Kuch Shabd...

Hey Guys, read the concept of the show and it sounded so interesting, I couldn't help but pen a few words down right away. Thought I'd share with you guys, my first attempt at what could be described as🤔 very amateur shayari😆.

Jaane Kya Baat Hui

Jaane kya hua tha,

Kuch tou Baat thi,

Aap saat tou the magar

Tab koh gayi main thi.

"Aap ki parchain thi main, khabhie humsafar nahin. Ek Biwi thi main, khabhie premika nahin. Aaj mulkaat ki, khud ke Astitva se, bas, yahin baat hui, kuch aur nahin."

i think it's really well written! =)

It was wonderfully written.... and I know you're a good writer....I realllllly loved that JaAn FF you wrote for the BV FF competition...it was A.W.E.S.O.M.E !

Luv,Shreya

It awesuM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

awesome awesome awesome rima😃
i really loved it....

@bibbo: Thank you very much hun!!

@Shreya: Oh you remembered, yeh I do write FFs but this was my first poem (if you can call it that lol)! Thanks hun...

@sarareimoo1: Thanks, It was written keeping the concept in mind, maybe thats why.

@Minu: Fancy seeing you here! Thanks. Glad you liked it.