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Posted: 14 years ago
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"DOSTI YA PYAAR"

(Hye guys,I'm a new member in this forum, i am a big fan of sidditi , this is the first time i am writing something and as they are my favorite couples, i wished to start with them, please forgive my silly mistakes)😊

The story begins: Ayesha is standing on a small table and trying to clean the window pane but suddenly she got dis balanced and fell but only to find herself safe in strong arms of none other than her best friend,owner of Ramada, our cute and naughty chocolate,Veer Vardhan Singh. She slowly opened her eyes, meanwhile he was just staring at her beautiful and innocent face. they shared an eye lock for a while but soon came into senses,
Veer-"Ayesha tum abtak hotel mein kya kar rahi ho , its really late. Nihaal ghar par akela hoga."
Ayesha-(realizing that it was really late) " sorry sir wo kaam kuch zyaada hi tha to waqt ka pata hi nahin chala."
Veer-"main kal hi minnie se iss bare mein baat karunga, lady staff se itni der tak kaam karvana theek nahin hain , aur jab wo staff quarters mein naa reh rahin hoon tab to bilkul bhi nahin , aacha chalo tumhe ghar chod deta hoon"👏
Ayesha-"sir, iski koi jaroorat nahin , main auto se aa jayoongi."😔
Veer-"are you out of your mind, itni raat mein auto se jaana safe nahin."
suddenly remembering something, a cute smile on his face "aur vaise bhi agar koi phir se tumhare peeche pad gaya to, mera kya hoga 😉 " , correcting himself " i mean Nihaal ka kya hoga". both remembered the time on their Shimla trip, when veer rescued her from the gundas and the gunda seeming truck driver twice. Ayesha face seemed to be tomato red at the sudden comment made by him😳, veer realized it and smiled to himself. 😊
veer waited till she came with an changed look, wearing a pink churidaar umbrella suit.
veer looked at her intently while she was coming and his heart made a sudden realization that she is extremely bueatiful, in her simple look also.😍
both were in the car , there was an awkward silence between them when in order to break the silence veer asked her that would she like to listen to some music,
Ayesha-"sir,jaisi aapki marzi" both seemed to on the cd player when there hands collided, she taken her hand aback and the music seemed to be in full glory,
'Thoda sa pyaar huya hai, thoda hai baaki
thoda sa pyaar hua hai thoda hai baaki
Ayesha and veer looked at each other , there eyes seem dreamy
hum to dil de hi chuke ,ho............
hum to dil de hi chuke
bas teri haan hai baaki'2
Ayesha started to look out of the window avoiding eye contact, and at the same time thinking about their past moments when they were together, with a slight smile on her face 😊
'Jaane kya mod aaya, jindagi ke safar mein ,
bas gaya tu hi tu, ab to meri nazar mein
Veer also looked dreamy, thinking about their past happy moments
dil ki har ek dhadkan tujhko pehchanti hai ,
meri chahat hai ab kya tu nahin jaanti hain
soon they both started to look at each other , eyes filled with love and contentment.
main tujhe jaan gayi ,ho............
tujhko pehchaan gayi
phir bhi teri haan hai baaki
thoda sa..........
while thinking about veer she soon realized he was not in the car, they were on the roadside, she came out of the car to find veer standing at an ice cream parlor, he came to her and gave her her favorite vanilla ice cream. she was pleasantly surprised to see that how come he knows about her favorite ice cream. while eating, a bit of ice cream was left on corner of his mouth, she cleaned it with her hands in a sudden reflex.
mujhko jaane hua kya dil nahin mera bas mein
isliye sochti hoon tod doon saari rasmeen
veer was happy to see her doing that, soon they finished there icecream and veer gave his hand to her.
tod ke saari rasmeein aa mera saath de de
tera ho jayunga mein haathon mein haath de de
she hold his hand , her heart leapt with joy.
haathon mein haath sahi ho.............
tu mere saath sahi
phir bhi teri haan hain baaki
thoda sa.............
soon the car stopped taking Ayesha back of a true bueatiful dream. but as she remembered of Nihaal she started craving for him,
for a pleasent change the kameeni gang😡 weren't present in the home they all were out for some imp. late night party😃, and arnav & nihaal were already asleep, veesha soon gone to check Nihaal , both were standing by the door side to see Nihaal sleeping happy and contended😊, with a slight smile on his face, he looked so cute and adorable. both entered the room slowly,so his sleep might not be disturbed, both sat on the opposite corners of the bed caressing his head smoothly and gave him a peck on either side of his forehead. suddenly with a jerk he got up, veesha shocked by the sudden change.😲
Nihaal smiled hapilly seeing both of them,
Ayesha-"Nihaal tum ab tak soye nahin".
Nihaal-" Surprise Maasi!!! woh maine itne dino se aap dono ke saath time spent nahin kiya tha na, to socha ki aaj jab tak aap dono aa nahin jaate mein aapka wait karunga." Veer smiling at his inocent talk while nihaal winking at him.😉
Ayesha-"Par Nihaal beta, agar aap itne der tak jagoge to kal school kaise jaa paoge"
Nihaal-(giggling)chachu, maasi bhi naa sab kuch bhool jati hai, aley baba kal to sunday hai."😆
Ayesha suddenly realized her mistake while veehal happily enjoying an hi5.and giggling.
Ayesha-"aap dono bhi naa jab mauka milta hai mujhe chidhate rehte ho, jao mein aap dono se baat nahin karti"😡
Nihaal mumbled something into veer's ears after which veer's face became tomato red.☺️ ayesha couldn't understand and asked nihaal
Ayesha-" aap apne chachu ke kaan mein kya khusarpusar kar rahe ho."
nihaal returned to her and gave her a big kiss on her cheeks, and asked her, Nihaal-" Maasi , kya ab bhi aap mujhse naaraz ho"
ayesha smiled at his inocent talk and told no. nihaal-"dekha chachu mein keh raha tha naa " veer blushed more😳 . ayesha couldn't understand still, so she asked nihaal❓
ayesha-" kya keh rahe the aap apne chachu se".
nihaal (making an inocent face)-"maasi, aap hum dono se gussa ho na , to maine chachu se kaha ki wo bhi aapko kiss de toh aap unse gussa nahin hogi par ye chachu bhi naa."
listening this ayesha was blushing far more than veer😳, but told nihaal that"nahin nihaal, main aapke chachu se bilkul bhi naaraz nahin hoon, sach" but nihaal was not a child so easily convinced😒 , suddenly he blinked his eyes as he got an idea,😉 he goes and kiss veer on his cheek and then goes to kiss his maasi. they didn't got what he was doing , suddenly he told" mujhe thanks kaho chachu,(blinking at him)😉 maine aapki kiss maasi tak pahuncha di" . both blushed😳 at the comment given the sweet child, ayesha in order to change the topic, told that they must play some game, to which nihaal replied that they must play dumbsharas as this was a new game he learned at school today only.
but again with a condition, that they both must act and guess while he will tell them a phrase to act. ayesha-"par isme to film guess karni hoti hain naa"
veer-" come on ayesha, nihaal ka game hai to rules bhi to uske hi hone chahiyae naa"
nihaal got happy and veesha were happy seeing him happy😊, nihaal told that first it was the turn of his maasi to act, giving her the phrase that 'nihaal loves his maasi and chachu very much'
he told not to point him , as this would be considered as cheating .ayesha soon turned on to act but she was confused how to do it, she showed him a baby and pointed herself and him, but he got confused it as their baby, she really got embarrassed🤪, but soon successful in the work, he soon guessed it correct and nisha were really happy, nihaal-" wow maasi aap to kamaal ho, aap jaisa to koi ho hi nahin sakta😃" veer was happy listening it but showed his fake anguish veer-"aachaa aap to aise keh rahe jaise maine kuch kiya hi nahin" nihaal-"chachu , maasi ke bina aap kuch nahin kar paate😛" nisha winked at each other.😉 now it was veer's turn nihaal told him to say' i love you'❤️ veer was really confused but nihaal forced him . he showed aheart shape flying,😆 ayesha interpreted it as his heart is fying in the air, nihaal giggled.😆
veer-" yeh mujhse nahin hoga,please nihaal"
nihaal-" chachu aap bhi naa", nihaal showed the same gesture as the boy done with srk in k2h2. ayesha very soon guessed it.veer got embaresed but somewhat happy in his heart listening this from ayesha's mouth"
ayesha-"sir aap itna bhi nahin kar paye, lagta hai aap bilkul films nahin dekhte"😆. nihaal giggeled at this, soon ayesha realized that it was petty late, she told nihaal to sleep, veer too realized it. nihaal-"maasi, pehle aap mujhe story sunao tab mein soounga".
veer-"aacha to aapko apne favorite robin hood ki story sunni hain"
nihaal-"nahin chachu, aaj saila neh school mein bataya ki kal usne apni mom se cindrella ki story suni thi, wo bahut aachi thi, mujhe bhi wohi sunni hain, maasi sunao naa. veesha face glittered with a big smile at his innocent talks.😃 , ayesha sitting on the ground, by nihaal's side , caressing his head started to tell the story, veer lied beside nihaal , soon in his dreamland,😍 imagining, a big ball party, where he was our 'prince charming' attraction of everyone at the ball , but his eyes seem to be looking for someone and soon his waiting period was over and he saw his dream girl in front of his eyes,😍 his Cinderella dressed in a pretty white gown, looking gorgeous beyond words, in glass sandles (our maasi looking like a fairy) , and there seems nothing to him except her presence, and soon both lost in each other, dancing as if they are worshipping each other, such a pretty couple never existed in anyone's dreams also.⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
ayesha was so much engrossed in storytelling that she didn't realized that nihaal was fast asleep. ayesha remembered of veer
ayesha-" veer sir..." but she soon realized that veer was also in deep sleep . she goes to him, and covered him with blanket , but as she looked into his face, she is lost in that cute face, to which she can look in her entire life without taking her eyes off,she came closer to him and slowly caressing his head, kissed him on his forehead, but soon realized and left, after she had gone veer came out of his dreamland,
soon in there respective rooms , remembering the past moments , 😊standing by the window side, both of their hearts just asked them,
' kyaa ye sirf dosti hai ya pyaar????????????'
-By Maahi
( sorry the os became too large)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very very cute OS and very well written. Can you please update soon ...
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hi cutemaahi (don't know ur name), the os is great!👏👏
would love to read more
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anything with Aditi as Aysha is always welcomed plz continue
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hi
welcome nice u did well
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hello Mahi, its awesome.....plz continue

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Soooooooo cuteeeeeeeeeeee os.Plzzzzzzz continue it.Its nice to see sidditi fans.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: pickachu

Soooooooo cuteeeeeeeeeeee os.Plzzzzzzz continue it.Its nice to see sidditi fans.





Thanks for the comment , its the first time i have written a stuff like this and really happy to seee the comments
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sum_ami

Very very cute OS and very well written. Can you please update soon ...




Thanks for commenting,
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Posted: 14 years ago
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it's beautiful.

want to read again&again.
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