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Posted: 8 years ago
Rachu awesome ...
I think nachiket will understand this ...
Coz he saw the ragini's condition last night
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It seemed Nachiket was not to have a moment of mental peace after returning home - first the thing with Ragini, then Suhani and now Pam, he sighed as he looked at his sister looking all dejected and forlorn as she sipped on her second cup of coffee.
Nachiket's own cup of coffee was now ice-cold. His brain was racing with thoughts. How were they all in this situation? How could he fix this? It broke him to see Pam like that.. he reached out a hand to hold hers but stopped when he saw Ragini come out of the room, looking very worried herself..

He was about to ask what happened when she stopped him and told him Suhani was alright. he heaved a sigh in relief.. and caught Ragini's eyes doing the same thing as his - looking and studying Pam and wondering what to do or say.

Pam, she ventured.. and suddenly her voice faded away.. it was an impossible situation

I am not blaming you, Ragini, Pam said with a sniffle.. tears were threatening to flow down her cheeks. Ragini, I'm sorry to say this - but you're.. you're taking over my very life here.. she almost sobbed and Ragini recoiled, not expecting those words

Pam, you were always a stand-in for her mother, even before I came into her life.. Ragini regretted those words the moment she said them. She had obviously meant something else and this was the worst way she could have said it.. she had meant that Suhani never really had her mother and that both Pam and her were mothers to her in different ways..
Nachiket shot her a piercing, accusatory look when she said those words and looked away instantly.. Ragini felt her lungs constrict.. she knew that look.. sweat lined her forehead and her throat went dry.

Ragini, please leave, take your daughter and leave, Pam whispered, not enough strength in her for a fight. Nachiket walked away before Ragini could say anything. She heard him turn on the car and idle it as he waited impatiently. She mentally shuddered.




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Posted: 8 years ago
Oh no another fight coming up poor babies
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After what seemed like forever, to Nachiket, Ragini came and sat in the car and pulled the belt. "Suhani aur Aagham kahan hai?", Nachiket questioned bitterly.
"Chalo!! woh abhi nahi aayenge", Ragini replied rather accusingly, with holding her sobs. Nachiket shook his head and exhaled loudly... disappointed with the mess they were in, he stepped on the accelerator..

No words were spoken after that, a gamut of emotions playing in their minds. Nachiket occasionally stole a few glances of her, from the corner of his eye, some emphatic, some angry, some considerate, some accusing... 2 mothers, both heart broken, craving for their children..he was shaken by the thought of that sadness.. "Suhani ne mana kiya?", he questioned again, this time, rather softly.

Staring outside from her side of the window... Ragini replied after a few seconds, "Nahi, maine usse samjhaya, uske liye Pam ke saath rehena hi achcha hai. Woh bahot zidd kar rahi thi, phir bahot samjhane par maan gayi... Maine Aagam ko bhi samjhaya, to take care of Pam and make sure she doesnt feel sad and left out, issliye aane mein der hui", she finished, gulping the knot in her throat, holding those tears threatening to flow out...

Nachiket was dumb founded.. he now stared at her in awe, trying to comprehend what she had done and what might be going through her...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely stuff, C!
Loveleen, your turn now :)
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They drove in silence for a few minutes. Ragini was still looking outside, thinking about what just happened. When she told Nachiket why she had left Suhani and Aagham with Pam, her voice was dejected. However, it didn't help Nachiket in getting rid of his earlier bitterness completely. He was still mad at her for disrespecting Pam and couldn't help but let her know the same.

'Agar tumne pehle socha hota bolte waqt, to ye sab karna hi nahi padta,' said he, the bitterness all visible in his voice.

Ragini didn't reply instantly. She took her time and then said, 'Mujhe nahi lagta maine kuch galat kaha tha. And I didn't leave Aagham and Suhani with Pam because I felt sorry,'

'You don't think you disrespected Pam by telling her that she was just a stand-in for Suhani's mother? These were the words you used, isn't it?!' asked Nachiket. He had pulled over the car and had turned on his seat to look at Ragini. Ragini was initially surprised when Nachiket stopped the car but she got over it soon.

'What I said was in response to her saying that I had taken over her life! Ranbir, Aagham and Suhani are my children. And I am done feeling guilty about loving them!'

Ragini's volume had matched Nachiket's. He saw the determination in her eyes and then said slowly, 'Pam didn't mean it that way, Ragini. Tum janti ho Pam ko. Its just that she has spent a long time with them..'

Ragini interrupted him, '15 years. 15 years she has spent with them. And 15 years I have spent without them, wishing I was with them! They are my children!'

'She probably got emotional when Suhani asked for you and not her. You know that she gets possessive sometimes..'

'I am not going to feel guilty if my children love me!'

'Tum samajh nahi rahi ho, Ragini!'

'Samajh tum nahi rahe ho!
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Posted: 8 years ago
They are both not understanding each other just talk don't fight please
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C, you are up for the next ! Please 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice ff ... Plzz continue
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: loveleen3

They drove in silence for a few minutes. Ragini was still looking outside, thinking about what just happened. When she told Nachiket why she had left Suhani and Aagham with Pam, her voice was dejected. However, it didn't help Nachiket in getting rid of his earlier bitterness completely. He was still mad at her for disrespecting Pam and couldn't help but let her know the same.


'Agar tumne pehle socha hota bolte waqt, to ye sab karna hi nahi padta,' said he, the bitterness all visible in his voice.

Ragini didn't reply instantly. She took her time and then said, 'Mujhe nahi lagta maine kuch galat kaha tha. And I didn't leave Aagham and Suhani with Pam because I felt sorry,'

'You don't think you disrespected Pam by telling her that she was just a stand-in for Suhani's mother? These were the words you used, isn't it?!' asked Nachiket. He had pulled over the car and had turned on his seat to look at Ragini. Ragini was initially surprised when Nachiket stopped the car but she got over it soon.

'What I said was in response to her saying that I had taken over her life! Ranbir, Aagham and Suhani are my children. And I am done feeling guilty about loving them!'

Ragini's volume had matched Nachiket's. He saw the determination in her eyes and then said slowly, 'Pam didn't mean it that way, Ragini. Tum janti ho Pam ko. Its just that she has spent a long time with them..'

Ragini interrupted him, '15 years. 15 years she has spent with them. And 15 years I have spent without them, wishing I was with them! They are my children!'

'She probably got emotional when Suhani asked for you and not her. You know that she gets possessive sometimes..'

'I am not going to feel guilty if my children love me!'

'Tum samajh nahi rahi ho, Ragini!'

'Samajh tum nahi rahe ho!



Samaj tum nahi rahe ho...

OK let's me explain ,
Ragini tried to calm down ,but she can't
Nachiket vo mere bache hai , kisi bi maa ko apne hi bache se judaa hona aur unhe kisi aiur judwa na aasan nahi hai
Pls , try to understand
Tum mujhe samjne ki koshish bi kyun nahi karte...

Main koshish to karhi raha hun ragini,
But, itni saal se kisi ko paalna , sambhalna fir achanak
Usi se dhur hokar kisi aur ke saath chalejaana bi sahi nai hai na,,
Just think about Pam!!
Usi ney suhani ki bachpan se sab kiya, sambhala ,
Aur vo aaj bi chahti ki uske saath rahe , but you are not ready to accept this ...

Kon, mein ?? She raised her eyebrow.
Agar mein accept kar nahi sakti toh, chod nahi aati suhani aur agam ko Pam ke ghar...
She started to weep

Nachiket donno what to say,
Ek taraf Pam aur ek taraf ragini
And the this madness proves the love of this both mothers on childrens!!

They reaches their apartment ,,
Ragini directly went to their flat
Nachiket parked the car , and asked ranbir about ragini ,,
Dad, tum gaye the na Pam mom ki ghar , air mujhe puch rahe ho
Sab teak hai na dad ,, he asked with a concern .

Yeah everything is fine beta , you don't wry

Then how is suhani now ,,

Yeah she is also better ,,
Ragini , ney socha jab tak oh teak ho tab tak Pam ke saath rage
Aur agham bi uske saath raha tho she feel better ,,

Ok dad ,, I'm leaving hospital,,
Mom ka khayal rakhna, I knw is missing suhani and agham now!!

Sure,, he lightly smiled ,
He sat in the couch ,,
The scene from the morning flashed infrint of him,,
Even ranbir knows her moms mind ,,,
Why I'm not !!

I know I hurted her very badly ,,

Tumhe Jo kiya teak nahi kia ,,
Tumhe eh sab bolna nahi chahiye that nachiket ,,

Ranbir is absolutely correct ,
She is now missing them so much
You have to stand beside her in these tough times ...

He is walking in stairs and thinking what to do
To clear her mood now

Kuch toh karna hi padega nachiket...
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