JSPYA - A prediction FF - Part 3 - Pg 3 - Mar 9th

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PART ONE

After 5 months from now...

Veer sat on his table, and again thought about how ayesha stooped so low and tried to sell the strategies of his hotel. He thought it would have been better if she has asked him for some money but her act is making him hate her more. He hated her everyday, every moment and every minute. He also hated himself for trusting her and making a girl like her his friend.

His thoughts were disturbed by a phone call. He picked up the phone and was left shocked. He did not believe his ears. He did not understand anything that his mother was talking about.

Kamini: Veer, tum jald hi jald ghar pohonch jao. Yahan poora gadbad hui hai veer. Police aaye hai ghar pe. CID aur income tax waale bhi hai. Ghar mein main akeli hoon. Nandini aur Bunty ko Avinash bahar holiday ke liye abhi abhi leke gaya. Please ghar aao... Mujhe bohot dar lag raha hai..

Veer: Mom.. please.. aap excite mat huiye. Mein abhi pohonchta hoon..

He will be about to rush to his home, but even before that, police enter his room and will ask him to surrender.

Veer: Dekhiye inspector saab, yeh sab kya ho raha ? aap ko yahan par aane kis ne diya ? security !! security !!

police: Mr. Veer Vardhan Singh !!! 😑 Jzyada karne ki koshish mat keejiye.. Hum aap ke hotel ko seize karne aaye hai.. we have government's orders with us.

Veer: 😲 Par kyun sir ? Hum ne kya galati kiya ? Sir please kuch toh kahiye !!

CID Officer: Mr. Vardhan Singh, agar aap ke case partial hota toh, we would have helped you but here, something else is going on... We have many evidences..

  1. 3/4 of your profits are unaccounted. there is no tax paid since 4 years.
  2. there are charges against this hotel for certain scams like prostitution.
  3. aap ke personal taxes bhi unpaid hai.
  4. there are some uncleared and unclaimed customs
Agar aap ko aur bhi sunna hai toh, we have more evidences. Iss se jzyada hum aur kuch kehna bhi nahi chahte. We do not have to claim any kind of reasons to you.

Mr. Vardhan Singh, aap ke loans bhi cleared nahi hai. So, humein aap ke ghar ko bhi seize karna hoga.. Saare loans clear karne ke liye..

Police: But sir, in saare accounts mein se, Mr. Avinash Sehgal ke accounts 100% clear hai.. But he has a partnership deal with this hotel and the partnership deal only says that, he is an investor and he does not have any link with the working of the business. The 1/4th tax is also from him only. So, he will be getting the control of the whole ramada from the next week..

Mr. Vardhan Singh, we got all your accounts. We would like you to accompany us to the Vardhan Mansion.

Veer on the other side, stays in dilemma thinking about what all is happening with him. He does not understand anything and is thinking about how his JEEJU'S accounts are clear when the same person manages all their accounts.

He makes his way towards the hotel's entrance, where everyone including Mrs. Dixit will be looking at him with an unbelievable face.

Veer: Mrs. Dixit, yeh sab kya ho raha hai ?

Mrs. Dixit: Wahin sir.. Joh aap ko ayesha ne samjhane ke liye koshish ki. Lekin aap ne usse kuch bhi nahi suna. Aap ne uss par vishwas nahi kiya.. Sir, yeh sab avinash ji ne kiya hai.. Aur aaj joh bhi hua.. mein kabhi jhoot nahi bolti sir... Aaj joh bhi hua, aap ke kal ke decision ke wajah se hi hua hai sir.. sorry to say this...

Veer now realizes all the things and all his jeeju's words. He still remains in the state of shock. After they reach the vardhan's mansion, they arrest veer, kameeni and the government takes the custody of nihal. All the television channels cover the three of them and Veer will feel disgusted to get nihal into all this stuff..

Nihal will be taken to the court and the same judge will be there, who seperated nihal from ayesha. She orders to see ayesha in the court but the lawyer, who has been appointed to take care about all the issues and inform everything to the court will say that, vardhan's insulted her and now, no one knows where she is.

Veer, who will be listening to this from a far away will bow his head down in shame.
Now, he does not have anyone to seek help from. Nandini is also keeping quiet and is not helping them, just for the sake of Bunty and her husband's future. Now, veer and kameeni dont even have a penny in their hands... They lost nihal to the law too..

The judge decides that, everything should be aired on the National Television. She tells that, an announcement about search for Ayesha Sharma must be made.

A day passes and soon, ayesha will appear in the court and will apply for the custody of Nihal. She will get her nihal back and they both get re-united. Nihal will also be very happy with this. He tells ayesha to save his chachu since he is crying.

Ayesha, now is doing her own business in shimla. Yes.. She has a professional dance school there, which is running very successful. She also tutors the kids, who need help, and she has a number of people working under her. Even if she is not world famous, her dance school is awarded as the best in shimla.

Ayesha will be admant of leaving to shimla with nihal but will find him crying for his chachu ONLY. She will also think about the amount of love her jeeju gave her. So, she will think that, it will be unfair she will do this to his family. So, she will think of saving them, just for that purpose ONLY.

She makes her way to the jail in which they are in. She gets tears in her eyes, when she thinks about Veer's position but again thinks about what all they said to her. She goes to the inspector, gets India's top most lawyer, with all her efforts.

She works for a week or so tremendously and will get them out of the jail.


PRECAP: Veer and Kameeni feeling sorry. Ayesha throwing loads of attitude.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Deepu...am sorry for replying soo late. Actually was not well. Neway...loved this prediction thing. Veer+ Kamini without a penny is great. N Ayesha running her won business...wud love to c the same in the show. Ayesha should be much more stronger.

Wud love to read the next parts...wen veeSha story will prolly start..n Avi ko bhagao will also cum into action. Cont soon.

Lovely πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌ
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Deepu- kaash ye din jaldi se show mein bhi aaye!! I love that A is independant and in the end it is her who actually rescues them. Very well written, superb x
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gr88888 ff dear.Really waiting for next part and what abt your other ffs when r u going to update them.
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good prediction. something simillar like that should happen here. ayehsa providing shelter to vardhans sounds so good.
wonder how kamini faces such a situation.
ayesha will either sell her simla house for them or they will move there with her.
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Thanks A lot for liking....
paaal, pickachu, ccolkat, ht312,
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Deepu,

This very lovely! Ayeesha needs to show that Attitude for what they did!
Ab yahaan pe koi rukta hai kya? Jaldi se continue karo! Please!😳
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Hey Deepz..sorry for late reply...what a dhamakedaar story you have writtenπŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘ I liked the confident,independent, successful and attitude wali ayesha in your ficπŸ‘ πŸ‘ waiting for the next partπŸ˜ƒ
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hey deepu...
wow.. wt a story.....
ayysha should show her attitude toward them...
i mean they were so rude to her.... nw she should be to them ... he he...
cnt wait 4 the next part... :D
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PART TWO

She makes her way to the jail in which they are in. She gets tears in her eyes, when she thinks about Veer's position but again thinks about what all they said to her. She goes to the inspector, gets India's top most lawyer, with all her efforts.

She works for a week or so tremendously and will get them out of the jail.

Veer will not be able to look into the eyes of ayesha, while kameeni makes a disgusted face and turns towards the other side. Shame written everywhere on her.

Veer finally gathers some courage to talk to ayesha, who is signing a paper..

Veer: Ayesha, I am sorry.. Maine tumhe trust nahi kiya.. Aur jab tumhe MERE sab se jzyada zaroorat thi, maine peeche mud lia.. Please ayesha.. Yeh baat mujhe andar se kha raha hai ki maine tum par bharosa nahi kiya. Please mujhe maaf karo.

Ayesha: Sorry Mr. Veer. Mein kaun hoti hoon aap ko maaf karne ke liye.. And please note.. Agar mein aaj yahan hoon, that is only for Nihal. He is hysterically crying for you

I would like to share this with you.. I have got the custody of Nihal and we are flying to shimla in a couple of hours. Nihal wants to offer you to stay with us in my home. If you dont have any issues with that, please come along. Mein aap ko koi force nahi karna chahti.

Ayesha walks away with grace, while veer and kameeni follow her with their heads bowed in guilt and hatred towards themselves.

Ayesha sits in her car, in the driver's seat, while veer hesitantly sits in the seat next to her and kameeni in the back. As she keeps driving, she does not even shift her gaze for once, towards veer, while he will be staring at her with pleading eyes continuously. Kameeni also notices this and will feel really bad.

Ayesha stops her car, infront of a hotel. It is the hotel of the competitors of Ramada. Veer, who now, lost everything felt small infront of everyone there, as they made their way to the rooms.

Sunil: Mam, aap ne do aur rooms ke liye bataya na, maine book kar liya hai..

Ayesha: Thanks sunil. Veer ji, yeh aap ke room ke chabbi hai aur kameeni ji, yeh aap ke. Hum aadhe gante mein yahan se niklenge aur agar aap change karna chahte hai, you can. Aur agar aap ko kissi bhi cheez ki zaroorat ho, this is my personal assistant sunil and he will be there to help you. I have to go now. Bye.

She storms into her room, and starts packing and dressing up Nihal.

Veer and Kameeni think about such a good host she is. Even after so much of mis-treating, she got them out of all the mess and gave them some shelter.

Veer and Kameeni had to fresh up and change into the same clothes, as they dont have any baggage and whatever is left for them, they left it in the vardhan mansion only. They feel uneasy to change to the new trend of poverty but will try to adjust to the situation. It is not more than the guilt they are suffering from.

They board into the flight. Nihal will try to play with Veer but he will always be in a dreamy state, or lost in his deep thoughts. Ayesha, observing that, Nihal is busy with veer, will retire to sleep. Only she knows the level of stress she has gone through to get them out of the mess and the police...

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They made their way to ayesha's home in shimla. Nihal was very happy to see his home and will jump with joy, veer will be happy to one extent that, he will now be staying with nihal and ayesha together under the same roof, while kameeni will be stunned to see the home. It was simple, elegant and extremely pleasant.

They make their way inside and the first thing they find is a picture of ayesha with nihal, jai and divya. Veer was mesmerized to see ayesha in the picture. She was completely different and had a very modern look. She seemed to be very young that time.. She was having nihal sleeping in her arms. Nihal was an infant in it. For the first time in her life, Kameeni accepted that, without her bahu divya, their family is incomplete. Somewhere in her heart, she thought about ayesha being a part of that family too. They made their way to the living room, and a few people came in.

Himani: wow.. ayesha mam, yeh nihal hai na.. wow.. bohot cute lag raha hai..

Sara: Nihal, pata hai, mein toh aap ko dekhne ke liye taras rahi thi..

Romaila: Haan nihal.. Aap ke massi toh hamesha aap ke baare mein hi bolti hai..

Arpita: Hey nihal, mera naam arpita hai aur mein bhi aap ke robinhood ki fan hoon..

Nihal: Achcha.. didi, aap ko bhi robinhood passand hai ?

Roshni: Haan nihal.. aap ko robinhood passand hai, we like you, so, humein robinhood bhi passand hai...

Ayesha: chalo chalo. ab baatein bohot ho gaye.. aap ko ab class ke liye nikalna chahiye.

Payal: Mam, aap nahi aayenge aaj ?

Ayesha: Mein kuch der mein change kar ke aaongi.. Waise, aap ke stage show kab plan hua hai ?

Shruti: Parso ko fix kiya gaya hai mam...

Ayesha: okay.. mein Anjana se baat kar ke, saare arrangements dekhloongi..

Everyone: Bye mam...

PRECAP: VeeSha moments.. [veer trying to patao ayesha but ], Kameeni feeling more and more guilty because of ayesha sachchayi...
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