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In Chandra Nagri

Surath burns letter from Sumukhi.

Rajguru – Chandra Nagri's throne is empty. Both the throne and the people have become without any master.

Surath – When heart is pained because of losing my own. When life has no meaning, then how can I see any duty?

Rajguru – Without duty, the world cannot move on. Water quenches thirst because that is its duty. If it does not quench thirst, then its importance will reduce. Sun's duty is to give light. If Sun does not give light, then Sun will not be Sun. Time demands that you become king at the earliest.

In Vijay Durg

Sumukhi is praying to Durga

Sumukhi – Ma, you know everything. Today Surath is becoming king. But there is nobody who can bless me. You become his mother and bless him so that he is always happy.

Queen Vijaya comes there.

Vijaya – For whom is my daughter praying? Is it prince Surath?

Sumukhi – Today he is going to become king. I was praying to Ma Durga to bless him. Once he becomes king, then his responsibilities will increase. He will have to take many tough decisions for the sake of justice. I was praying to Ma to always give him success.

Vijaya – If Surath becomes king, then you will become queen.

Sumukhi happily hugs Vijaya.

Vijaya thinks – If Sumukhi comes to know that the doors of Vijay Durg were closed for king Chandramukh, then what will happen? May Ma Durga's blessings be always with Sumukhi.

In Chandra Nagri

Rituals to make Surath king are performed.

Rajguru – May the throne enhance your honor. Only that king is successful who rules by braking the shackles of relations. One who is tied in the chain of relations thinks only about himself and not about the subject. Remember that cheaters are biggest enemies of a state.

Surath is in his room. He is angry because Vijay Durg's doors were closed for his father. Because of this, his father died and out of grief, his mother also died.

In Vijay Durg

A dasi – Princess, king Surath's messenger is here. He is in guest room?

Sumukhi – Why is he there? He must have brought message for me.

Dasi – No, he has come to meet the king.

Sumukhi is happy to hear this. (Obviously she is thinking that the message is regarding Sumukhi's marriage with Surath.)

The messenger comes to king Garud Dhwaj. Sumukhi is also present there.

Garud Dhwaj – Before reading the message, let me say something. Tell king Surath that king Chandramukh's death is painful for us also.

Messenger reads: -

King Garud Dhwaj,

You are responsible for my father king Chandramukh's death.

Durjay – Messenger, this allegation is without any proof.

Garud Dhwaj – I think that king Surath is under misunderstanding. I want to get him rid of it at the earliest.

Messenger reads further: -

You were would-be samdhi of king Chandramukh. Still, you ignored the relationships. You supported demon king Kalketu and did injustice to king Chandramukh. Your crime is unforgivable because you are king Chandramukh's murderer.

Garud Dhwaj's soldiers take out their swords.

One soldier – This messenger is insulting our king.

Durjay – The messenger is only giving message. Chandra Nagri's king Surath is insulting our king. We cannot tolerate this insult.

Garud Dhwaj – We did neither injustice nor any sin.

Durjay – King Surath is committing sin by insulting his father-in-law, who is like a father to him. We cannot tolerate this.

Messenger reads further: -

King Garud Dhwaj,

It is my order to you that you come in my shelter. Otherwise, be
ready for war.

Durjay smiles wickedly.

In Chandra Nagri

Some soldiers are trying to control a horse but they are not able to. Surath is watching.

Rajguru – Pranam king.

Surath – You are embarrassing me by saying pranam to me, gurudev.

Rajguru – You are Chandra Nagri's king. It is everybody's duty to respect king.

Surath – Do you want to say something, gurudev?

Rajguru – Yes, please do not mind. King Garud Dhwaj is your would-be father-in-law. You should not insult him. Your marriage with Sumukhi is fixed.

Surath – If King Garud Dhwaj had done such a disgusting work after my marriage, then also my decision would have been the same. You yourself taught me that politics should not be mixed with relations. Love has its place and duty has its place. If I ignore what king Garud Dhwaj did, then other kings and Kalketu will be encouraged. I am not doing this for any revenge. Rather, I am giving clear signal that we should be with each other in our fight against demons.

Surath himself jumps to control the horse. After some struggle, he is able to do so.

Surath – This is how I will control Kalketu. My first step is King Garud Dhwaj.

In Vijay Durg

Durjay – I am ready for war, Sohan.

Sohan – King and queen do not know that there is a snake living with them.

Durjay catches Sohan's throat.

Durjay – Are you praising me or?

Mohan – Mamaji, Sohan was praising you.

Sohan – Yes, Mamaji, Mohan is right.

Durjay – Whatever happens in the war, I will win. I will sit on Vijay Durg;s throne and make Surath's life as hell.

Nine devis – Ma, will there be war?

Durga – Man's mind is a battle-field. In his mind, the war between right thinking and negative qualities has always been going on.

Devis – Ma, when a person's somebody own becomes his enemy, then?

Durga – Then, there is wind of emotions in his mind. If man gives importance to relations, then he ignores his duty. If he gives importance to duty, then there is fear of breaking relations.

Kalketu comes in a village.

Kalketu – I want that old woman, who does magic. She insulted me.

A woman – There is no woman in this area, who does magic.

Kalketu – Vajramushti, torture them so much that they tell tell the truth.

Goddess again takes the form of that old woman and comes to Earth.

Old woman (goddess) – Oh, so now you will torture women? Till now, you were torturing sages.

Kalketu – It is good that you came in front of me.

Old woman – I am always in front of everybody, son. But egoists do not recognize me. Give up your demonic powers. Otherwise, nobody will save you. Then, you will have to come to Ma Durga's shelter.

Kalkatu laughs – I am most powerful. All will come in my shelter.

Old woman – Can you face wind?

There is sudden strong wind, which Kalketu is not able to face. After some time, the wind becomes normal.

Old woman – Can you hold fire in your fist?

Kalketu is surrounded by fire. He orders his men to put out the fire. But only Kalketu sees the fire, others do not see it. After some time, he also does not see the fire.

Old woman – Can you stop waves in sea?

Kalketu feels that he is thrown by sea waves. Again, it is an illusion.

Old woman – Can you stop Earth from breaking?

Kalketu feels that he is being engulfed inside ground. He screams. After some time, the illusion is over.

Old woman – Can you stop sky from falling?

For some time, Kalketu is under illusion that sky is falling on him. He screams.

Old woman – You cannot control five elements and you say that you are all-powerful. You are a coward. Do not insult that all-powerful God.

Old woman disappears.

Kalketu – Kalketu has never learnt to lose. Vajramushti, catch that old woman.

In Vijay Durg

Sumukhi – Your duty is to obey king's orders. Why did you decide to close the gate?

Durjay – If demon army had entered the city, then there would have been trouble. You do not consider it.

Sumukhi – My father considered all possibilities and then he ordered you to open the gate.

Vijaya (sternly) – Sumukhi

Sumukhi – It is because of Mamaji that Surath is thinking wrong.

Durjay – King Surath has lost his mind.

Sumukhi – Mamaji

Durjay – You feel bad when I say anything against king Surath. Yesterday, when he insulted our king through his messenger, then you did not feel bad? Jijaji, don't we have any self respect? Surath should touch our king's feet and he asks him to come to his shelter?

Garud Dhwaj – Durjay.

Vijaya – Durjay is right. King Chandramukh could not protect himself. That is why he died in war. Why are we being blamed for this?

There is Garud Dhwaj's army outside the palace.

Durjay – I kept the army ready for war. We will wage war and arrest king Surath. Then, we will be able to take the revenge of our insult.

Sumukhi prays to Durga.

Sumukhi – Why are you punishing me? On one hand is my would-be husband and on the other is my father. If this war happens, then my defeat is certain.

The war between Surath and Garud Dhwaj starts. Both shoot arrows and are equal. After some time, Garud Dhwaj's arrow cuts Surath's bow.

In palace

Vijaya – This noise says that King Garud Dhwaj has won. I knew that Surath could not face your father. He had so much of ego. He insulted his father-in-law so much.

Sumukhi – But, Ma, how are there flags of Chandra Nagri in our city?

Somebody is shouting victory for Surath.

Vijaya – This is Chandra Nagri's commander.

It is shown that Garud Dhwaj is in tied shackles.😭

Garud Dhwaj should have told the complete truth to Surath. Hope the misunderstanding is soon cleared.

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