ff.hidden feelings - Page 3

awesome...........plz update the next part soon😊

its aaaawwwwwwwweeeeeeeeeeeeessoooooooooooommmmmmmmmmmmeeeeeeeee😉

fatima,

i edited my reserved comment. do check it out

-- deepu --

Fatima,

This one is simply too good!!

VeeSha love each other but can't confess? cooool! dats gonna be fun!!!

lets see wat happens next!

do update soon!

Luv,

Tia

HIDDEN FEELINGS

Part 3

Minnie is abt to say something else when someone angrily called her

.............:MINNIE

Minnie and ayesha looks back and to their surprise.They see ...............

Meanwhile at Veer's cabin,Veer is thinking abt ayesha when he gets call from his mother.

Veer:hello

K.V:hello beta tumhi halwa mila?

Veer:haan maa ayesha ne diya thi aur main ne khaya bhi hai bohat tasty hai.

K.V:woh ayesha ni hi banaya tha tumhi tu pata hai ke mujhe kuchh bana na nahi aata hai bas sab kucch cook hi banata hai.

Veer is just thinking abt ayesha and that she cares abt his family so much.

K.V:acha beta bye.

Veer:bye

Minnie and ayesha surprise to see Rajdeep.

Rajdeep:that's it tum minnie ayesha ko humasha insult karti rahti ho aur ajj tu tum ne limit hi par kar di tum ne iss per itna bara ilzam laga diya.

Minnie:sir app iss larki ko nahi jaantay yeh saraf face se innocent lagti hai per indar se bohat .....

Rajdeep:minnie ab bohat ho gaya ab main tumhi tumhara resignation letter di raha ho.

Minnie:sorry sir aisa per nahi hoga app mujhi job se na nickalay

Ayesha who is constantly quiet speaks

Ayesha:sir plz minnie ma'am ne mafi magan li hai now its ok

Rajdeep:acha jab ayesha kay rahi hai tu thak hai per yeh tumhari last warning hai u have to promise that it will never happen again

Minnie:ok sir i promise.

Rajdeep:then go to your work.

Minnie goes to her work.

Ayesha:sir aap kab aiya app tu England meeting ka liya gayay hoya thai.

Rajdeep:yeh tum ne sir aur app app kya lagaya hoa hai don't u dare forget we r now best friends

Ayesha:ok friend ab tum mujhe apnay chaldi aanay ki reason batao gay.

Rajdeep:that's like a good girl ..reason yeh hai kay mera wahan maan nahi laga.iss liya tumharay samnay hoon.wasey main ne pora

hotel check kar liya per mujhe tumhari friend pammi nazar nahi aayi.

Ayesha (in a teasing sense)tu janab iss liya wahan maan nahi laga.woh leave lay kar apnay uncle kay ghar gayi hoyi hai iss kay uncle kay ghar ka phone no dhon

Rajdeep(blushes and smiles):nahi aise tu koi baat nahi hai.main veer se nahi mila iss kay cabin main ja raha hoon.

He stops and says

Rajdeep:acha phone ka no tu day do.

Ayesha smiles and gives him the phone no.

Ayesha:good luckkkk.

Rajdeep shyly smiles and goes to veer's cabin.Veer who is daydreaming abt him confessing love and ayesha accepts wakes up

when rajdeep comes in his cabin.

Veer:wow what a surprise.tum tu waha zayada din rahanay walay thay na.

Rajdeep:yep dil nahi laga tu wapis aa gaya.

Veer:well that's good.

Rajdeep:main tumsi milnay aa raha thi tu main ne dhika kay....

Rajdeep tells whole the story of what minnie did with ayesha.Veer gets so angry and goes out of his cabin to find minnie.Rajdeep wants to stop him but he is too late .......

(to be continue)

PRECAP: Veer's anger and rajdeep calls pammi.

PLZZZZ give your comments and suggestions abt the fanfiction.i hope u guys like it.

thank you everyone for commenting and also liking the previous parts of my fanfiction.i hope u guys love this part too.there is no veesha scene in this part but next time i will try to put in veesha scene.rajdeep is back in my fic although he is disappeared from the drama.

Gr8 update Fatima!

Keep it up!

Glad to see RAJ back...

oh hw we miss him in the show...

Tia

thanks for commenting in this part i want to show some friendly relation between ayesha and rajdeep and also want to start the lovestory of rajmi(rajdeep and pammi) along with veesha(veer and ayesha) from next part.i hope u will like the next part like u like this part.

gr8........ur ff is faboulos👍🏼 and is always beyond our expectations.......i was expecting veer but was rajdeep......chalo show mein na sahi yahi pe rajdeep tau hai😊

Originally posted by: pickachu

thank you everyone for commenting and also liking the previous parts of my fanfiction.i hope u guys love this part too.there is no veesha scene in this part but next time i will try to put in veesha scene.rajdeep is back in my fic although he is disappeared from the drama.

keep comment and thanx again for reading

fatima

definately yaar they make a good pair😃