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Part 13

The next day after he managed to placate Ayesha, Veer was in high spirits. Part of the reason for this was the "make up" with Ayesha but the other part was also the very late meal they had both shared, of which all he could remember was Ayesha smiling at him and talking to him about various little things, having forgiven him about the saree incident. ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜Thinking of the saree, made Veer realise that he now had a new dilemna on his hands. How was he going to manage to give Ayesha the saree he had bought after his comments about Rahul and men who gave gifts for a reason to her?! ๐Ÿ˜•

V

(thinking to himself): Kya musibat create kardi. Abh mein kyan karun?

Veer also remembered that Ayesha had been very busy planning a Valentine's Day Ball at Rahul's hotel. This was going to be the big event for their hotel. Knowing this, Veer had made sure that there was no conflicting function at Ramada, but had instead allowed a big private function to be organised for Valentine's at Ramada. He had done this so that he could attend the party at Rahul's hotel. Whilst he is still in thought, Ayesha comes downstairs. Veer is surprised to see her as they normally miss each other in the mornings due to her shifts and his various meetings and committments.

V

: Ayesha! Good morning- aaj tum abh tak nahin gayi?

A

(having spotteed Veer and remembering the events of yesterday, is blushing despite herself): Haan, aaj mujhe der ho gayi aur aaj Nihal ke tests shuru ho rehe hain, isiliye maine Rahul Sir se kuch der se ane ki permission le li thi.๐Ÿ˜ณ

V

:Oh Ok. To phir saath me nasta karein?

A

: Mein abhi lagati hoon.

Veer tries to stop her but she rushes off to the kitchen. Veer smiles to himself as he was just about to get someone to bring the food out so he could sit down with Ayesha, but of-course it was typical of Ayesha's nature that she rushed off to do the work herself. Ayesha soon comes out with a number of hot dishes and starts placing them on the table before Veer.

V

: Ayesha! Tum yeh sab kaise manage kerti haun? Tum kal itni der se sone gayi, aaj kitne baje uthna pada hoga tumhe yeh sab banane? Ghar mein cook aur aur sabhi bhi hain....

Veer then notices that Ayesha has made his favourite breakfast dishes. He is touched as despite having many servants in the house, there is always little opportunity for anyone to particularly think of his specific likes and dislikes and to actually make the effort to make him something.๐Ÿค—

A

:Lekin mujhe apno ke liye yeh sab karna acha lagta hain.

She suddenly realises what she has said and starts to stutter...๐Ÿ˜ณ

A

: Ermm, woh, kya hain ke Nihal ke liye breakfast baanana mujhe acha lagta hain.

V

: Hmm, really? Waise yeh sabh to meri favourite dishes hai breakfast ke liye. Kya yeh Nihgal ki bhi favourite hain ya phir mere liye khaas bani hain?๐Ÿ˜‰

Ayesha furiously blushes at this and at the teasing tone in Veer's voice, which is now becoming all too familiar. โ˜บ๏ธ๐Ÿ˜ณJust then, Nandini enters and sits down with them. The difference with D3 not being there has been extremely positive on Nandini, who has slipped into an easy friendship with Ayesha. She thanks Ayesha for making the breakfast and asks about the plans for the Valentine's Ball at the hotel.

Ayesha animatedly starts to explain how big the event is going to be and in the midst of the conversation, keeps mentioning various things Rahul is organising. This makes the familiar jealously rear up in Veer's mind and he starts to resent the easy way in which Ayesha speaks of, and praises, Rahul.๐Ÿ˜ก However, when Nandini mentions going shopping that morning, this gives Veer a brainwave and he thinks he may have solved his problem about the saree! Whilst he is feeling pleased with himself over that, he notices that Ayesha has a tiffin-type box placed on the table.

V

: Ayesha, ees box mein kya hain?

A

: Yeh me Rahul Sir ke liye lejarahi hoon. Unone bataya ke unko bhi apki tara, yeh dish bahut achi lagti hain aur apke liye aaj banayi, to socha ke thoda sa unke liye bhi le jav.

This causes an instant flare of anger in Veer and at the same time he recorgnises that he is being petty, as Rahul is an extremely close friend and he knows that he does like that dish a lot too. Veer also misses the slip from Ayesha that she made the dish specially for him, as his growing jealousy keeps him from clear thoughts in Ayesha's case without fail.๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก Nandini has been observing the play of emotions on Veer's face but is not entirely sure of the reasons. Ayesha soon leaves for work.

V

: Di, mujhe apse ek favour chahiye.

N

: Haan Veer bolo, mere pyaare se chote bhai ko kya chahiye?

Veer then explains to Nandini that he has bought a saree and he thinks that Ayesha should wear that for the Ball. At seeing Nandini's surprised expression, he covers this up by saying that he is aware that Ayesha will never ask for anything and as the party will be so lavish, he wanted to make sure that she had something nice to wear. He also explains that Ayesha will never take a gift like that from him so he suggests that Nandini give her the saree, saying that she was out shopping and bought it for herself, but seeing it at home made her realise it is not really her style. Veer tells Nandini to insisit to Ayesha that she take it and wear it for the ball, and for Nandini to tell Ayesha that she will feel offended otherwise. Veer also asks her to tell Ayesha that Nandini went shopping in the boutique in Ayesha's hotel, where she got the saree from and to pretend surprise when Ayesha mentions she saw the same saree. Nandini is thoughtful at this request, which is very unlike Veer but she keeps her views silent as she is aware that when it comes to Ayesha, Veer always tends to act out of character.

Having organised this important task, our hero takes himself off to work, still lost in thought over Ayesha and still feeling resentful that Rahul is to receive a food parcel from her!๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ก



End of Part 13
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Posted: 14 years ago
Guys- updated and this part is kind of boring but it had to be done for the events of later. The next might be the Valentine's epi so will try and work on that. Sorry this is rather dull dears.๐Ÿ˜”
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey Shruti........ dont get disheartened dear...... its not boring......in fact its good with jealous veer & few light veesha moments.......... waiting for ur next bumper update....... u rock๐Ÿ‘

anshu

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Posted: 14 years ago

Nice update Shruti!!๐Ÿ˜Š It's not dull at all..eagerly waiting for the next part๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sweet update shruti .. i liked the way u r making valentine event as special for veesha but yeh don't forget nihal presence too ..Veesha in every of their moment is incomplete without nihal except their suhag raat lol
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Hey Shruti di..its not at all boring....but then u r dere giving us a bumper episode....n Guys...dats only ma gift....๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰ Ma b'day gft....ryt di??

Neway...the episode was relli good.....as Anshu said....Veer and his jealousies... was really good...n waiting for the bumper episode......make it soon!! Aab to raha hi nahi jata...
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Hi Shruti, what is it with you and Payal declaring your latest parts as boring๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† believe me dear its not at all boring...it was very sweet...and kept the flow of the story nicely...in fact such a scene was needed after the emotionally charged previous chapter....it was light and fun...and veer still being jealous was cute.....

Thanks for the PM...and waiting for the dhamaal valentine chapter๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Oh I hope we get a valentine's epi in the show too๐Ÿ˜

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Posted: 14 years ago
not boring at all.Loveeee your update and veer's jeolousy part is superb.Looking forward to your next part.It seems like it will turn romantic.Sorry for late comment.I have read the part right now.
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Friends, this is Part 14 but as it will be more than one episode, I am trying for a "Valentine's Week Special". The entire "Valentine's series" is especially dedicated to our darling Payal for her birthday, which is on Valentines Day!!!! and the first mini-episode with Veenisha is also dedicated to Kiran (as she loves Veenisha moments!). Of-course, overall it is dedicated to all you lovely people on IF: Deepu, Himani, Tia, Pink, Roshni, Arpita, Anjana, Fatima, Kuttu, Foxs, Mel, Anshu and all the others too (sorry if I have forgotten anyone!)! ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—

PAYAL- HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU ALL THIS WEEK SWEETIE!!!๐Ÿค—

Part 14 (a)

Nihal came back from school and was spending quality time with his two favourite people- Chachu and Maasi. All three are in Nihal's room, talking to him on his bed.

N: Chachu, maasi- mujhe aap dono se zaroori baat karni thi.

V: Haan Nihal bolo- hum sun rahe hain.

N: Aap ko pata hai, Sunday ko kya hone wala hain?

Veer and Ayesha look at each other in confusion, racking their brains as to what important date they are missing.๐Ÿ˜•

N: Oh ho, aap dono bhi naa. Budhu ho- Sunday ko Valentine's Day hain!

Light dawns on Veer and Ayesha's faces.

V/A: Ahhhh!!!

N: Haan to. Aur Maasi- aap bhi bhool gayi, jabh ke aap to apni hotel mein party keliye kitna kam kar rahi ho.

A: Haan Nihal, sorry mein bhool gayi. Lekin party Saturday ko hain na to mujhe Sunday kuch yaad nahin raha.

N: Theek hain. Aaj school mein sabh yeh baat kar rahe the. Hame teacher ne kaha hai ke hum jisse pyaar karte hain uske liye cards banaye, isiliye main aap dono ke liye card banaraha hoon lekin mujhe Chachu ke card ke liye Maasi ki help chahiye aur Maasi ke card ke liye Chachu ki. Aap dono meri madat karoge na?

Veer and Ayesha give him a wide and loving smile and then exchange a proud glance over his head at their "baby" and his loving ways.๐Ÿ˜ƒ

V: Haan Nihal of-course hum tumhari help karenge.

N: Ok thank-you. Aur phir- aap dono ko bhi to apne apne cards banane hain naa? Mein usme apki help karsakta hoon.๐Ÿ‘

At this, Veer and Ayesha both glance at each other with a surprised look.

A: Nihal, kya?? Humhe cards kyun banane hain beta? Aisa thoda hota hain?

Veer had been about to protest at the suggestion too out of reflex, but hearing Ayesha outright refuse to give him a card somehow pinched and he didn't say anything for a moment.

N: Maasi! Aap yeh kya kehrahi ho? Aap Chachu ko card nahin dengi? Teacher ne bola, jo acha lage usko card desakte hain. To kya aapko Chachu pasand nahin hain? Aap to unki dost ho? To phir card nahin dogi? ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ˜†

Ayesha is now furiously blushing and trying to implore Veer with her eyes to come to her rescue ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ. Veer is however, beginning to enjoy this conversation and Ayesha's obvious discomfort and is in no mood to take her side on this.๐Ÿ˜›

N (turning to Veer): Chahcu?! Aap to Maasi ko card dene wale the naa? Aap bhi unke dost hain aur woh apko achi lagti hain naa?

V (slightly embarrassed at Nihal's choice of words but still not as much as Ayesha): Hmmm, waise, main to card Maasi ko dene wala tha, lekin lagta hain ke tumhari Maasi mujhe pasand nahin karti aur card nahi denewali. Koi baat nahi Nihal, tum hi card dena, me chala loonga. ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰(This is said with a fake downcast expression but with a smile lurking at the corner of his mouth, which widens when he sees Ayesha's angry look).๐Ÿ˜†

A: Huh! Aap dono ka mazak bahut ho gaya! ๐Ÿ˜ก

At this, Nihal looks very sad and in almost a whisper says,

N: Mere sabh dost school mein apne mummy-papa ko card banane ke liye kehne waale hai, aur Arnav bhi apne mummy papa ko kahega. Lekin me to yeh nahin karsakta na?๐Ÿ˜ญ

Both Veer and Ayesha look shocked at this and Ayesha's eyes immediately fill up with tears. She hugs Nihal to her:๐Ÿ˜ญ

A: Arey, Nihal! Aisa nahin kehte. Aur yeh kya- tum aise mayoos hogaye? Dekho- isme kya hain. (Looking over his head at Veer) Ok, theek hain, main tumhare Chachu keliye card loongi aur tum meri help kardena? Acha?๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Veer looks into Ayesha's eyes, still swimming with tears and at her clutching Nihal and his heart also wells up to see the two people who seem to have quickly become the centre of his existence. ๐Ÿ˜He also leans over and hugs Nihal and in the process, cannot avoid putting his arm around Ayesha on one side. ๐Ÿค—They stay like that for a moment and then Ayesha realises that Veer is not just holding Nihal but almost her as well. She reluctantly breaks away, blushing and confused โ˜บ๏ธ. Nihal is now happy and they continue to have a nice evening with the issue of cards having been decided.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

End of Part 14(a)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Shruti, this was sooooooooooooooooooooooo adorableโค๏ธ โค๏ธ loved the veenisha moment...aww nihal is such a cutie-pieโค๏ธ โญ๏ธ little cupid already at work๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ can't wait for the valentine chapter...

great chapter...keep it up...and thanks for the PM and the dedication๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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