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HIDDEN FEELINGS
Part 13
Ayesha goes back to her work while trying her level best to not show her emotions to anyone.Parmainder sees her.
Parmainder:
Ayesha tum thauk tu ho i mean ka tum upset lag rahi ho.Ayesha(lieing):
Nahi tu main thauk hoon.Rajdeep comes towards them and tells them about the party.
Rajdeep:
Party main sab invited hain.Per condition yeh hain ka aap ka sath aap ka partner hona chahiye kyuki ofcourse party hain tu dance bhi ho ga tu dance main partner ki zazurat ho ge tu yeh partner wali meri condition hai.Parmainder:
bas aap bhi naRajdeep:
main tumhara sentence complete kar dita hoon ka main bhi na kitna smart hoon.Parmainder(teasing him):
Per main tu kahnay wali thi ka aap bhi na kitna stupid hain.Rajdeep(pretending to be angry):
Tum apnay boss ko stupid kah rahi ho?Parmainder:
Nahi main ne tu nahi kaha bas kahnay wali thi.Ayesha is smiling at them.
Rajdeep:
acha tum 7:00 pm per taiyar rah na.Main tumhi tumharay ghar se pick kar loon ga.Anyways ayesha tum kya veer ka sath aa rahi ho i mean tum dono aak hi ghar mein rahtay ho iss liye.Ayesha:
Nahi main shayad party main na aao.Parmainder:
Per kyu?Ayesha:
Bas dil nahi chah raha.Anyways mujhe minnie ma'am ne bolaya hai.Parmainder:
per.Ayesha makes that excuse and goes away.
Parmainder:
yeh iss ko kya hoa?Rajdeep:
Pata nahi per koi problem tu zazur hai.At 8:00 pm everyone is at the party.Ayesha don't want to come but subhash forced her to come with him.Natasha asked veer to come with her.Veer wants to come with ayesha but he heard subhash asking ayesha and she has said yes.So veer comes with natasha still controlling his anger.
Natasha:
Veer look woh subhash aur ayesha bhi aa gaye.Veer looks at them.Just looking at ayesha his anger vanishes.She is looking very attractive in her red dress.Veer and natasha go towards them.
Natasha:
hey there guys!!! how r u both?Subhash:
Fine its nice to see u.Natasha:
Lets go to the dance floor.Veer lets dance.Subhash:
Nice idea.Ayesha lets dance.Ayesha and veer both look at eachother.Both are thinking about eachother that both are wearing red colour dress.Everyone comes to the dance floor.Ayesha with subhash,Veer with natasha,rajdeep with parmainder,minnie with khatwani.
Veer looks at ayesha
Kahin toh, kahin toh, hogi woh
Duniya jahaan tu mere saath hai
Jahaan main, jahaan tu
Aur jahaan bas tere mere jazbaat hain
Hoti jahaan subah teri, palkon ki kiranon mein
Lori jahaan chaand ki, sune teri baahon mein
Jaane na kahaan woh duniya hai
Jaane na woh hai bhi ya nahin
Jahaan meri zindagi mujhse
Itni khafaa nahin
Jaane na kahaan woh duniya hai
Jaane na woh hai bhi ya nahin
Jahaan meri zindagi mujhse
Itni khafaa nahin
Veer looks away while ayesha looks at him.
Saansein kho gayi hain kiski aanhon mein
Main kho gayi hoon jaane kiski baahon mein
Manzilon se rahein dhundhti chali
Aur kho gayi hai manzil kahin raahon mein
Veer and ayesha both look at eachother.
Kahin toh, kahin toh, hai nasha
Teri meri har mulaqat mein
Hothon se, hothon ko
Chumte rehte hai hum har baat pe
Kehti hain fizaa jahaan
Meri zameen aasmaan
Jahaan hai tu, meri hansi
Meri khushi, meri jaaan
Jaane na kahaan woh duniya hai
Jaane na woh hai bhi ya nahin
Jahaan meri zindagi mujhse
Itni khafaa nahin
Jaane na kahaan woh duniya hai
Jaane na woh hai bhi ya nahin
Jahaan meri zindagi mujhse
Itni khafaa nahin
Both look away.Everyone stops dancing and starts chatting with eachother.Veer can't control his emotions anymore.It just hurts him too much.He goes out of the hall.Ayesha sees him going out of the hall.
Ayesha(thinking):Yeh veer abhi party chor kar kyu chalay gaye.
Ayesha follows veer.He goes out of the hotel .Ayesha sees him going out of the hotel while there is raining outside.She hurriedly goes towards him.
Ayesha:
Sir,App yaha kya kar rahay hain?Barish ho rahi hai ander chalyien.Veer:
Tum ander jao.Tumhari tabiyat kharab ho jaye gi.Tum subhash ka sath party enjoy karo.Ayesha:
Sir aap bimar ho jayein ga.Plzz ander chalyein.Veer:
Main thauk hoon.Tum hotel wapis jao.Ayesha tries to stop him from going any further.When there comes a truck on the road they are moving.It is about to hit ayesha when veer pulls her towards him.
Veer:
Ayesha kya ho gaya hai tumhi.Dhak kar chalo.Tumhi kucch ho jata tu.Tum hotel wapis jao.Subhash tumhara intezaar kar raha ho ga.Ayesha:
Sir aap ko subhash se kya problem hai.Veer can't control his feelings anymore without noticing.He tightly grips ayesha from the shoulder and says
Veer:
AYESHA TUMHI SAMIJH KYU NAHI AATA KA MAIN TUM SE PYAR KARTA HOON AUR KAISE AUR KO TUMHARAY SATH NAHI DHAK SAKTA.Ayesha is in shock while veer realises what he has said and let go of ayesha.
Veer(thinking and afraid of rejection):yeh main ne kya kahay diya.Ab jo hona tha woh tu ho gaya.Ab mujhe apni feelings ayesha ka samnay rak dini chahiya.
Veer(still with fear of rejection and controlling his tears):
haan ayesha main tumse bohat pyar karta hoon.Main tumharay bina nahi rah sakta.I love u ayesha i love u very very much.I can't live without u.Main tumharay bina apni zindigi soch hi nahi sakta.Main nahi janta ka mujhe tum se pyar kab hoa.Laykin main yeh janta hoon ka ab tum meri zindigi ho aur tumhari khushi main meri khushi hai.Ayesha starts to cry.Veer takes it wrong.
Veer:
its ok ayesha agar tum aisa feel nahi karti tu koi baat nahi.Plzz tum roh mat.Main tumhi khush dhakna chata hoon.Main tumhi rohtay hoya nahi dhak sakta.Hum abhi bhi dost bin kar rah saktay hain.Ayesha hugs him tightly.
Ayesha(while crying):
Main bhi aap se bohat pyar karti hoon.Veer hugs her tightly.He doesnot believe it that she also loves him.They both close there eyes and hugs eachother tightly.They don't want to let go of eachother.Now that there hidden feelings are revealed they are feeling very happy.They will never going to forget this day which brings happiness in their lives.It looks like sky is happy too and his happiness is showing by his tears means rain.
Precap:
Veesha scenes.I hope u guys like this part.I will try to end my fic in two to three parts.Plzzz give your comments and suggestions.Plzz do tell me about the confession scene.Actually i want them to confess there love in rain so i have made it this way.Hope u guys like it.Sorry kind of long part.
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