HIDDEN FEELINGS
Part 4
Veer gets so angry and goes out of his cabin to find minnie.Rajdeep wants to stop him but he is too late.Veer finds minnie in the hall.
Nearby,ayesha is doing dusting of chairs.She has seen veer in anger but does not get what is the reason of his anger.Veer has not seen her.Veer goes to minnie and says
Veer:MINNIE
Minnie(surprised to see him):yes sir
Veer:Minnie TUM NE AYESHA KO KYA KAHA????
Minnie(in a fearful voice):nothing sir.
Veer:TUM JAANTE HO TUM NE KYA KAHA TUMHARI ITNI HIMMAT KI...
............:sir
Veer turns around and sees that ayesha is standing there.Just by seeing her beautiful face he forgets his anger and calms down.
Minnie:i am sorry sir
Ayesha:sir plz minnie ma'am ne mafi mang le hai aap inhi maf kar dyan.
Veer does not want to forgive minnie but b/c of ayesha he does.
Veer:ok get back to your work.
Veer is going towards his cabin when ayesha stops him.
Ayesha:sir plz do me a favour.
Veer(thinks anything for u b/c i love u):what is it?
Ayesha:sir app sab ke saminey meri favour na kiya karain kyuki phir sab humairy baray main ajaib batain karti hain.
Veer:ok i understand
Ayesha:thanks sir
Ayesha goes back to her work while veer comes back to his cabin.
Rajdeep:aray tum jatnay gosay main gayi thi mujhe tu laga ki kal tak wapas aao gi
Veer smiles and tells whole the story to rajdeep.
Rajdeep:tumhi ayesha ka tu pata hai dil se kitni soft hai bas ab tum iss baat ko rahnay do mujhe siraf aak baat batao.
Veer:kya?
Rajdeep:kya tumhari yaha jab koi handsome sa friend itnay dor se aata hai tu tum iis ko pani bhi nahi ditay?
Veer(smiles):nahi hum iss handsome se friend ko apnay ghar li ja kar lunch bhi karatay hain.
Rajdeep:tu tumhara kam khatam ho gaya??
Veer:yep main ne sab arrangements dhak le hain.just one thing left main iss dhak kar aata ho
Rajdeep:ok then main ne aak call karni hai main woh kar lita ho.
Veer goes out of cabin while rajdeep calls at pammi's uncle phone.
Rajdeep:hello.
............:hello.helloooo
Rajdeep:haan parmander main rajdeep bol raha ho tumhi meri aawaz aa rahi hai.
............:haan ab aa rahi hai.kon bol raha hai.
Rajdeep:main bol raha hoon.
............:main kon??
Rajdeep(in a heartbroken sound):main tumhi bhool gaya???
............:kyu kya tum koi president ho ye prime minister??
Rajdeep:tu tumhi president aur prime minister hi yaad rahtay hai???
on the other side someone asks something from the receiver.
...............:sahab pata nahi kon hai bas sawal kar raha hai
Rajdeep:SAHAB???
the one who asks get the phone.
...........(male voice):kon hai?
Rajdeep:kya pammi mera matlab hai parmainder yaha rahti hai?
Uncle:hain woh tu kassi kam se bahar gayi hoaa hai aap kon hain?
Rajdeep(don't know what to say):main iss ke hotel ka manager hoon.
Uncle:acha beta woh kal hotel aa rahi hai.
Rajdeep(in a happy voice):wah sach yess....i mean she is very....beauti..i mean... hardworking girl that's good she is coming back ok bye.
Uncle:bye.
Rajdeep is very happy b/c she is coming back to hotel tomorrow
Rajdeep:now i m waiting for tomorrow
Veer enters after a while ayesha also enters in the cabin.Veer tells rajdeep that lets go to home.
At Vardhan Mansion,kamini vardhan hears a knock on the door.
K.V:yes come in.
she hears someone footsteps.she surprisely sees that person......................
(to be continue)
PRECAP:starting of misunderstanding and jealousy.
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HIDDEN FEELINGS
Part 5
Kamini vardhan hears someone footsteps.She surprisely sees that person who is coming after veer.
K.V:Rajdeep tum?veer ne tu mujhe bataya tha kay tum kuchh dino bad aanay walay ho.
Rajdeep:haan aunty bas wahan dil nahi laga aur aap bataye ke aap kase hain.
K.V:main thauk ho.
Ayesha enters in the room along with nihal who is back from school.
K.V:nihal meri jaan aao meray pas tum kab aaye.
Nihal:dadi maa bas abhi aaya hoon.
K.V:tu rajdeep beta tumhari family kasey hai.
Rajdeep:aunty sare family tu dubai gaye hoyi hai.
K.V:tu tum yahan aakelay hu?
Rajdeep:ji aunty.
K.V:tu tum aisa karo ke yahan rah lo tum aur veer sath main hotel chalay jana kyu veer thauk hai na?
Veer:hain maa thauk kaha rahi hain rajdeep tum akelay rah kar kya karo gaye?
Rajdeep:per....
Nihal:maan jayi na uncle plz.
Ayesha:sare itna kah rahi hain tu yaha per rah lo raj.
Rajdeep:ok.
Nihal:aap maasi ke kahnay per itni jaaldi maan gaye uncle.
Veer also feel it and he was very shocked when ayesha called rajdeep RAJ b/c infront of him ayesha never called rajdeep raj.Everyone go to dining table for eating lunch.When rajdeep is abt to eat gobi, ayesha put some another thing in his palate.
Ayesha:raj yeh bhandi main ne abhi thori dare main sirf tumhari waja se banayi hai kyuki tumhi bhandi bohat pasand hai na?
Rajdeep:ayesha u r the best.
ayesha gives him smile,while seeing this whole scene veer gets very angry.Veer is thinking that
Veer (thinking while eating his lunch):hmm kabhi meray liye tu aisa nahi kiya.aak he ghar main rahtay hoyi iss ye nahi pata ke main non-vegetarian ho aur ye meray liye chicken bana di aur raj jis ke ghar ka no nahi pata iss ke fav.dish bhi pata hai aur raj ke samney kasey smile kar rahi hai aur meri samney tu agar smile face per ho tu woh bhi kahain gom jatey hai hmmm.
After lunch ayesha goes to the kitchen.Rajdeep goes after her to tell her abt parminder's arrival and also takes suggestion what to do after this.Veer sees raj goes after her and also follows him to the kitchen.
Rajdeep:ayesha mujhe tum se koi bat karni hai?
Ayesha:kya?
Rajdeep:woh ayesha...
Rajdeep sees veer is also standing behind him.
Rajdeep:veer tum yahan kya kar rahi ho.
Veer:nothing
Rajdeep(don't want to tell veer right now):plz veer mujhe ayesha se akele main bat karni hai i hope u understand.
Veer(curiously):kya batana hai you can also tell me i m your best friend too.
Rajdeep:i promise i will tell u later.
Veer(sadly):ok then i m going.
Veer goes out of the kitchen.Rajdeep tells ayesha everything.Veer starts to play with nihal
Veer(thinking):what raj wants to tell ayesha and why is he not telling me right now??what if ayesha and rajdeep love eachother???what if raj confess love first???what m i gonna do???i love ayesha too much.i can't live without her.
Veer is having tears in his eyes when a thought comes to his mind that ayesha will not be of him for whole life.Nihal feels that veer is not concentrating on game.
Nihal:chachu aap third time mujse har rahi ho.aap thauk tu ho na aap ki eyes main tears kyu hain.
Veer:nihal main thauk ho woh bas aap aaj bohat acha khal rahi ho iss liye jaat rahay ho.
Something comes to veer's mind.
Veer:nihal mera aak kam karo......
(to be continue)
PRECAP:parminder is back to the hotel and some more misunderstandings.
i m tried right now don't know how is this part of the fic.plzzz give comments so i would know how is it and also give your suggestions that how to improve it.in this part i want to show veer's jeolousy.i hopee u guys like this part.thanx for everyone for commenting on my previous part of the story.
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