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Posted: 10 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: --Shamoo--

nice update

waiting for next part
plzz read my ff and then pm me ur ideas
thank u
ur sweet friend
shamma

sure shamma i always read yours and priams ff so i will surely try to share my ideas with you
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: dharamluvgiaa

amazing update. Loved it

thankyou πŸ˜ƒ will write the 3rd part on monday
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thanks zoya πŸ˜ƒ will write the 3rd update on monday
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thanks πŸ˜ƒ will write the part 3 on monday
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
awesome both part just loved itπŸ‘πŸ‘
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rishabgosavi

awesome both part just loved itπŸ‘πŸ‘

thanks πŸ˜ƒ will post the 3rd part on monday
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27

all my friends not sure mabe come on monday so writing part -3 today

pls comment πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ
your friend mena
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28

Part - 3

jeanie ka swayamvar

Continue ...

Jeanie is crying in her bottle all alone her juju is also worried but happy that jeanie will get a good juju better than him he tires to sleep but he cant

He remembers how jeanie use to sing for him to make him sleep

in the morning he see's jeanie's bottle and slowly holds it and says mitram I will miss you and jeanie appears at the back

he was very sure that he had started missing jeanie aldredy !!! jeanie said juju "I will run away now ", juju says "Jeanie I know you don't want it but its for your own good

jwala appears and says " Come on Di !!! see your juju is ready then, jeanie shout "

" NO MEANS NO !!! " juju replies "Jwala put jeanie into the bottle with your magic NOW!!

Jwala puts jeanie into the bottle and closes it

Vicky goes to office as he could not stop him from telling jeanie " I LOVE YOU " but he walks

IN THE EVENING

Juju comes back and jwala meets him with jeanie's uncle , he asks about jeanie ,jwala says " Uncle actually jeanie di is locked in this bottle we have locked her !!! , he says " Bring her out NOW !!! " and as they bring her out a new story is reviveled !!!

A letter which says :

Juju I really love you !!! I cant think of marring another jin when I think of you

You know I am sorry I have gone

I am with jhonny don't worry about me

Handle the situation

"MERE BATHO KE KING"

juju I will give you a clue to reach me if you really love me I'm sure you will come

you'r mitram

Jeanie

Clue : where a story started , where a story ended , where a life begun of 2 people

where love at first sight !! where I can

go all the time and never stop guess who am I ?

end of part 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
very nice update😊
Edited by susantogiaa - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
gr8 update. Excited for coming parts
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