5 Jan 08 (epi 2) written update

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Brief Update

  • Sumukhi needs to feed nine unmarried girls to complete her navratri fast. King Garuddhwaj asks Durjay to bring nine girls.
  • Nine girls come to Sumukhi. Sumukhi feeds them. They bless her.
  • Once they have gone, then Durjay comes with nine girls. Now Sumukhi understands that the nine girls whom she fed were not sent by Durjay and were really nine Durgas.
  • Goddess Durga appears before Sumukhi and blesses her.
  • Surath's parents come to to Vijay Durg with marriage proposal of Surath and Sumukhi. Sumukhi's parents gladly accept.
  • Durjay decides that he will not let the marriage happen.
  • Dhumraketu tells his elder brother demon king Kalketu that he loves Sumukhi. Kalketu thinks that the marriage between Dhumraketu and Sumukhi will help him rule over the Earth. He sends his messenger to Vijay Durg with the marriage proposal.

Detailed Update

Pandit – Today is the ninth day of Navratri. When this day ends, then the vrat is over. You have to worship nine unmarried girls.

Queen Vijaya – Durjay, bring nine girls for the completion of the vrat by Sumukhi.

Mohan and Sohan – Mama ji, the vrat by king, queen and princess Sumukhi will be completed today. When will you complete your vrat?

Durjay – On kaal-ratri (laughs).

Nine girls come to Sumukhi. They talk as if they are really goddesses. Sumukhi is thrilled on hearing their talks.

They bless Sumukhi that she will get good husband.

Sumukhi – You nine goddesses are so small. Still, you talk like goddesses?

They ask for food.

Sumukhi extends proper respect to them. Background song says that these nine are really nine Durgas but Sumukhi does not recognize them.

Sumukhi feeds them very lovingly.

Sumukhi – Ask whatever you want.

One girl – People ask from us whatever they want. And princess is saying that we should ask.

Girls – Princess, ask from us whatever you want.

Sumukhi's friend – You have already blessed the princess that she would get a good husband. But, when will the princess meet him?

One girl – Very soon.

Another – Princess, now we should go. We are being waited for in many places.

Sumukhi – Why not? I do not feels satiated on seeing you nine goddesses. I feel that you should always be with me. But I understand that you have to go. I will ask Mama ji to accompany you to your homes.

One girl – No need, princess. We will go the way we came.

They bless the princess and go.

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Durjay comes.

Durjay – I have brought nine girls with me.

He calls the girls. They come inside.

Sumukhi – But Mama ji, I just now fed nine girls and completed my vrat.

Durjay – How can it be? I brought them here just now.

Sumukhi understands that those nine girls were really nine Durgas. She runs to Durga's temple.

Sumukhi – Ma, what kind of illusion is this? You came to my room in your nine forms and I could not recognize you. I have committed grave sin and I must be punished for it. I will not eat so long I do not see you even if I have to give up my life.

(You kept fast. Again, you want to skip food? Bad for your health.😉)

Goddess Durga appears.

Durga – I am happy with you, princess Sumukhi. You completed your navratri fast. When the entire creation is in my womb, then that time is called as asat ratri. Navratri means that the creation exists in Ma's womb for nine yugas, nine years and nine months. And a child is born after living in mother's womb for nine months. These nine months are night for the child. When the night is over, then there is day and things are visible. What is seen is sat and what is not seen is ratri(night). Day comes from night. Before new year, people observe navratri fast so that the new year is enriched in all respects. The virtue, which you have earned from navratri fast, will save you from the circle of attachment and illusion. Man lose their sense when they get entangled in attachment and illusion. But, with my blessing, you will always be in your senses. Bless you.

Durga disappers.

Sumukhi – I am blessed, Ma. You appeared in front of me. Mahamaya, you are the creator of the circle of attachment and illusion. And you yourself convinced me that you will help me be free from this circle.

Queen Vijaya – Sumukhi, Ma Durga has given us the result of navratri fast.

King Garuddhwaj – Chandra Nagri's king and queen are coming here to ask for your hand for their son prince Surath.

In Chandra Nagri, Surath's horse Pavan sees Sumukhi's picture.

Surath – What are you asking Pavan? That who is she?

Pavan nods its head in yes.

Surath – She is prince Sumukhi. Is she beautiful?

Pavan nods.

Surath – Shall I marry her?

Pavan plucks a flower and gives to Surath.

Surath – You mean that I should give this flower to Sumukhi?

Pavan nods.

Surath – But the princess is in Vijay Durg.

Pavan signals that they should go to Vijay Durg.

Surath – Pavan, my friend, it does not suit us. If I do this, then people will say that your friend Surath is mad. Do you want that? Ma and Papa are about to go to Vijay Durg. They have already sent their messengers. Do you know what will happen? Quick engagement and quick marriage.

Pavan dances.

Surath's mother and father come there.

King – Pavan, we are going to Vijay Durg.

Queen – What is he saying?

Surath – He is saying that when you return to Chandra Nagri, then bring the princess with you.

Surath's parents laugh.

In Vijay Durg

Garuddhwaj – Durjay, give orders to make arrangements for the welcome of king Chandramukh and queen Chandrika. The welcome must be grand.

Chandramukh and Chandrika come to Vijay Durg. They are given grand welcome.

Durjay – Durjay greets king Chandramukh and queen Chandrika. You are welcome.

They come to the palace and are very happy to see Sumukhi. They give the marriage proposal to king Garuddhwaj, who gladly accepts it. Chandrika gives a kangan to Sumukhi.

Durjay laughs. (He does not want the marriage to happen. Therefore, his laugh here is illogical.👎🏼)

After some time, Durjay is in his room. He is very angry and throwing things.

(Just now he was laughing and now he is angry. Weird.😕)

Mohan and Sohan – Mama ji, today you welcomed king Chandramukh. Tomorrow, you may have to welcome prince Surath. Surath and Sumukhi's marriage will bring a stop to your ambition. This marriage should not happen.

Durjay – It will not happen. Time is very powerful. For some time, even I lost my patience. But then I remembered that Sumukhi only wore the kangan. The marriage has still not happened. I have to wait for the right time.

All three laugh.

Sumukhi's friends tease her. They show to her Surath's picture. The picture's face is painted black. Sumukhi washes the paint off and sees Surath's picture.

In Chandra Nagri, Surath is looking at Sumukhi's picture. His parents tease him.

Pavan sends a pigeon to Surath.

Pavan – Why did you send the pigeon to me?

Chandrika – So that you send it to princess Sumukhi.

Goddess Durga – Creation is my aspect. One who wants to worship me should see me everywhere in creation. Eyes of devotion and not of love are needed to see me. Man wants that if he worships somebody, then all should worship him. But if he loves somebody, then he does not want anybody else to love that person. Love is selfish. But there is no selfishness in love. If you want to attain me, then take all along with you. Do not wander in the darkness of love. Come to the light of devotion.

(The dialog writers need to write better dialogs. Love is always considered good. I understand from the context what Goddess Durga here is saying. But the words used are such that it is easy to misunderstand what is being said.😕)

Dhumraketu tells Kalketu that he loves Sumukhi. Kalketu laughs.

Kalketu – This love between a demon and a human is good. This love will make me the king of Earth. If have been waiting for too long to rule over the Earth. But these powerful human kings thwarted all of my attempts. But now we will be relative of a powerful king. Then, it is quite natural that we will get the support of other kings as well. Garuddhwaj, I will send a messenger to Vijay Durg with marriage proposal.

Kalketu asks a messenger to go to Vijay Durg.

Messenger – King Garuddhwaj is not in Vijay Durg. They have gone with their entire family to take rest.

Kalketu – You are messenger of Kola king. This is the first time that I want to have a relation with humans. They must not be able to break the relation. At any cost, I want yes as answer.

Rate – 7/10

It looks too dramatized when Durjay and Mohan and Sohan laugh again and again. It is not good to show them laughing every now and then and that too without any proper reason.👎🏼

Dialogs need to be improved.👎🏼

Set up is good. The actors, who do the roles of Sumukhi, Garudhdhwaj and Durga act good.👍🏼
Edited by akhl - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thnx alot yaar

I really wanna SS get married 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wonderful....thanx a lot...great update 👏 👏 👏
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👏 👏 👏 wonderful....keeep it up.....luv ur updates
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