Thank you all for commenting and I Like dears- really appreciate your comments.
Himu/ Suman- twist was to do with Veer wanting to declare his feelings but he is prevented by something that happens which he does not expect.
Payal/ all: re, DD:- don't want her back but will have to bring her back soon unfortunately and somehow deal with her. But don't worry- I shall not be dragging a long-winded torture track.
So glad you all seem to like it- I found it quite difficult by the time I got to the last part, as the thoughts were coming through but I felt I was struggling to convey it all on paper (or screen really:)). Thanks again and Happy Valentine's to all you lovely friends.
S xxx
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