FF:Veesha aur Teesra Kaun?Part 21(pg26)updated - Page 17

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Posted: 14 years ago
Poor Ayesha......
I hate that Kamini...... 😑
Why Is she after our Veesha..... πŸ˜”
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: boshaa

Poor Ayesha......
I hate that Kamini...... 😑
Why Is she after our Veesha..... πŸ˜”

Hey Boshaa- don't worry, I have a solution for her, only in the FF unfortunately πŸ˜†
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Posted: 14 years ago


Good job ShrutiπŸ‘ Really enjoyed reading ur FF..y can't CVs make Veer act like thisπŸ˜•
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Part 17

After leaving the house, Ayesha goes over to see Pammi and explains all that has happened. Pammi is furious for Ayesha and asks what Ayesha is going to do.😑😑😑 Ayesha says that she wants to prove her innocence but sees no way at the moment especially as Veer too doubts her. Just then, Raj calls Pammi, supposedly about some hotel shift. Pammi is so angry about what has happened with Ayesha, she sounds very upset. 😑 Raj probes her about what is wrong and then Pammi explains Ayesha's situation. Raj is also shocked and after speaking to Pammi, calls Rahul to explain what Ayesha is being put through 😲. Rahul, who is still trying to get through to Sanjana, is livid at this chain of events and vows that he will fix this somehow 😑😲. In this way, Ayesha's friends rally around her πŸ€—πŸ€—.

Meanwhile, in Delhi, Veer is having difficulty tracing Mr Patil but just when he is about to lose hope, his agent calls him and says he has managed to trace Mr Patil with great difficulty ⭐️. Poor Mr Patil has been terrorised by the goon hired by Avinash and had therefore gone into hiding with a trusted friend. He had been too scared to attempt immediate contact with Kamini as he knew that Avinash would be around them and did not want to risk it. When Veer's agent traces him, he is initially terrified that Avinash has managed to find him but very relieved that it is Veer who has located him.

In this way, two days later, Veer manages to finally meet Mr Patil and the discussion that follows is a revelation for him. At first he refuses to believe Mr Patil and even thinks that his Jeeju could be right and that Mr Patil is trying to frame his Jeeju but Mr Patil is well prepared and has an entire brief of evidence prepared against Avinash, which he shows Veer β­οΈπŸ‘. When the truth is in black and white in front of him, Veer cannot hide from it anymore. He feels the pain of this betrayal and understands now how his beloved Jeeju has swindled millions from the business in fake accounts and funds 😲. He is also fearful of how his sister will react to this unbelievable discovery and also how hurt his mum will be. He arranges safe passage for Mr Patil to Mumbai, so he can speak to Kamini in person and then taking all the relevant evidence, decides to hurry back home.

Before getting on the flight, he decides to call Nihal and Ayesha. He wants to speak to his mum in person as he knows he will have to be careful not to alert Avinash that he is aware of his true colours. When he gets Nihal on the phone, Nihal is almost hysterical, crying and upset, saying his Maasi has left 😭😭! Veer cannot comprehend what he is hearing- Ayesha has left?! He gently tries to calm Nihal over the phone and asks what has happened. All Nihal is able to recount is that his Maasi was very upset and left and then his Daadi came to explain that his Maasi has done something very bad and she therefore had to leave so now Nihal must get used to being without her 😑. Veer is reeling from all of this 😲!

He spends the entire flight in a state of utter misery, not only coming to terms with his Jeeju's betrayal but also worried sick about what is happening with Ayesha 😭😲. He knows his mum does not like Ayesha but what can have happened that is so bad that Ayesha needs to leave the house?

He finds his Mum, Jeeju and Nandini waiting for him as soon as he gets home. Looking at the fake concern on his Jeeju's face makes him feel ill 😑. Before he can arrange it so he can speak to his mum in private, she launches in to an explanation about how she caught Ayesha stealing and therefore had no choice but to ask her to leave 😑😑. Veer stares at her in stunned disbelief. He asks her to explain how all this happened and when he hears about the missing money, he immediately realises that there is only one person who could have hidden the money and that is not Ayesha! He remembers that when he had stepped out of the room with his mum, Jeeju had been near the same cabinet! His mum, meanwhile, mistaking his silence and disgusted expression, as proof that he is angry with Ayesha, is charging ahead at the speed of a steam train, maligning Ayesha as much as she can 😑.

Finally, Veer can take no more and something inside him snaps 😑😑,

V: BAAS!!! Please chup hojaiye Mum! Aap bahut bol chuki. Abh thodi der ke liye please sunne ki koshish kijiye! πŸ‘

Kameeni's expression resembles that of a gasping fish and Avinash and Nandini too, look shocked to the core 😲.

K: VEER! Tum mujse aise baat kar rahe ho?!😲

V: MUM! Haan, kyunke aapne bahut badi bhool ki hai. Aap ne Ayesha par jo chori ka ilzam lagaya hai woh kitna bebuniyad hai, apko pata nahin hain. Ghar se kisiko nikal na tha, to apko Jeeju ko nikal na chahiye tha! 😑😑

At this, there is a gasp of shock from all three- Kamini, Nandini and even Avinash. Veer, ignoring this, turns on Avinash furiously 😑😑😑,

V: Jeeju! Aapne hamare saath aisa kiya? Mujhe yakin nahin hota ke aap hamare saath aisa kar sakte hain.

This causes a chaos in the room. Everyone starts talking almost all at once. Avinash puts up a really good show of being shocked and distraught and of-course denies it all. Veer then tells them that he has managed to speak to Mr Patil and has also seen the proof on paper πŸ‘. Soon, realising that he has been caught out, Avinash gives up pretending and then turns nasty. He brazenly says that he feels like the family has always mistreated him and whilst he has worked as hard and even harder than Kamini's sons, he feels he has always been overlooked for any rewards. He uses this as a justification for his misdeeds and in fact threatens Veer that should Veer try and expose him, he will make life very difficult for the Vardhans as he knows everything about the Hotel and their business dealings. He also reminds Kamini that he is married to her daughter and is the father of her grandson 😑😑. Kamini breaks down at all of this and is made worse at seeing Nandini get really upset and confused as to what is going on 😭😭. Veer wants to punch Avinash, especially when Avinash admits that he did take the money that Ayesha was accused of stealing 😑😑. However, Avinash then announces that he is temporarily leaving with Nandini and Bunty! Nandini is in a state of shock but is railroaded by Avinash and whilst hysterical, Kamini can do nothing. Veer is sad to see his sister leave but he knows he cannot immediately stop her and with a heavy heart, he lets her go, resolving that he will figure out a solution when he decides how to deal with Avinash πŸ˜”.

After they leave, Kamini collapses in tears again and tries to speak to Veer to justify why she thought it was all Ayesha's fault. However, this is the straw that broke the camel's back and Veer has had enough of his lovely Ayesha being blamed for such heinous deeds 😑😑😑.

V: Mom, aap ki Galati hain. Jo bhi tha, apne Ayesha ki ek nahin sooni? Aur mujse baat kyun nahin ki? In fact, main to heran hoon ke Ayesha mujse baat kiye bina ghar se chali kaise gayi? πŸ‘

Kamini is by now so shaken up and upset over the recent events that she breaks down further at this, and confesses that she told Ayesha that Veer did not want to speak to her 😑! She knows that serious damage control is now needed and after Avinash's deflection, she realises that she has made some serious mistakes and knows that matters will only get worse unless she tells Veer the whole truth. Hearing this makes Veer even more furious 😑😑😑.

V: Yeh apne kya kar diya Mom?! Jeeju to jeeju, aap bhi aisa bartav kar sakti he? Ayesha ne akhir kiya hi kya he mom jo aap usko itni nafrat karti hain? Hamesha usne Nihal ki hi nahin, hum sabh ki bhalayi chahi aur maine uske moo se kisike bare mein kohi burai nahin sooni. Aap jaanti thi ke me Ayesha se kitna kareeb achuka hoon aur apne usko yeh jhooth kahan.... Woh mere bare me kya sochti hogi? πŸ‘β­οΈ

K: Veer, beta, please mujhe maaf kardo. Mujse bahut galti ho gayi hain, mujhe ehsas hain. Dekho- me Ayesha se baat karke samjavungi aur maafi bhi mangu gi.

V: Mom, yeh sabh hum baad me soche ge lekin abhi me Ayesha se baat karna chahta hoon. Mein apse bad me baat karoonga πŸ‘πŸ‘.

Veer realises that his behaviour is painful to his mum but he is so furious and so worried about Ayesha, he is beyond caring of anything at present but trying to speak to Ayesha πŸ‘. However, before that, he goes to see Nihal and calms him down and reassures him that he is going to bring his Maasi back very soon πŸ‘πŸΌ. Guessing that Ayesha will be with Pammi, he calls Pammi and asks to speak to Ayesha. Pammi seems to hesitate but then passes the phone over to Ayesha.

Ayesha has over the past two days tried to totally harden her heart towards Veer as she is so hurt by what she thinks to be his betrayal. When she hears Veer's voice, all her anger comes flooding back.😑😑😑

V: Ayesha! Ayesha- mein abhi Delhi se lota hoon aur...

A: Welcome back Sir! Aap laut aye bahut acha hua lekin muje apke laut ne ya na lautne se abh kohi farak nahin padta. Mr Veer Vardhan Singh- apke parivar me se abh mujhe Nihal ke sivay kisise koi lena dena nahin hain. Kameeni ji ne apna aur apka mere bare me jo khayal hain woh bahut achi taraf se mujhe samja diya hain. Ya phir, abh aap mujhe police se darane ke irade se phone kar rahe hain? 😑

V: Ayesha! Please meri baat suno- aisa kuch nahin hain. Mujhe pata hain ke tumne chori nahin ki hi, woh to...

A: Bas Sir! Aap abh meri baat suniye kyun ke aap sabh se maine bahut sun bhi liya, aur seh bhi liya . Aap ko pata chal gaya ke maine chori nahin ki- uske liye to apko bada sa inaam milna chahiye πŸ‘. Apka inam yeh hai ke mein apse abhse kabhi bhi baat nahin karna chahti . Lekin, dhyaan rahe ke mein Nihaal se jooda nahin haungi πŸ‘. Agar aapne ya kisine bhi mujhe phir se Nihal se door kiya to me es faisle ke samne phir se ladoongi πŸ‘. Es samay me aap se baat nahin kar sakti. Aap please mujhe phir phone na kare.

V: Ayesha! Meri baat to soono...

A: Vaise hi, jaise aapne meri baat suni thi? πŸ‘

Without giving poor Veer a chance to explain anything more, she hangs up 😑. Veer looks at the phone with frustration and grief πŸ˜”. He feels like running over to Ayesha and making her listen to him but realises that the hurt goes too deep and is justifiable, given what his mother has told him. He decides that he will find a way to make Ayesha listen to him and he will go to any length to clear this misunderstanding. He cannot bear to think of Ayesha in pain as he knows she will be suffering without Nihal and he promises himself to correct the wrongs committed by his family and also to some extent, himself, as he never until now openly stood up to his family for her. πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘

End of Part 17

Next part: Veer makes amends and clears the misunderstanding.

Edited by ccolkat - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved IT!!!!
You are a wonderful writer........ 😳
Please cont soon.....
Cant wait for veesha lovestory πŸ˜›
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Posted: 14 years ago
sasriyakal shruti ji...

aap ne toh kamal hi kar diya... pata hai, aap ke dono parts se mein bohot khush hoon.. really cant wait for the next part to come.. please do continue as soon as possible.. love you loadz for this update...
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Posted: 14 years ago
gr88888 update.Sorry for late reply. I have just read your ff.Plzzz update next part soon.Really want to know what is gonna happen next.Thanxx for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi shruti di wt a gr8 part. well i really want to beg ayesha for forgivess and ofcourse she should accept it πŸ˜›. and thnks for the pm.πŸ‘πŸ‘
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Posted: 14 years ago
Great update di...Poor Veer. Can't wait for the next part. Wanna c a pasionate scene when Veer clears it all for Ayesha..
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