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HIDDEN FEELINGS

Part 6

Something comes to veer's mind.

Veer:nihal mera aak kam karo main tumhi 2 chocolate icecream duo ga agar tum kitchen mein ja kar apni chac.....i mean maasi aur uncle ki batain sun kar aao.

Nihal:per chachu yeh tu bori bat hai na?

Veer:nihal i know but yeh meray liye important hai.tum apnay chachu ke liye yeh karo gay na?

Nihal:ok chachu sirf aap ke liye first and last time.per aise duobara nahi ho ga promise?

Veer:promise.

Nihal goes to the kitchen.Veer is waiting and also he is very tensed b/c he doesn't want to do this but his love for ayesha forces him to do this.He loves her too much and doesn't want to lose her.Nihal comes back after awhile.

Nihal:sorry chachu.

Veer:kya hoaa?

Nihal:chachu maasi ne mujhe dhak liya aur in duno ne meray samney koi bat nahi ki.i'm sorry yeh aap ke liye important tha na.

Veer(disappointedly):tha tu but its ok nihal.kucch nahi hota.

Veer(thinking):kuchh nahi hota raj ne mujse promise kiya hai ke woh mujhe bataye ga.i hope woh yeh bat na ho ju main imagine kar raha hoon.

the day passby with veer is jealous abt ayesha and rajdeep.On next day veer,nihal and rajdeep are on lunch table.When ayesha comes to the dining room.

Ayesha:raj aaj main tumharay liye aalo ka paratay banati hoon.

Rajdeep:wow ayesha woh meray favourite hain.

Veer(while full of anger thinks)what the hell is going on here.i m sitting next to rajdeep.iss ne mujhe aise koi offer nahi ki aur aaj tak mujhe khud se tea bana kar nahi di aur iss rajdeep ko kucch kahi bina hi aalo ke PARATAY mil gaye.hmmm)

Veer:ayesha nihal ko late ho raha hai tum aisa karo meray aur nihal ke sath chalo.raj ko cook paratay bana di ga.

Veer(thinking):i will not lose her that much easily.

Ayesha:sir woh aaj mujhe late jana hai.

Rajdeep:veer tum aisa karo nihal ko lay jao aur main aur ayesha dosari car mein aa jaye gay.

Veer(while controlling his anger and disappointment):ok

While veer and nihal are going in the car.veer is thinking what to do in this situation.

Nihal:chachu aak bat kahoon?

Veer:haan beta bolo.

Nihal:chachu meray friend ki mama ne mujhse kaha tha ki tumharay chachu aur maasi sath mein bohat achay lagtay hain.

Veer:oh tum ne kya kaha?

Nihal(with innocencely):main ne kaha mujhe bhi bohat achay lagte hain aur dadi maa ko bhi.

Veer:dadi ko???

Nihal:haan main ne inhe aak bar khatay hoye suna hai.

Veer:acha

Veer(thinking):i wish ke yeh bat ayesha ko bhi samhaj aa jaye ke hum duno sath mein katanay ache lagte hain.i wish ke woh bhi mujse zayaday nahi tu mujh jatna pyar tu mujhse karay.

After dropping nihal to school, veer goes to the hotel.When he enters in the hotel.He sees parmander talking something to the receptionist.He is very happy to see her

Veer(thinking):well that's good now ayesha will concentrate on her best friend parmander instead of rajdeep.so i have some time to confess my love before rajdeep.

(to be continue).

PRECAP:rajdeep is planning how to confess his love for pammi and veer is planning not to lose ayesha.

PLZZZZZZ give your comments abt the fic.u like it or not in both conditions and also give suggestions how to improve it.THANK YOU EVERYONE for giving comments on previous part.if u have any question abt the fic u can ask me.PLZZZZ give comments.i hope u all like this part

very sweet and refreshing 👏👏

OMG... Cool yaar. Read all the updates in a go ! Loved them. Please do continue soon !!

Hi Famita- awesome job!!!! I really enjoyed reading all the updates. Please create more.

Melinda

Hey Fatima!

Caught up wid ur FF hun!

Goin Gr8!!!

Wow... jealousy jealousy evrywhr... hmmm...

par zyaada jelousy is harmful, it can wreak havoc....

do update soon....

fatima u are doing great work..................luv ur ff its very interesting

Please continue soon. Please. I will be inactive again for a few days. Want to read a part from you even before that. Please

HIDDEN FEELINGS

Part 7

After seeing parminder, veer is having less burden on his shoulder than before b/c of Ayesha and raj.veer is going towards his cabin while thinking abt what to do next. He collides with someone who is going opposite to him and collapses with that person.

Veer:i m sorry.ahh rajdeep.tum kab aaye.

Rajdeep:its ok aah bas abhi aaya hoon.

Ayesha was coming behind rajdeep.she sees them slip on the floor.

Ayesha:ohh raj tum thauk tu ho na?

Rajdeep:yep

Ayesha(hesitately):....aur aap siir?

Veer(controlling his anger):fine.

Ayesha gives hand to rajdeep.Veer angrily pulls up by himself.Rajdeep and ayesha goes back to their work.Veer standing at the same place.

Veer(angrily thinking and moving his foot on the carpet):my foot.yeh meray sath kya ho raha hai.main jatna sochta hoon ke ayesha mere care karay itna woh rajdeep ke care karti hai aur issi raj raj kahti hai aur mujhe sir bolati hai jabkay rajdeep bhi iss ka boss hai.

Veer with full of anger goes to the cabin.Ayesha is in the laundry room thinking abt veer.

Ayesha(thinking):veer ko kahi chot tu nahi lagi.mein tu in se kucch poch nahi saki kyuki is tarah mera concern aur in kay baray mein care show ho jata.mujhe pata hai kay inhay meray jaise ladkay mein koi interest nahi hai.but mein iss dil ka kya karoon.

Ayesha is thinking when parminder enters in laundry room.

Parminder:miss aap jis ki sochoon mein gum hain woh tu boss hain inhay koi kucch nahi kahay ga per agar aap kay kaam mein koi mistake hoye tu minnie ma'am tumhi dantay bina nahi rahi gi.

Ayesha:ab her koi aap jaisa tu nahi ka apni dost ko iss liye phone karay takay isse isskay lover kay baray mein pata chal jaye.waisay pammi tum raj ko bata kya nahi dhati ka tum iss se pyar karti ho.

Parminder:nahi pehle woh kahay ga tab.ab chalayin.

While saying this pammi turns and sees rajdeep standing. Their eyes meet and have a eye lock.

Ayesha:Ahemm.ab hum chaleyin pammi

Parminder(while blushing):haan.

They both leave.Rajdeep smiles and thinks.

Rajdeep(while smiling and thinking):chalo acha hoa ka mujhe yeh pata chal gaya ka pammi bhi mujh se pyar karti hai.ab kamazkam helmet tu nahi pahana paray ga iss ke jote se bajnay ka liye.

After this rajdeep goes to veer's cabin.

Rajdeep:veer yaar mujhe aaj tere help chaheye.

Veer:kaise help??

Rajdeep:mein se soch liya hai ka main jiss se pyar karta hoon isse propose kar doon.

Veer(in a shock and dishearted way):kis ko?????

Rajdeep:koi hai tu meray sath chal.mein tere opinion se ring loonga per tujhe bata bhi doon ga ka woh ladki kon hai jiski luck bohat achi hai.

Veer(thinking):iske luck ka tu pata nahi per meri luck aaj bohat kharab hai.

PRECAP:Veer is happy that rajdeep loves parminder not ayesha.

NOTE:i want to take your guys opinion that after this misunderstanding i want to put one new twist in veesha love story which will end in just few parts.i want to ask that do u guys have problem to read one more twist in their lovestory.u guys can give your opinion whether u want that twist in the story or not.

THANK YOU TO EVERYONE for commenting on previous part.PLZZZZZZZZ GIVE YOUR COMMENTS ON THIS PART TOO.I hope u guys like this part too and plzzz give your suggestion abt the note.

not at all Fatima ....ur jealousy part is too good if its ok wid u plz add some scenes of subash and aysha and more scenes of veer's jealousy i had enjoyed ur thz work alot.

I loved the cliffhanger! The part was good! Hoping to see more Veesha soon! Nowadays i miss the show a lot, cannot catch it, not even the repeats :( but now after reading it, I feel that I have just watched an episode!