JSPYA - A prediction FF - Part 3 - Pg 3 - Mar 9th - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Deepu Super cool Part!😎

Tumne humara naam bhi include kar dia! Wow yaar!πŸ˜ƒ

Guilty Tiger....Hai Hai! Tiger bana billi...Ab kahaan gaya saara ghussa? A was superb yaar!
Please continue soon!πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey...
awesome.... so kameeni actually likes ayysha nw.... good....
cnt wait 4 the veesha moments.....
and cool... i'm there too... he he....
loved it.....
pls update soon.... :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi. A v nice update plzz cont...πŸ‘πŸ‘
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice ff deepuπŸ‘ I love this independent Ayesha and like this attitude of Kameeni ..please keep on wrirting
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Heey Deepu...pata hain..mainne update to college mein hi padh liye the....but wahaan se login nahi ho raha tha...issiliye cudn't cmnt. Nice part. Wow...loving your Ayesha...shez soo smart. N ur inclusion of names is cute Lol.

Am waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey....its vry nice ...please continue. Its really nice to have a vry independent Ayesha.I just loved her character.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Love the parts...... 😳
Please cont soon....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART 3

Himani: wow.. ayesha mam, yeh nihal hai na.. wow.. bohot cute lag raha hai..

Sara: Nihal, pata hai, mein toh aap ko dekhne ke liye taras rahi thi..

Romaila: Haan nihal.. Aap ke massi toh hamesha aap ke baare mein hi bolti hai..

Arpita: Hey nihal, mera naam arpita hai aur mein bhi aap ke robinhood ki fan hoon..

Nihal: Achcha.. didi, aap ko bhi robinhood passand hai ?

Roshni: Haan nihal.. aap ko robinhood passand hai, we like you, so, humein robinhood bhi passand hai...

Ayesha: chalo chalo. ab baatein bohot ho gaye.. aap ko ab class ke liye nikalna chahiye.

Payal: Mam, aap nahi aayenge aaj ?

Ayesha: Mein kuch der mein change kar ke aaongi.. Waise, aap ke stage show kab plan hua hai ?

Shruti: Parso ko fix kiya gaya hai mam...

Ayesha: okay.. mein Anjana se baat kar ke, saare arrangements dekhloongi..

Everyone: Bye mam...

Ayesha: Nihal, hamare room mein tumhare samaan sab kuch waise hi rakhey hai.. Aur maine tumhare liye ek nanny ko bhi appoint kiya. Tumhara sara kaam woh kar legi.. Ab tum jao, naha lo.. Mujhe thoda sa kaam hai.. woh kar ke mein aajaoongi.

Nihal: Ok massi....

He runs up the stairs, while Ayesha turns towards Veer and Kameeni...

Ayesha: Ayiye veer ji.. kameeni ji..

She takes them to the rooms. One room is quite opposite to Nihal and Ayesha's room, while the other is next to the 2nd room..

Veer takes the room opposite, while kameeni will get the room next to veer's..

Ayesha leaves telling that she has some work.. She will change and will go to the dance school, which is right behind the home, like an out house, in the same compound. [Imagine a reconstructed and extended house of shimla with gardens, fountain, and very natural and eternal like a palace/mansion]

Veer's Room:

He finds the room, quite bigger in size as compared to his room in the vardhan mansion. He thinks about Ayesha's success and hard work in achieving everything.

He gets stunned to see a few sets of clothes lied on the bed. A note from Sunil, the PA of Ayesha will be there, which says that, those are just for him and are new.

He feels so touched about the gesture of ayesha as well as determined to get her back and apologise to her.. He prayed to the god, to help him in every step he takes.

He changes and makes his way to kameeni's room and finds her sleeping peacefully. He then, goes to nihal and ayesha's room, and finds the door of it open.. He will not find ayesha.. but he will be hearing some noise from the washroom. As he moves closer, he finds nihal in the tub, playing with bubbles and some toys.. He spends some time with him and as he will be going out, his hand will make an album fall from ayesha's study table. He tries to keep it back but the curiosity to see the contents in it will overtake him.. As he filps open the page 1, he will find "Reminiscences - This memories album belongs to.. AYESHA SHARMA"

The corners of the page will be decorated with some barbie stickers and there are some stickers, which said, love, music, art, dance, fun, school, family, friends, chocolates etc..

The next page, contained some pictures of ayesha as an infant, with her mother, father and sister. He traced his hands over the tiny figure of ayesha. He chuckled at the thought, of ayesha being smaller that, nihal's current age. She looked like a few months old.. The next few pictures were of ayesha's childhood, her dance performances and stage shows proved that, she had a passion for dance and music since her early ages.. He also saw a picture in which, she was wearing a batman's costume for the halloween, followed by some pictures of christmas.. Then, he saw her pictures with college friends. His gut stiffened, when he saw, many pictures of ayesha and a guy, who seems to be from her class, and of her age group.

The felt that, they are more than friends, because of their proximity. As he turned the page, his blood started boiling and his jaw automatically got tightened. He cound not stand a guy hugging her, but in the pics which he is seeing now, ayesha was sitting in the lap of the same guy. Anger tookover him and he flipped the pages as soon as possible. He then saw the pictures of ayesha, nihal, jai and divya. He adored each and every picture in it. And in the last page, there was a group picture of everyone including the staff members from ramada. But veer felt his life squeezed, when he found a black "X" mark on his face, which showed that, he is not a part of her friends, nor well wisher or a known person.

A tear dropped from his eyes but he wiped it off, as he found nihal pulling his shirt..

Nihal: Arey, chachu, aap abhi taq yahin par the ?

Veer: Nahi beta.. Mein bass.. Yahan se nikal raha tha.. Waise, massi kahan hai ?

Nihal: Woh toh kab ka chali gayi. Pata hai.. Kal koi dance program hai.. TV par massi ko dekhenge... WOOOOWWW.. ussi ki practice bahar out house mein chal raha hai.. Mein bhi wahi jaa raha hoon.. Aap bhi aayiye na..

Veer: Haan.. Chalo.. Pehle tum tayaar ho jao.. Phir hum dono saath mein out house ke liye niklenge.. Okay...

Precap: Veer stunned to see ayesha performing on the song, zara zara behakta hai.. Why is kameeni sleeping like that only ? Anything wrong with her ?

Hey guys,
so sorry for the delay but hope you like the update. Do press the like button and comment. Will continue as soon as possible. You might be expecting the next update, by day after tomorrow. thanks a lot for your lovely support.

loads of love
shonaveer


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Posted: 14 years ago
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wah wah good prediction......if this really happens.........would b a good lesson for proudy granny.........
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi Deepu...just read part 2 and 3...sorry for the late comment...loved both the parts...very creative of you to include all of us in the dialogues tooπŸ˜ŽπŸ‘ hmm so veer trying to patofy ayesha...karo, karo...and I loved how you have portrayed ayesha as so dignified and mature too...is there a third angle too...the guy in the college pics?

Keep it up...and please continue soonπŸ˜ƒ
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