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Part 11

When the Jackal comes eventually comes back home, he is faced with a situation that he does not like at all. When he is informed of why his Saasu Maa has gone to Delhi, the panic sets in, as he immediately works out that the money he has been withholding from the trust funds over the past few years has been discovered and this is what Khatwani was warning him to be careful of. If D3 starts digging too deep, he knows that he will get into trouble so he decides to go to Delhi too and try to either bribe the trustees or if that fails, to try and threaten them somehow. He pretends to be shocked at the missing funds in front of Veer and Nandini and swears blind that he has been faithfully depositing everything promptly so he doesn't understand what has happened. He then starts to tell Veer that he is convinced that the main trustee, Mr Patil, is up to something and has probably been defrauding Kameeni. At the same time, he creates an "on the spot" excuse about some crisis with a friend in Delhi and says that he will also leave for Delhi. There he can help his friend and also offer help to Kameeni if needed. He therefore leaves for Delhi too, which is of-course great news for Veer and Ayesha and Nihal.🥳🥳

At present, all of Veer's thoughts seem to be taken over by Ayesha and his feelings for her, which as hard as he tries, he cannot suppress. He finds that he is constantly waiting to see her and when she is not around, he feels strangely restless and agitated. Unknown to him, Ayesha is pretty much in the same boat but also unable to acknowledge that she feels this way because of Veer; all she knows is that if she finds being around Veer very confusing, being away from him causes even more anxiety.😕

It is in one of these states, with unacknowledged eagerness to see Ayesha, that Veer makes his way over to Rahul's hotel; again with the pretext of planning for the convention. He arrives at lunch time and is wondering if Ayesha will be on her lunch break as he did not think through the timings before he left his office. Just as he enters the main lobby of the hotel and is about to pass by the exclusive boutique on the ground floor, on the way to the lifts, he notices Ayesha through the window of the boutique. He immediately stops on the side (where she cannot see him and she has her back half to the window anyway). She is looking at a saree on the counter, which has been spread out for her to inspect.

It is a shimmery white material with just a deep red border with small diamantes sprinkled across the whole material. It is simple but so beautiful in its simplicity and so elegant, that he immediately thinks of Ayesha when looking at it. It is a saree that his mum or even his sister and any of the other women in their social circle would probably dismiss as being too plain but it has an impact that would come from the right person wearing it, and he can see that it would be perfect for Ayesha. However, he notices her ask the shop assistant a question and then her face drops and the smile on her face fades. With one last feel of the shimmery material, Ayesha reluctantly puts the saree down and takes a small step back. Veer feels as if a light has gone out and cannot help but head straight into the shop, his only thought being that Ayesha must buy that saree and he is going to find out why she is putting it back.👍🏼

Just as he steps in the shop, he hears someone call out to Ayesha. His heart sinks as he recognises Rahul's voice from the other side of the shop. Veer is as yet unnoticed and steps further in to the shop.

R: Ayesha, dekho to, isme se kon si achi hai?

Still keeping a fairly safe distance behind so as not to be noticed, he sees Ayesha head towards a smiling Rahul, who has spread about 10 glittering sarees out at another counter.

A: Sir! Itni sare sarees! Aap kya sari dukan khareed ne waale hain kya?

R: Isiliye to tumhe saath laaya hoon, kyun kai tum meri choose karne me madad karsako. Waise, itne special person ke liye saree kharidni ho to mein sari dukan bhi khareed sakta hoon, kyun?

Rahul says the last bit with a wink and a wide smile😉. Veer feels the familiar rush of jealously and anger, only it is even more intense this time. He is furious that Rahul is buying Ayesha a saree and that Ayesha has happily come with him to choose one. He cannot understand how Ayesha would agree to let Rahul buy her clothes when she is so proud and therefore assumes that the relationship between them is much closer than he had guessed, and this is unbearable to him.😡

Whilst he is still standing seething, Ayesha quickly scans through the items Rahul has picked out and selects a very ornate but beautiful piece. Veer is even more angry as this piece is exactly the sort of "high society" piece his mum and her friends would buy and very different from the piece he just saw Ayesha admiring. Rahul seems happy enough with the choice and hurries to pay.

Ayesha turns around, still smiling widely, and sees Veer standing there with a murderous expression on his face.

A: Veer! Aap! Aap kabh aye? Her smile fades as she notices his expression and she starts to feel confused.😕

V (through clenched teeth and glaring): Thodi der pehle aaya, sorry tumhe aur Rahul ko interrupt kiya.😡😡

A (frowning a little now): Nahi, aisi koi baat nahin hain, woh Rahul Sir ko saree choose karne main help chahiye thi aur……

V: Aur tumne socha ke kyun na Rahul Sir ki help kardu?! Akhir mein agar Rahul Sir tumhare liye saree khareed rahe hain, to acha hi hai agar tum apni choice ki saree khareedo, hain naa? Vaise idea acha hai Ayesha.

Ayesha is reeling at what Veer is saying as well as the expression on his face. He has reverted to being the Veer Vardhan Singh who looked at her with constant anger and there is no sign of the Veer of the past few weeks.😭😲

A: Veer, aap galat samaj rahe hain….

V: Ayesha, tumhe mujhe safayi denhe ki koi zaroorat nahin hain. Agar tum Rahul se istara ki gift lena chahti ho to yeh mujse kohi maine nahi rakhta. Tumhe sirf itna batana chahta hoon ke tum yeh mat bhoolna ke aksar aise gift dene ke peeche ladko ka koi matlab hota hai.😡

Now this is rich coming from Veer, who five minutes ago wanted to rush in and buy Ayesha the saree she was admiring, with no other intention but to make her happy and see her wearing the beautiful outfit at some point!

Ayesha recovers from her shock at these accusations to feel a hot wave of anger swamp her. Veer meanwhile is in full flow and continues:

V: Agar tumhe nayi saree ki zaroorat thi, to mujhe ya ghar mein kisiko batati. Yeh to aisa lagta hai ke tum hamare saath rehti ho aur hum tumhara khayal nahi rakhte isiliye tumhe kisise aise gift lena padta hain. Ya phir yeh gift tumhare Rahul Sir ki taraf se hain, isiliye tumhe laine me aitraaz nahin?👎🏼

Ayesha has heard enough.

A: Bas! Bahut ho chuka aur apne bohut bol liya. Aap mera hi nahin, apne dost ka bhi apman kar rahe hain. Mere baare mein to apne hamesha bura socha hain, aur yeh meri galat fehmi thi ki pichle kuch deeno mein aap mujhe apna dost mante hai aur mere baare mein apki rai badal gayi hain, lekin Rahul Sir ko to aap bachpan se jaante hain. Phir bhi apne soch liya ke woh mujhe bure irade se gift kharid kar denge?! Aur, mein itni gir gayi hoon ke me kisise aise gift loongi. Aur jahan tak aapse gift leneki baat hain- mein aapke ghar me zaroor rehti hoon, par kisise maine kabhi bheek na li hai aur na kabhi lungi. Jabh Kamini ji apne kherat ke kapde mujhe zabardasti de gayi thi, to unko bhi maine kabhi nahi pehna. Yeh sunke mujhe aisa lagta hai ke maine apke ghar me rehkar bahut galti kar di.😡

She is so angry now, she cannot bear to be near Veer and she stalks past him and dashes out of the shop as quickly as she can.

Meanwhile, Rahul had finished paying for his saree and had caught enough of the conversation to understand what had happened. He walks over to Veer, who only now notices him.

R: Shabash Veer, tumne to kamal kardiya.

Veer looks like he will punch Rahul but Rahul is sensible enough to keep a bit of a distance and quickly continues.

R: Veer, tum itne intelligent ho kar aisi bevakufi kaise kar sakte ho? Tum kya Ayesha ko itna bhi nahin pehchante ke tumne aisa samaj liya ke mein use aisi gift kharid kar doonga aur voh aisi gift accept karlegi?!!

At this, Veer looks very confused and stares at Rahul in shock.

R: Haan Veer. Yeh joh tumne dekha, ke main Ayesha ki madad se saree kharid raha tha, voh theek tha, lekin yeh saree maine apne Mum ke liye kharidi hai!!

Veer feels like someone has punched him in the stomach (which Rahul metaphorically has I suppose!) and the penny suddenly drops for him.😲😲😲

V: Kya!! Oh my God- yeh maine kya kardiya.

R: Bilkul Veer. Ees bar to tumne aise blunder maara hain ke mujhe man karta hain ke me tumhe thapad doon. Ayesha jitni imandar aur khuddar ladki ko tumne aisi baatein sunadi. Haan- mein samaj sakta hoon ke tum mujhe abhi bhi college kya playboy samaj te ho, lekin mere mi bhi itni akal hai ke Ayesha un ladkiyon me se nahin hai!!👏

V: Rahul, I am really sorry! Please mujhe maaf kardo dost. Maine bilkul galat samja lekin pata nahin kyun, tumhe aur Ayesha ko dekh kar jaise mujhe kuch dikhayi hi nahi diya aur maine bina soche kya kya keh diya. Abh me kya karoo?

This whole scene has made a few things dawn on Rahul and he smiles thoughtfully.

R: Chalo main to maafi accept karleta hoon, kyu ke mein jaanta hoon ke tum pehle se hi uloo ho, lekin abh Ayesha ka kya karoge?😉

This is an excellent question and one that Veer is now tremendously worried about too.

End of Part 11

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi Shruti, wow 2 updates within a day...am not able to keep pace now😆 😆 just kidding, haven't had the time to read them as of yet...will comment after reading...thanks and keep it up😃
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Nice one😊..Jealous Veer is awesome!!
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loveeeee the update dear.Plzzz update some more and thanxx for pm. fatima
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Hey Shruti....thanks a lot...Sorry for the late update...but I guess....now u will have to bear with my late comments. Classes started....na...issiliye!!!

Neway...back to topic....Loveeyy-dovey episode...just loved it...The way u had picturised it is really very good. Loved both the episodes....Keep rocking girl...Hope to c some strong VeeSha moments....as D3 are nt here....Loved it/////mwuahhhh ⭐️
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Hey Shruti, just finished reading both the parts...they were fantastic, awesome, superb⭐️
loved the 10th part...that scene where nihal asks ayesha to kiss veer😳 😳 and the last part, too good...that was so cute...loved the naughty veer...

part 11, ah jealous veer...cool, he was not just jealous , he was super jealous...ab kya karega bechara..kaise manayega ayesha ko?
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Hmm misunderstanding and misunderstandings ...chalo piyar main to yeh sab package keh tor pe saath main hotey hain ..i m sure Veer our robinhood ussey mana ley ga Wesay do i need to say another brilliant part ..yaar i m short of good words so please undertsand urself that i love ur FF and every chapter of it
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Wow! Shruti!

Simply fabulous updates!😉

Nihaal toh kuch zyaada hi mature hai! Aur ye boutique ka scene bhi perfect tha!!!👏

I want Veer to buy that saree for Ayesha and keep it wid him till things get well between them and give it to her sometym in the future... kyuki abhi dega to Ayesha uska galat intention samjegi, aakhir usine to kaha tha na aisa...😆

Waiting eagerly for the next update! Am simply in love wid ur FF!😳

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Hey... Dis is simply Amazing.... update nxt part soon plz.... 👍🏼
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Part 12

After the incident with Veer in the boutique, it took Ayesha a little while to compose herself enough to be able to get back to her desk. Whilst she was still upset, she forced herself to carry on working.

Meanwhile, Veer is in a quandary. He knows that he has really overstepped the mark this time and that Ayesha is going to be furious with him. Rahul makes it worse by laughing at his predicament, and then leaving to go back to his desk 😆. Veer, even whilst wondering what to do to appease Ayesha, asks the sales assistant about the same saree Ayesha was admiring. On being informed of the price, Veer guesses that Ayesha must have put it aside due to the cost. He cannot help himself and buys the saree, at the same time acknowledging that if he tries to give it to Ayesha, her reaction will be far from pleasant, especially given his comments about Rahul's supposed reasons for wanting to buy her a saree! Veer thinks that he will figure this out later but buys the saree nevertheless.

Asking for the saree to be delivered to him, he walks up to Ayesha's desk to apologise. He immediately notices that Ayesha looks unhappy and also looks as if she has been crying. Veer's conscience springs into high gear and he wants to take that unhappy look away from Ayesha's face. As soon as she sees him, Ayesha's expression turns even more sour. After shooting him a furious glance, she studiously looks down on her desk at some work.

V: Ayesha, please meri baat soono.

A: Sir, aapko Rahul Sir se baat karni hai to mein unhe kehti hoon ke aap aaye hain, varna mujhe aur koi baat nahin karni. 😡

V: Lekin Ayesha….

A: Sir please….. Mein abhi koi baat nahi karsakti, mujhe yeh kaam complete karna hai.😡😡

Veer is very frustrated but knows that he cannot stand here and create another scene so he sighs and with a long look at Ayesha's bent head, goes back to his office, thinking all along how he is going to fix this mess 😕. At the office, Raj notices that Veer is very tensed and asks what is wrong. Veer confesses that he has upset a "friend" but does not admit who it is and is worried about how to make them forgive him. Raj suggests in a joking manner that if the "friend" is a girl, flowers are always a good idea. Raj has a suspicion that this "friend" maybe Ayesha due to the way Veer is speaking about the incident 😉. Hearing this suggestion, Veer smiles widely and thanks Raj. He immediately gets on the phone.

Back at Ayesha's desk, a little while later, there is a delivery of a huge bunch of flowers, with a note stuck on it. Ayesha sees the flowers arrive but is stunned to find that they are for her 😲. She opens the note, which simply reads:

"I am sorry! Mujhe maaf kadro please? Veer"

Ayesha tries to send the flowers back but the courier says that he is not authorised to take them back and was told that if delivery was not accepted, the flowers had to be left here. Ayesha has the flowers placed on one corner and tries to get on with her work. However, within the next half hour, another delivery arrives, with yet more flowers but this time with a small toy bear on it holding a note,

"Mein saj mein bahut sorry hoon, please……."

Again, Ayesha does the same and has the flowers put aside.

Veer is not about to give up so easily, and soon one more set of flowers with a note and a chocolate arrive,

"Jabh tak tum maaf nahin karo gi mein sorry kehta rahoon ga"

Ayesha is getting flustered now but is nowhere near forgiving Veer. She continues to ignore this delivery and the three that come after it, all with similar notes. It is now almost the end of the day and Rahul walks out. Seeing the array of bouquets piled around, he immediately realises what is happening.

R: Ayesha! Tumne Veer ko abhi bhi maaf nahin kiya? Arey, please use maaf kardo varna mera hotel bagicha ban jaye ga……😉😉

A: I am so sorry Sir, me yeh sabh phool abhi hi fikwa deti hoon.

R: Arey, arey, iski kya zaroorat hain? Itne ache phool? Bechara Veer, lagta hain ke woh sachme sharminda hain, varna Veer ko itni takleef lete maine bahut kam dekha hain….🤣

Ayesha chooses to ignore these hints but despite herself her anger has slightly abated. However, she pulls herself together and reminds herself of how she hated Veer's words to her, spoken with such anger. She picks the phone up and dials Veer's office number. The phone is snatched up and Veer answers,

V: Veer Vardhan Singh

A: Sir……..

V: Ayesha! Thank God tumne phone kiya. Tumne mujhe maaf kardiya?

A: Sir, aap please yeh phool bhejna bandh kariye. Rahul Sir ko acha nahin lage ga. Apko mujhe phool bhejne ki kohi zaroorat nahin hain aur iska kohi faida bhi nahin hoga. Mein woh saare phool fikwa chuki hoon.

Saying this, she slams the phone down. Veer feels very dejected but annoyed at the same time.

V (to himself): Abh mein kya karoo? Phool fikwa diye?! Aur Rahul Sir ko acha lage na lage uski mujhe kyun parva ho!😡

Veer decides that his plan will need to continue at home and he leaves the office as soon as he can. At home, he makes a beeline for Nihal's room and sits him down.

V: Nihal, aaj tumhe apne Chachu ko help karni hain, bahut zaroori baat hain.

N: Kya Chachu? Mein to hamesha apki help karne ko tayyar hoon!

V: Thanks buddy! Suno- tumhari Maasi mujse bahut goosa hain, aur mera sorry kabool hi nahin karti, Oos din jabh tumse goosa hooyi thi aur meine pata ne mein madad ki thi, aaj tumhe wohi karna hoga.

N: Oh ho Chachu! Apne kya kiya jo Maasi ko goosa kardiya?! Acha, mein madad karoonga.😊

When Ayesha gets back, she finds that Veer had enlisted help from Nihal but she remains firm and refuses to talk to Veer.

A: Nihal, apne Chachu se kehdo ke mujhe unse kohi baat nahin karni. Vaise bhi, mujhe apne room mein kaam hain. Tumne khana khaya?

N: Haan Maasi, lekin…….

Ayesha refuses to hear anymore and with one more angry look at Veer, she rushes off to her room and firmly shuts her door. Soon after, there is a soft knock on the door.

A: Kaun hai?

V: Ayesha, mein hoon. Please darvaza kholo- mujhe kuch kehna hai. Aur tumne khana bhi nahi khaya….

A: Sir! Please aap chale jayiye. Mein khana nahi chahti aur mujhe koi baat nahin sunni.

V: Ok Ayesha, to mein yahin bahar wait karoonga aur mere saath Nihal bhi hain.

A: Aap dono ko wait karni hain to kijiye.😡😡

Ayesha is determined not to give in and stays in her room. She is convinced that they will not wait long, especially Nihal as it is almost his bedtime. However about an hour later, she is still feeling restless and agitated. She is also very hungry but does not want to admit this. She decides to peek out of the door (telling herself that there is no way Veer is still outside).

When she tentatively opens the door, she does not immediately see anything and telling herself "I knew it!" she steps out slightly, thinking she will get some water. As soon as she steps out, she notices that by the side of her door, Veer is sitting on the floor and Nihal is asleep on his lap! This shocks Ayesha and she steps out further and kneels next to them in shock.

A: Veer!! Nihal!!😲😲

Veer is looking rather tired and at her voice Nihal suddenly jumps up.

N: Maasi!

Ayesha grabs him and hugs him.🤗

A: Nihal! Yeh sab kya hain? Tum yahan room ke bahar….

Veer is just looking at Ayesha but does not say anything.

N: Haan Maasi, lekin Chachu ne kaha to tha ke agar aap maaf nahin karogi to hum yahan hi bethe ge.

A: Veer! Yeh kaisi zid hain?! Is tara se room ke bahar? Aur Nihal ko abh tak yahan….

V: Hum tumhara intezar kar rahe the aur Nihal ko neend agayi; mein use jagana nahin chahta tha. Mein to yahan se nahin jaa sakta tha jabh tak tumne maaf nahin kiya.👏👏

Ayesha does not really know what to say. How can she stay annoyed at Veer when he is like this. She feels terrible that both of them have waited for so long for her outside her room.

N: Haan Maasi, aur apne khaya bhi nahin tha. Apko pata hain, Chachu ne bhi nahin khaya?⭐️⭐️

At this, Ayesha's anger melts- she feels very guilty and it does not matter that she too has not eaten but the thought of Veer having stayed hungry is very unpleasant to her.

V: Ayesha, please, abh apna goosa thook do. Mujhe tumse woh sabh nahin kehna chahiye tha. Mein bilkul janta hoon ke tum kitni honhaar ho, lekin us waqt mujhe pata nahin kya huva tha. Maine Rahul se bhi maafi mangli hain. Me sirf yeh nahin chahta ke koi tumhare achepan ka boora fayda uthaye.👏

Ayesha looks at him, stunned. They both stare at each other and seem not to be able to look away😍. Nihal makes an impatient movement and they both look away.

A: Acha, abh bahut huva. Chalo, maine maaf kardiya. Abh is bare mein kohi baat kar
neki ki zaroorat nahin. Chalo, Nihal tumhe apne room me chod dete hain aur aap khana khalijiye.

V: Acha, lekin ek sharat par- ke tum bhi mere saath khana khao gi.😊

Ayesha blushes but agrees and after putting Nihal to bed, they both head off to the kitchen, where Ayesha heats up some food and they both eat. They both feel happy again and neither can really remember what they ate, just that it felt wonderful to be "friends" again.😳😍
End of Part 12
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