I Love You - Mini FF - Pt 2 - P 3 - Jan 4

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her anger rose for a moment. she never, not even in her wild dreams thought that, veer will leave her like that, in the middle of the cross roads. today, after 1 year of their wedding, he did not trust her. she felt disgusted with herself for loving a person like him. she wondered if their love was so weak, that a small misunderstanding could cause a break up. she tried to hate him as much as possible but is unable to hate him at all. today, she is not only worrying for herself but also for the child, who just started taking life in her womb. she started remembering what all happened during the past few hours.

|| FLASHBACK ||

veer: ayesha.. tum ne mujhe cheat kiya ? tum aise kaise kar sakti ho ayesha ? you know i love you so much right.. kya kami rahi mere pyaar mein tumhare liye ? bolo ayesha.. i am questioning you damn..

he pulled her with great force. she was eagerly waiting for him to return from his parent's home. yes, veer and ayesha live in a seperate house from that of vardhan's masion. veer visits his mother and sister, every weekend and it was the same today. she was very eager to tell him about the new happiness, the new bundle of joy, the symbol of their love, coming into their home sweet home.. but the things were different since he entered. she was confused.

ayesha: veer, kya hua ? tum yeh sab kya keh rahe ho ? kya hua ? tum aise kaise baat kar sakte ho ? aur maine CHEAT kiya ? aue woh bhi tumhe ? mein tumhe kyun cheat karoongi veer ? aur mein bhi tum se bohot pyaar karti hoon. apne aap se.. aur sab se jzyada veer..

veer: ayesha, jzyada bhole banne ke liye koshish mat karna. actually, galti mera hai. maine maa aur didi ke baaton ko mana kar ke, unke against jaa ke, tum se shaadi kiya hai. aur tum sach mein ek giri hui ladki ho. itna bhi bhola chahra mat banao. i saw your pictures with sunish mittal. tum dono date kar rahe the na.. tum jaise ladkiyaan paison ke liye kuch bhi kar sakte hai.. kissi bhi hadd taq jaa sakte hai.. tum logon ko pyaar ke baare mein kya pata hai ? huh ? aaj mein tum se pyaar kar ne ke liye sazaa bhugat raha hoon.. agar tumhe zara sa bhi sharam hai, toh yahan se chale jao.. apna chahra bhi mat dikhao mujhe. chee. you are such a...

ayesha: what the hell veer !! tum.. mujhse aise baatein kar rahe ho ? mujhe yakeen bhi nahi ho raha hai.. aur haan.. maine koi sunish mittal se milli nahi.. naa mein aise naam ke insaan ko jaanti hoon, na pehchan sakti. mein subah se ghar ke kaam hi sambhalti hoon. mein bahar kahan jaa rahi hoon ? aur i bet.. batao.. kya TUM ne MUJHE apne aankhon se dekha hai ? kya mein unn pictures ko dekh sakti.. jin ke baare mein tum kuch jzyada hi exaggarate kar rahe ho ?

veer: shut up ayesha. you dont have any right to raise your voice. got it ? mom showed me those pictures.

ayesha: okay veer. just one word. uske baad mein tumhe apne chehre taq nahi dikhaoongi. kya TUM apne mom ko believe kar rahi ho ? kya tumhe lagta hai ki, mein sach mein uss insaan se mill rahi hoon ?

veer: YES YES YES... i believe my mom and those pictures. i have known her for longer as compared to you. huh.. i hate you.. get lost.. waise.. mein tumhe kyun keh rahi hoon.. mein khud jaa raha hoon yahan se.. APNE ghar.. tum yahin rehna.. good bye..

he stormed into their room and packed all his things. she did not understand what to say. she begged him for a while telling that, she will prove that, it is not her in the pictures but then, she thought that, she is never going to live with a person, who does not trust her. she remembered all the things he said to her a while ago. she gave up the thought of begging him. she thought -- may be this is the END for their so called LOVE and so called WEDDING and relationship.

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she came back from her chain of thoughts and she gave a thinking about what will happen to that baby... after thinking for a while, she thought, she will give birth to that baby. she started loving the baby since she came to know about the baby.

she packed her bags and took a final look of all the things in her home. once it used to be filled with love.. but now, there is nothing.

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he entered his home with his bags, but stopped. tears started flowing down his eyes. he was shocked to listen to the things happening in his home. he never expected this from his mother...

kamini: nandini.. woh saare pictures edited hai.. ayesha kissi se bhi dating nahi kar rahi hai.. woh ladki toh maha pativrata hai.. woh veer ko kabhi cheat nahi karegi.. mujhe pata hai ki, woh ladki veer se itna pyaar karti hai ki, veer uske pyaar mein andha ho jayega. lekin, mein bhi apne bete se bohot pyaar karti hoon.. aur usko aise kho nahi sakti. issi liye maine ek top industrialist ke saath uske picture merge karwayi hai.. tum yeh sab veer ko kabhie nahi bataogi. mere upar kassam. got it ?

veer jiss zor mein gaya tha uske ghar.. i think, they will definitely break up.

nandini: but maa, ayesha pregnant hai na.. ab uss bachche ka kya hoga maa.. aur ayesha veer se bohot pyaar karti hai maa.. yeh guna hai maa.. agar veer ko pata chal gaya toh, hum dono ko kabhi maaf nahi karega maa.. aap ne galat kiya.. aur aap ke iss jhoot ko chupa ke, mein galat nahi kar paoongi maa. ayesha ek bohot achchi ladki hai.. paap lag jayegi maa hum ko.

kamini: you shut up nandini. kuch nahi hoga.. pregnant ho toh kya, kissi bhi bhaad mein chali jayegi.. woh aur uski bachcha.. mujhe uski koi fikar nahi hai.. dont forget this.. mein bhi apne bete se bohot pyaar karti hoon.. and everything is now done. veer ko mere yeh jhoot aur plan ke baare mein kabhi bhi pata chalna nahi chahiye. samjhi..

veer feels disgusted with himself for trusting his mother. he doubted if they were his real family.. he shouted at once..

veer: MRS. KAMINI VARDHAN SINGH.... 😡 maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki, aap itne neeche gir sakte hai.. sharam aa rahi hai apne aap par. mujhe abhi ayesha ke paas jaana hai.. yeh maine aisa kaina hone diya..

nandini: maa, i am also sorry.. aap apne beti ko bhi kho chuke ho. veer, chalo mere saath. varna, ayesha kuch kar de gi apne aap ko.

he drives as fast as possible back to his house. he wondered how low he behaved with her. for a while, he thought, he did not deserve her.

but he was very late.. as he reached their home, he found a note in the enterance of their appartment.

veer,

mujhe nahi pata.. lekin pehli baar mujhe apne aap par bohot ghussa aa rahi hai.. tum jaise insaan se pyaar kar ne ke liye. mein jzyada kuch nahi kehna chahti hoon veer.. mein aaj tumhare liye ek khush khabari dene ke liye intzaar kar rahi thi.. but.. chance hi nahi mila. aur ab mein uss news tum se share bhi nahi karna chahti..

and finally finally veer, tum ne apne saath joh divorce papers laaye ho, i signed them and they are on the dinning table. you can file them in the court whenever you want. and just want to say a final good bye forever. i am leaving forever veer. i will never come back into your life. sorry if there is any kind of mistake on my part.

bye...

- ayesha subhash sharma...

he felt devastrated to see that note. and the name in the down pierced his heart. ayesha subhash sharma was the name before their marriage.. he found her name good, when it was ayesha veer vardhan singh. he did not understand what to do. today, he came to know about their child through nandini. otherwise, he would have never come to know about that. because, ayesha did not have any intentions of sharing about that to him. he cried and cried and cried. he tore the divorce papers into as many pieces as possible..

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he did not want to attend the meeting at all. it was the worst day of his life. it has been 6 years since ayesha has left him. he searched for her everywhere but did not find her. he entered the hotel, in singapore, where the room was reserved for him. he was talking to a person in the information desk, while he heard a voice, which was just like ayesha's... he tured his head towards the side and he found ayesha in the reception desk. she was working in that hotel..

he stood rooted in his spot and slowly made is way towards the reception desk. ayesha did not notice him yet. she was busy in answering the phone calls. he observed each and every movement of hers. he forgot the world around him and stared at her..

ayesha: good evening. thanks for calling holiday inn park view...

he noticed her slang. it was completely changed. they way she spoke.. the way she looked. she became thinner as compared to before. she looked more like a singaporian in that uniform. but between all these things, he observed that, she smiled but her smile was not from her heart. he read her eyes at an instant. there was hidden pain in her eyes... he felt bad...

veer: excuse me..

ayesha looked at him.. she was shocked for a moment but she came back to her self for a while and responded.

ayesha: yes sir. how can i help you ?

veer: ayesha...

his eyes started getting watery.. he thought of hugging her..

ayesha: excuse me sir.. how can i help you ?

veer: i.. i.. have.. a.. i mean.. i have a.. reservation..

ayesha: welcome to the holiday inn sir.. may i know your name please !!

veer: tum mere naam bhi bhool gayi ayesha ?

ayesha: may i know you name please sir ?

veer: it is on the name of veer vardhan singh..

ayesha: well, yes sir.. room number 1102.. here is your room's key card. john, could you please escort mr. singh to his room...

john: yeh ms. sharma.


friends, here is a mini fan fiction on veesha..



made this siggie last night and then got such a silly idea.. LOL.. feel free to use the sig 😆

it will end in a few parts. please do tell me if i should continue or not.. will continue if you like it.. thanks for reading..

i hope you enjoyed reading it. please do press the LIKE button and comment if you find this story or the one shot deserving. thanks a lot for the previous support.

-- deepu --


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oh man. One nore fic. Concoz to yu deepu di. You r an alk rounder and simply fab. But diz is a mini one na. Will get ended in 2 or 3 parts :( wow im in luv wid d concept as well as the sig. Wow yaar. Oh my god. Ayesha is looking stunninh wid dat sindhoor yaar. U make fab sigz. Uhho yeh veer bhi na najaane kya kya keh diya bechare ayesha ko. Now we should see how he will make ayesha forgive him n d way their family is going to get united . pleAse continue this soon. Im morenaddicted to this now.
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Deepu di, can yu make a veesha sig for me ? Plzz
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Originally posted by: CanadaKudi

Oh man. One nore fic. Concoz to yu deepu di. You r an alk rounder and simply fab. But diz is a mini one na. Will get ended in 2 or 3 parts :( wow im in luv wid d concept as well as the sig. Wow yaar. Oh my god. Ayesha is looking stunninh wid dat sindhoor yaar. U make fab sigz. Uhho yeh veer bhi na najaane kya kya keh diya bechare ayesha ko. Now we should see how he will make ayesha forgive him n d way their family is going to get united . pleAse continue this soon. Im morenaddicted to this now.



hey priya,

thanks a lot for the comment dear. well yes.. i could not keep the idea to myself.

actually, this concept was for armaan and riddhima.

but then, i started dreaming veesha in that concept. so, here i am.. with this mini FF.

hehe.. yeah.. i also liked that siggie a lot. it is one of my favourites.

yeah. she looks adorable with sindhoor. thanks a lot for the comment again. yeah.

agree with you. he should have thought twice before talking like that to her.

lets see how they get united or if they are going to part their ways.

will continue it as soon as possible and thanks a lot for the comment again.

keep reading and commenting as your comments mean a lot to me.

loads of love
deepu 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: CanadaKudi

Deepu di, can yu make a veesha sig for me ? Plzz



sure. no problem. i can make it. please give me the pictures you want on the siggie or if you want me to use any pictures, that is also fine. completely up to you 😃

loads of love
deepu 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG..... In ur siggie... they are married ..... cute....
well abut the ff.. it's awesome.... i mean... that character is totally like veer's...... oh i feel bad for him though, he got to knw abt his child through nandani... :(
cnt wait 4 the next update.... i hope ayysha talks to him nicley.... even if it was his fault.....
pls update soon.... :D
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great,the most touchy ff and in the siggy ayesha is really looky like a cute wife,awesome siggy
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Originally posted by: loyal-kashian

<br><br>sure. no problem. i can make it. please give me the pictures you want on the siggie or if you want me to use any pictures, that is also fine. completely up to you 😃<br><br>loads of love<br>
deepu 😃<br>



thank u di u can use any pics coz i dnt have any gr8 veesha pics.
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Originally posted by: nehara

OMG..... In ur siggie... they are married ..... cute....
well abut the ff.. it's awesome.... i mean... that character is totally like veer's...... oh i feel bad for him though, he got to knw abt his child through nandani... :(
cnt wait 4 the next update.... i hope ayysha talks to him nicley.... even if it was his fault.....
pls update soon.... :D



thanks a lot for the comment sara... hehehe... well, i also feel bad for him.. let us see what is going to happen 😆 thanks a lot for the comment.. keep reading and commenting as they mean a lot to me..

- deepu 😃
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Originally posted by: niksidfan

great,the most touchy ff and in the siggy ayesha is really looky like a cute wife,awesome siggy



thanks a lot for the comment. hehehe.. i found both of them really cute... thanks again...

- deepu 😃
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