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Posted: 14 years ago
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The Next Morning
Veer wakes up and goes to Ayesha's room.He sees his darling sleeping peacefully. Veer goes near her bed and kisses her softly on the forehead.Ayesha jerks and wakes and blushes.
Ayesha:kya kar rahe ho Veer?
Veer:tumse pyar
Ayesha goes red and says "koi dekhlega"
Veer(naughtily):darwaza band hai
Ayesha turns to go but Veer puls her back and makes her sit on his lap and makes sure she is comfortable and then says "aaj hamari shaadi hai" aur phir hum dono ko koi alag nahi kar payega
aur he whispers naughtily "hum ek hi kamre me soyenge"😉
Ayesha blushes and Veer kisses her softly on the cheeks when somebody knocks on the door
It was Kamini
Veer tells irritatedly "ab mom bhi kabab me haddi ban rahi hai"
Ayesha smiles and opens the door and says "Ji Kaminiji kahiye"
Kamini " beta shaadi ka menu discuss karna tha"
Ayesha "Main abhi neeche aati hoon"
Kamini "Theek hai
Veer says "bas shaam tak ka intezar hai aur phir hum dono ek"
"hamesha hamesha ke liye"
then in a naughty voice
"can't wait for the suhaagraat"😉
Ayesha blushes and runs from the room leaving Veer smiling😊
pls comment guys


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Posted: 14 years ago
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It s a very nice story............. but will it come true in the serial ????????????? I have stopped watching the serial a long time back.......... Dont' know what to say......... the minds of the serial producers are fixed, I don't think they are going to bring Aditi back as Ayesha....... The serial has broken a lot of hearts..............
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Great !!👏👏
👏Wow! though its short but soo sweet😳
Can't wait for suhaagraat😆
I just love this though this never happens in the serial. I just visualise ayesha (aditi) and veer (siddharth)😳😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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this is really nice... atleast they are together here. when aditi was there , i wud not read them that often
but now i think reading them sooths our minds ......somehow
can you pl. tell me the full meaning of FF ?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@sweetchoclate... FF means "Fan Fiction"

This is really great piece of writing........really wish ....this could have been true in serial with aditi as ayesha...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks tanvi dear .
waiting for the next one.
sakshi
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey lots of jhappi for writing such a lovely ff for us..........
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