I Love You - Mini FF - Pt 2 - P 3 - Jan 4 - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: CanadaKudi



thank u di u can use any pics coz i dnt have any gr8 veesha pics.



well, fine.. i will take some time.. like 1 or 2 days.. will PM you the sig :)

- deepu 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hats off to u Deepu👏.........man gaye aap ko u r chota guru of ff.......everytime time u come with a different concept👍🏼 and only an expert can do that😊..........

i feel bad for veer his mom and sis did'nt do the right thing........hope aysha will treat veer nicely in the upcoming parts and all of them start living like a family agn😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#13


will be waiting.. take your own time...

- deepu 😃
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Great deepu, nice start to the new year...a new cool fic from you😃
Love the concept, ok i tried to get very angry with veer when he was shouting at ayesha,but kya karron failed miserably😳
And that daadi such a trouble maker😡
Good you showed nandini as a strong person here, loved ayesha's cool reactions to veer....but yaar veeru ko aur mat tadapao,jaldi se veesha milan karvaooo...
so is veesha's child going to make an entry in the next part?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi,
I really liked it..you should defo continue the story,am eager to know what happens next!!
Thank you!! 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: romaila

hats off to u Deepu👏.........man gaye aap ko u r chota guru of ff.......everytime time u come with a different concept👍🏼 and only an expert can do that😊..........

i feel bad for veer his mom and sis did'nt do the right thing........hope aysha will treat veer nicely in the upcoming parts and all of them start living like a family agn😃


hehe. thanks a lot romaila.. you made my day today. hehe.. chota guru. LOL. aww.. thanks a lot yaar.. i am on the moon today. so, aap ko aaj update mil rahi hai... 😆 actually, likhne ka man kar raha hai aaj. i also feel bad for naughty chocolate. poor one.. but galti kiya na.. ab sudharega usko. dekhte hai ki kaise karega. i hope the same too.. keep reading and commenting as your comments mean a lot to me.

- deepu 😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: ht312

Great deepu, nice start to the new year...a new cool fic from you😃

Love the concept, ok i tried to get very angry with veer when he was shouting at ayesha,but kya karron failed miserably😳
And that daadi such a trouble maker😡
Good you showed nandini as a strong person here, loved ayesha's cool reactions to veer....but yaar veeru ko aur mat tadapao,jaldi se veesha milan karvaooo...
so is veesha's child going to make an entry in the next part?



thanks a lot for such a sweet comment himani.. a new fic for the new year.. 😉 glad to know that, you love this concept. well, mein bhi naughty chocolate se naraz nahi hoon.. hehe.. jald hi jald un donon ko milaoongi. dont worry. part coming up in another hour. 😃

- deepu 😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: kimanie87

Hi,
I really liked it..you should defo continue the story,am eager to know what happens next!!
Thank you!! 😊



thank you so much for the comment. will continue in an hour. thanks for liking my concept.

- deepu 😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
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kimanie87, CanadaKudi, nehara, ht312, kiran_rd,
thanks a lot for pressing the LIKE button

- deepu 😃



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Posted: 14 years ago
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part two

ayesha looked at him.. she was shocked for a moment but she came back to her self for a while and responded.

ayesha: yes sir. how can i help you ?

veer: ayesha...

his eyes started getting watery.. he thought of hugging her..

ayesha: excuse me sir.. how can i help you ?

veer: i.. i.. have.. a.. i mean.. i have a.. reservation..

ayesha: welcome to the holiday inn sir.. may i know your name please !!

veer: tum mere naam bhi bhool gayi ayesha ?

ayesha: may i know you name please sir ?

veer: it is on the name of veer vardhan singh..

ayesha: well, yes sir.. room number 1102.. here is your room's key card. john, could you please escort mr. singh to his room...

john: yeh ms. sharma.

she stared at him for a while. he changed completely. there was no charm on his face. his smile was not reaching his eyes and he was like a person, who lost something precious in his life. her heart ached to see him in that situation but he was the person who left her and her princess. yes. they had a baby girl. she corrected herself. she was her daughter. not their daughter anymore. he did not know about their child's existence also. she resumed back to the work, when he caught her staring at him. she felt his watery eyes but remained calm

he went to his room as soon as possible and left all his luggage there and made a phone call. as soon as he was done with his call, he proceeded to the lobby and sat there, watching ayesha. he smiled at her uncomfortableness and kept observing her. ayesha was conscious of the gaze that was falling on her, but could not move away from her desk. she was having loads of work to do. but she felt relieved when she heard someone call her from behind.

vijay mehra: ayesha..

ayesha: yes sir..

vijay: ayesha.. come along..

ayesha: okay sir..

he saw her following the owner of the hotel and a smirk came on to his face. ayesha's smile faded and her heart pounced, when she found vijay, her boss, taking her to the place where veer is sitting.

vijay: well, ayesha, please take your seat.

she sat infront of veer. she did not know what to do. she just thought of following the instructions of her boss and be normal and she succeeded in doing so. she frankly raised her head and looked into the eyes of veer and he read her eyes and smiled at her.

vijay: ayesha, this is my best friend as well as your new boss, veer vardhan singh.. and veer, this is ayesha.. one of my good friends, and she is one of the best workers in the hotel. she knows the work of each and every department A - Z of this hotel and she is going to be your personal assistant from now on.

ayesha: sir, aur aap..

vijay: ayesha.. as you know, mujhe india wapas mom dad ke paas jaana hai and veer was happy to settle here. so, i am giving all the responsibilities to him. you know, i am really going to miss you.

ayesha: me too sir. have a good day.

vijay: okay then, so, let us proceed to veer's cabin now.

three of them go to vijay's cabin and vijay will make veer to sit on the CEO's chair. he then points out the connected cabinet, in which ayesha's chair is placed. veer felt delighted and happy, while ayesha felt vulnerable and horrible. she will have to sit in THAT place from that moment.

vijay: ayesha, aaj se tum wahan par baithogi. and haan, tum koi aur kaam sambhalna mat... no reception, no housekeeping and no management of the evennts and parties. i know.. tumhare help ke bina saare departments ko takleef hogi but i will manage them some how. you have to guide veer in all the affairs of the hotel since he is new here. i am sure you will be the best option for him. okay then. me leaving now. byeee...

he hugs ayesha while leaving and veer's blood starts boiling. he shifts his gaze and looks out of the window but again comes back when he hears ayesha talking to HIM.

ayesha: sir, ab mein chalti hoon. agar kuch chahiye toh, i will be available on this phone number.

she places her extension number card on his desk and will be about to leave but veer calls her back.

veer: ayesha..

ayesha: yes sir..

veer: you know, please call me veer. only veer..

ayesha: i am comfortable by addressing you as "sir", sir..

veer knew that she was stubborn and he remained helpless in that situation. he just nodded his head.

ayesha: sir, kya mein jaa sakti hoon ?

veer: well, mujhe hotel ke har jagah dekhna hai. so, lets go. that is the first step of knowing about this hotel.

he felt that, that is the one option to be with her and know more about their child.

ayesha: ji sir..

veer and ayesha keep moving...

ayesha: sir, yeh hotel ki CCTV room hai.. saare camera's ke operation issi room mein hota hai and hotel ke saare corridors mein CCTV camera's rakhe hue hai. the next room is the laundary room and the one adjacent to it is the lift room. [she keeps moving and explaining while veer keeps osberving her instead of the hotel]

and this is the swimming pool aur woh hai gym room..

suddlenly, she gets distracted by the phone call. she excuses herself and picks up the phone, while veer will be eager to know who that is.

ayesha: hello.. ayesha sharma here..

nancy: hello ms. sharma, i am nancy here..

ayesha: hello nancy, how are you ? anything important ?

veer gets attracted by the name nancy and then thought why would se be so formal with their kid.. and then resumes his spying.

nancy: well, we are having a small picnic on 8th.. i.e; after 2 weeks.. and we are planning to go to the santosa island. so, i was wondering if you can send your dauughter along. she wanted to take your permission. may i know your opinion please ?

ayesha: yeah sure.. can i talk to veesha please ?

nancy: just a moment..

ayesha: haan bolo..

she tried her level best of not to give veer the idea of veesha, their daughter... who is now, HER daughter.. but veer somewhere had the doubt. he is very eager to know, if it is a girl or a boy. he wished he had twins but then, kicked himself mentally for his greediness.

veesha: mom, kya mein in logon ke saath jaa sakti ?

ayesha: well, if you are fine with it, i dont have any complaints. have fun and bye.. see you tonight.. take care okay..

veesha: bye mom.. love you..

ayesha: bye...

veer: kiska phone tha ?

ayesha: its my friends call sir.. i am sorry i had to take a personal call during work, but it is a very important call sir.

veer: its okay. ayesha.. actually, i am looking for a good home here. i mean i am ready to buy an appartment. so, which place do you suggest for me ?

ayesha: sir, the top area for housing in singapore is the orchard road sir. the prices are high and it is a center point. and moreover, the hotel will also be like walking distance from the place...

veer: waise, where do you stay ?

ayesha: i stay near jurong..

she was quite confident because, she thought he does not know anything about their kid... he smiled to himself.

veer: how about i take a flat in jurong ? i mean, jab tum singapore ko inti achchi tarah se jaante ho toh, you will be there for me na..

ayesha: but i suggest orchard for you sir...

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the introduction party of veer was done and now, it is the time for vijay to leave. he and ayesha were at the drinks counter, while veer approaches.

vijay: so guys, i am having a flight in another 2 hours and i have to rush now. you guys have fun. and yeah ayesha.. mera monkey kahan hai ? usse milne ke bina mein india nahi jaane waalah hoon.. i am leaving now.. but to meet monkey and then, i will go to the airport.

veer: monkey kaun hai vijay ?

ayesha tries to divert the topic but veer was admant to know..

vijay: monkey matlab monkey nahi.. she is ayesha's daughter and my sweetest friend. mein usse milne jaa raha hoon...

ayesha's thoughts stop there and she felt like, there is some disaster coming up. she thought that, this was the worst ever moment of her life. she somewhere predicted that, such a moment is going to come but not very soon like that...

vijay waved a bye while veer was having tears in his eyes. he felt on the top of the world. he was having HIS daughter. she is HIS blood. he expected their daughter to be 5 years old.

both of them stood calm for a while until ayesha saw some fresh tears rolling down his eyes. she felt bad for him. she felt bad that, she hid that news from him. but what he did was more than horrible.

she was thinking about all that but then jerked when she found her hand getting pulled. she felt heself dragged. they reached veer's room and he pulled her in and locked the door.

ayesha: sir, aap yeh kya kar rahe hai ?

veer: ayesha, please mujhe bolne ka mauka toh do..

ayesha: kya kehna chahte hai app SIR ?

veer: ayesha, joh kuch bhi hua, us ke liye i am sorry ayesha. maine bohot badi galti kiya.. guna kiya.. ayesha, jis din tum mujhe chod ke chali gayi thi, ussi din, mujhe apne galti ki ehsaas hua aur mujhe tumhari pregnancy ke baare mein... hamare bachche ke baare mein bhi pata chala ayesha.. maine tumhe har jagah dhoonda.. but today, i came here for a meeting and i found you.. i found my love.. my life.. ayesha, inn 6 saalon mein mujhe apne galti ki sazaa mil gayi hai. please ayesha. ab tum mujhe apne aap se door mat karna.. jee nahi paoongi tumhare aur hamare beti ke bina..

ayesha will be crying by then. she was completely weak and lost the control over herself and collapsed on the floor. he also kneeled down and hugged her as tight as possible and they spoke while hugging.

ayesha: i hate you veer...

he was delighted and happy to see her calling him veer..

veer: but i love you ayesha..

ayesha: i hate you veer...

veer: i love you and our daughter so much ayesha..

ayesha: i said i hate you.. infact, we BOTH hate YOU..

veer: i love both of you aur mein tum donon ke liye apne jaan bhi de sakta hoon. please mujhe maaf kar do... tum hamesha se kehti ho na, mein bahar se chahe jitne bhi ferocious hoon, andar se tumhare nazar mein ek chote bachche ke tarah hoon.. har cheez ke liye zidd karta hoon.. naughty hoon. tumhe tang karta hoon.. hai na.. sach kahoon toh, tumhe uss din mujhe ek thappad maar ke, chup kar dena chahiye tha. i am missing you so much ayesha. please.. mujhe bhi tumhare saath hamare beti ke paas le chalo na. please ayesha. mujhe tumhare godd mein sona hai.. 6 saal ho gayi hai chain se soke. please ayesha. mujhe maaf karo na.. apne naughty chocolate ho maaf karo na.. please..

ayesha: you know, as usual, mein jzyada der tum se naraaz nahi reh sakti. naughty idiot..

she hugs him back with that...

veer: arey waah.. naughty chocolate se naughty idiot. good good.

ayesha: shut up jaan.. i am also sorry too.. maine veesha ke baare mein tujhse chupayi.. kaan pakad ke sorry..

veer: yeh veesha naam kya hai ? is there any meaning..

ayesha: oye my buddhu.. veer se vee and ayesha se sha.. ho gayi na veesha.. hamari beti hamari pyaar ki nishani hai veer.. issi liye maine uska naam aisa rakha.. tumhe passand aayi hai na..

veer: i love you ayesha..

ayesha: but i dont love you..

veer: achaha toh yeh baat hai.. dont worry. i will make you say i love you..

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