FF:Veesha aur Teesra Kaun?Part 21(pg26)updated - Page 15

kuttapu

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Awesome Shruti👍🏼👏.. I loved reading all the parts

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reepicheep

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Wow Shruti..isse kehte hain Valentine's dhamaaka...simply amazing👏 what a roller-coaster ride of emotions, funny and cute moments and romance...truly well-written👍🏼 👍🏼

The first chapter with veenisha was so sweet...loved the pledges by nihal and ayesha....especially with jai-divya's presence included..it made their bonding more special...picture perfect sweet family..

Valentine's ball chapter😍 😍 I love khuda jaane...and it suits veesha so well...hope someone makes a VM on it now.......Oho so we have sanjana now😉 I think she and Rahul like each other right?and I loved ayesha's jealousy part too...hmm she's also realizing her feelings for veer now...interesting....

And the last chapter was superb...oh thier confession got interrupted but it means we get an exclusive chapter on confession😉 😉
What twist have you planned Shruti? Is DD returning and fixing veer and sanjana's engagement or something😔

Superb work, keep it up👍🏼 Thanks for the PM😃 And wish you a very Happy Valentine's Day🤗

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Payal

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Hey Di...what a lovely episode. Just while reading...I was holding back my breath in excitement. The emotions which u have picturized are just way beyond awesome. The last chapter was marvelous. 👏

Toooo good. Waiting for the next twist. Hope DD doesn't pop up 🤢 🤢

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shonaveer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#144

reserved for writing ek badaaaa sa comment ;)

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sumankaul

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Posted: 14 years ago

#145

Mindblowing job Shruti ... 👏 All the 3 parts were wonderful.. Ab yeh tale mei naya twist kya hai ??? I hope it is a pleasant twist 😃 I enjoyed reading all the parts .. Thanks ...

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 14 years ago

#146

Thank you all for commenting and I Like dears- really appreciate your comments.

Himu/ Suman- twist was to do with Veer wanting to declare his feelings but he is prevented by something that happens which he does not expect.

Payal/ all: re, DD:- don't want her back but will have to bring her back soon unfortunately and somehow deal with her. But don't worry- I shall not be dragging a long-winded torture track.

So glad you all seem to like it- I found it quite difficult by the time I got to the last part, as the thoughts were coming through but I felt I was struggling to convey it all on paper (or screen really:)). Thanks again and Happy Valentine's to all you lovely friends.

S xxx

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Pickachu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#147

Sorry for late comment dear.I was studying so sorry for reading late.Anyways loveeee your parts as usual and looking forward for the twist u have put in the story.superb and mindblowing parts.Lovee the song selection.waiting for your next part.thanxx for the pm.

HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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