ff.hidden feelings - Page 6

Hey. Nice update but please no twist. We cant enjoy veesha onscreen. Let us have veesha offscreen atleast :( please please please. :(

that was a fabulous part.. loved it.. please do continue soon.. eagerly waiting for the next part to come... and reg the twist, your wish but please finish the twist asap coz, i wanna see them together..

update soon ,i m really enjoying every part of ur ff👍🏼

Continue soon please cnt w8 nymore :'(

Please update soon. I cant wait anymore • please

everything is very nice except Rajdeep should love ayesha ......love triangle happening will be more fun but still its a great plot!

thanx for your beautiful comments i will inshallah update next part in this week.i m kinda busy so can't write it right now.

Hey Fatima,

This jealousy bizness is really cute!

Aw, Raj is gonna propose Pammi, so sweet!

Veer will finally be relieved!

Another twist, wudn't matter! Bring it on, as it is we enjoyed this jealousy game!

HIDDEN FEELINGS

Part 8

In the evening,when veer goes back to his home.He doesnot know what to do because rajdeep told him that in evening after going back to home they will go for buying engagement ring.

Veer(thinking and battling between heart and brain):I won't let rajdeep to get the ring but ..he is my best friend.he loves the girl i love the most in my life.Ayesha has a right to know abt his feelings then whatever she decides i m with her.After all i love her.my happiness is in her happiness.

While veer is thinking rajdeep comes to him and tell him to get ready for going.Veer goes with rajdeep to the jewelry shop.Shopkeeper shows them some rings.

Rajdeep:mujhe tu yeh wale achi lagi hai mujhe lagta hai ka issi bhi bohat pasand aiye gi.

Veer:..........

Rajdeep:dude tu kucch bol kyu nahi raha hai??

Veer:woh mujhe nahi lagta ka issi yeh pasand aiye ge woh bohat simple ladki hai issi simple se ring pasand aiye gi.

Rajdeep:ok tu yeh kaise hai.

Veer:yeh ayesha per suit nahi karay gi.

Rajdeep:ayesha per?????

Veer:haan tu tum ayesha ka liye tu ring la rahay hu.

Rajdeep:tumhara dhamak kharab hu gaya hai ayesha tu meri behan jaise hai main tu parminder ki baaat kar raha tha.

Veer(shockingly and happily):parminder ki??oh thanx god main samjha ka ayesha ki.

Rajdeep:main pagal nahi hoon ki apnay best friend ka love per line maru.

Veer:haan??

Rajdeep:tu bhi na jaise mujhe nahi pata ka ayesha ko meray saath dhaak kar tera face gusay se red ho jata hai.

Veer(blushing b/c of embarresment):achaa ab ring tu choose kar lo.

After buying ring,they go to the place where rajdeep will propose pammi.When they get there they see all the room is full of red flower and many candles and ayesha is also standing there.Veer surprisely see her.

Rajdeep:thanx ayesha tum ne meray itni help ki.

Ayesha:its ok after all friends kas liye hotay hain?

Rajdeep:dosaray friends ki setting mein help karnay ka liye.

Ayesha and veer laugh.

Ayesha:main ne pammi ko bola diya hai,woh bas aati hogi.

Rajdeep:acha tum aisa karo ke veer ka saath ghar chale jao.

Rajdeep gives wink to veer.

Ayesha:aa per..

Veer:its ok hum chaltay hain ok then goodluck.

Ayesha:ok then bye goodluck.

Rajdeep:thanx and bye

Rajdeep gives thumb up to veer.Veer smiles at that.Veer and ayesha goes to the car.Veer opens the front door for ayesha.Ayesha sits in the car.Veer drives the car.

Veer:main bore hu raha hoon.radio lagatay hain.

Veer and ayesha both extend their hand for on the radio.Their hands touch.They both blush and ayesha moves back her hand.

Veer on the radio.On the radio,there is the song going

Kaise batayein
Kyun tujhko chahe
Yaara batha na paayein
Baatein dil o ki
Dekho jo baki
Aake tujhe samjhaein
Tu jaane na aaaa..
Tu jaane na
Tu jaane na aaaa..
Tu jaane na

Veer thinks that this song just suits his situation.

Hmm milke bhi, hum na mile
Tumse na jaane kyun, milo ke,
Hai phasle tumse na jaane kyun
Anjaane, hai silsile
Tum se na jaane kyun, sapne hai
Palko tale tum se na jaane kyunnnnnn…

Veer looks at ayesha who is looking outside the car.

Kaise batayein
Kyun tujhko chahe
Yaara batha na paayein
(aaa…aaa…)
Baatein dil o ki
Dekho jo baki
Aake tujhe samjhaein
Tu jaane na aaaa..
Tu jaane na
Tu jaane na aaaa..
Tu jaane na

Veer sees that ayesha dubata's side is right next to the gaire of the car.He picks her dupata slowly while looking at ayesha.He puts it on the gaire of the car and drives the car.

Aaaa aaaaa aaa
Nigahon mein dehko
Meri jo hai bas gaya aa
Woh hai milta tumse hubahoo
Ooohhooo..
Jaane teri aankhein
Kiya baatein ki vajah…
Huye tum jo dil ki aarzoo
Tum paas ho ke bhi
Tum aas ho ke bhi
Ehsaas ho ke bhi
Apne nahin aise hai
Hum ko gile
Tumse na jaane kyun, milo ke
Hai phasle tumse na jaane kyun ooonnn….
Tu jaane na aaaa..
Tu jaane na
Tu jaane na aaaa..
Tu jaane na

Veer knows that he loves ayesha but doesnot know that she loves him or not.He is afraid to get hut but hiding his feelings from her also hurts him.

Ooo jaane na jaane na jaane na
Aaaaaaa aaa… tu jaane na
Khayalon mein lakhon baatein,
Yun toh keh gayaaaa..
Bola kuch na tere saamne
Oooo… huye na begaane bhi
Tum hoke aur ke
Dekho tum na mere hi bane
Aafsos hota hai, dil bhi yeh rotha hai
Sapne ,sanjotha hai, pagla hua soche ye
Hum the mile tum se na jaane kyun
Milo ke, hai phasle tumse na jaane kyun
Anjaane, hai silsile
Tum se na jaane kyun, sapne hai
Palko tale tum se na jaane kyunnnnnn…
Hooooohh…

He is having tears in his eyes because he can't hide his love for her anymore but also afraid to lose her.

Kaise batayein
Kyun tujhko chahe
Yaara batha na paayein
Baatein dil o ki
Dekho jo baki
Aake tujhe samjhaein
Tu jaane na aaaa..
Tu jaane na
Tu jaane na aaaa..
Tu jaane na

Tu jaane naaaa… tu jaane naa

Meanwhile parmainder comes at the place where ayesha called her.She surprisely sees the place which is decorated very beautifully.Then rajdeep comes to her,she is very surprised to see him b/c she expected to see ayesha.

Parminder:sir yeh sab kya hai?aur aap yaha kaise?mujhe tu ayesha ne bolaya tha woh kaha hai?

Rajdeep:itnay questions ka answers tumhi yeh sab karnay ka baad batayo ga.

Parminder sees rajdeep kneeling down.

Rajdeep:pammi i love you i don't know from when but when i ask my heart who i want to spend my whole life with?the answer is always your name.That's why i want to ask u today will u marry me?

Parminder eyes is full of tears.

Parminder:ofcourse i will marry you b/c i love u too.

Rajdeep puts the ring in her finger and then they hug eachother.

PRECAP:Veer wants to tell ayesha that he loves her and maybe some veesha moments.

Thank you everyone on commenting on previous part and sorry for updating late.that's why today i have updated long part.

i hope u guys love this part and plzzzz give your comments and also suggestions.

😃hurray...........fatima u have updated ur ff i was waiting for it😃........finally the truth came out now we can have some veehs scenes m i right fatima😉