pure sensuality and lust that is super under-explored. These creatives are talented enough to give an episode like the one before yesterday! They can tastefully show more of the sensuality!

So true , since they are in the industry for long time they might not have issues with intimate scenes too.

I loved the bridal one .She was looking so pretty in that dress.

But they just finished it very very soon . Only they have episodes and episodes to show the family insults ...

Amazing!!!! What’s the reason there isn’t more 😭😭? What’s the reason ! (In cardi b’s voice 🤣🤣🤣)

Originally posted by: Paulaonohi

Amazing!!!! What’s the reason there isn’t more 😭😭? What’s the reason ! (In cardi b’s voice 🤣🤣🤣)

Sorry lol, I thought to leave it open-ended for your imagination! I am writing another more emotional OS that can probably serve as a sequel of sorts to this, probably. 

Do let me know if there is any scope for improvement! I tried to make sure they were as close to the OG characteristics as possible. Not sure if I managed to accomplish that here!

Thank you Anushaji, it was a good weekend read. Felt so good relaxing n reading a abt Ani Jhanak and the Rahul’s 💕

Loved the beautiful pictures too and Jhanak’s costumes.

Ani is white shirt and blue jeans rocked.

Please do write more….thank you!

Originally posted by: Starship1

Thank you Anushaji, it was a good weekend read. Felt so good relaxing n reading a abt Ani Jhanak and the Rahul’s 💕

Loved the beautiful pictures too and Jhanak’s costumes.

Ani is white shirt and blue jeans rocked.

Please do write more….thank you!

Sure Starji, I am a slow writer but hope to give one OS every ten days or so with the ideas I have. Definitely will have mentions of Rahul at least a little bit in each of them.

Let me know if there is any way I can improve my writing!

Will read and comment Anushaji

Edited:-

Wonderful scene…well jealous and hopelessly possessive Ani Vs determined Jhanak..

Well Ani’s lies doesn’t work on Jhanak.. she knows inside out of him .. is also affected by the proximity but is still determined to keep him away…

the proximity scene gave me more vibe of my other favorite couple because Runak , in the show, are yet to reach that point… but in our fiction we can make them reach the chemistry that we wish…you brought it beautifully…

Originally posted by: tellyme

Will read and comment Anushaji

Edited:-

Wonderful scene…well jealous and hopelessly possessive Ani Vs determined Jhanak..

Well Ani’s lies doesn’t work on Jhanak.. she knows inside out of him .. is also affected by the proximity but is still determined to keep him away…

the proximity scene gave me more vibe of my other favorite couple because Runak , in the show, are yet to reach that point… but in our fiction we can make them reach the chemistry that we wish…you brought it beautifully…

Writing emotions has always been tough for me. So hopefully I gave justice to what Ani and Jhanak are going through right now. Happy to know I made you remember Maneet lol! They were always the more physically hands-on couple or at least that lust and sensuality was oozing there...

Please let me know if there is anything I need to improve on!

At the risk of sounding like a broken record - that was brilliant!

Once again I could see everything play out. I could imagine everything! Especially Ani's annoyance at Rahul, Ani's other self observing this and being smug about it

The conversations of Ani and his other self are my FAVORITE! You did that so so well in this story, I was grinning whenever Ani's other self taunted Ani - that was amazing!

Ouch on Jhanak deciding to give it back to Ani where it would hurt, but that whole scene was written so well, Ani pinning her, Jhanak pushing him - the anger, the angst - the words you chose to depict Jhanak's state of mind was brilliant

This one you should definitely do a follow up pc on - a monologue of sorts of both of them introspecting their feelings for eo maybe. Just an idea, but if you want to leave it like that, that's also ok.

That was a wonderful read, thank you for writing!

This was a great OS. I loved it. Jealous scenes are always a treat, especially if it's the ML.

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