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Posted: 9 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: ShyNomad

Aaah...talk about suspense!

Another great update delving deeper into their feelings without each other, thanks for this Imagine.

I can't wait until they dance again after so many years


Thanks for the appreciation. Dance is surely coming up next!! πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: imagine43


Thank you so much for this beautiful feedback. I am glad you liked it
I felt that the update was too long and too much in detail that would bore the reader..I had almost decided to not write again after finishing this one.
But your words have completely brought back the enthu.. Thanks for reviving me!!


Oh my god! 😲 Don't you dare say that you won't write! You're a lovely writer and I honestly love reading your work; it's definitely NOT boring! The details are what make your story come alive 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: shabz50

Lovely update but u finished at the wrong time need to know what happens next please.

You write neil and raginis emotions so well beautiful writing just loved it and how both of them instantly recgonise each others writing and the pain they are going thru and they have not forgetten their memories loved it

Please update asap


Thank you shabz for reading it and liking it.
I have to learn something from NB.. so that ending is inspired by her πŸ˜‰

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Posted: 9 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: poetic

This is so beautiful, but you have stopped at a very wrong moment πŸ˜‰

Sorry, I didn't comment at all for the 2nd part - was too busy.

Now I will read properly and comment.

As for the 3rd part, this is fantabulous. πŸ‘πŸΌ I am so glad that you are writing this story. This has such a refreshing flavour to it, though the storyline is already known. Thanks a lot πŸ€—

Loved reading about Nachiket and Ragini in this part.- how they both realised that it was the other from a single note of either's, and then the avalanche of emotions.

Happiness, Love, the bitterness and the heartbreak - the entire gamut of emotions have been well played through. I am so excited about reading the next part.

Now that Ragini is there on the stage, waiting for Dr Neil K to show up - the question is will Dr Neil K really make it to the stage and not get his ex-wife insulted?

I think he will, but we are waiting for your magic. ❀️



Thank you Rachana Di. Had missed you all this while.
I felt that the first meeting on the show was not the best, in terms of story.. Hence my take on it.
I am a pretty nervous writer, this is the second OS of my life, so it would be naive. I hope I do justice to NeiRa.

He is already on the stage, stretching out his hand..But both are not completely sure who the other person is...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: loveleen3

Ah-mazing!!!!!
I'll come back!!


Will wait for your feedback.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: shri123

wow imagine, R also recognizes his smily. This story is becoming very interesting. i like the fact that they r directly meeting on dance floor. Thanks for the update.


Thank you for reading and liking it. its kind of exciting to make them meet on the dance floor!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: metoyou

You did it again πŸ‘πŸΌ thanks a lot! And you are really making us wait for that face off.


Good mixture of their emotions, well done.

Finally Dr. Neil K is here...looking forward to how beautiful this dance will be. Knowing him he might be rude to her...unless Nachiket takes over πŸ˜‰


I am so happy after reading your feedback!
Should Nachiket take over?? I somehow cannot see Neil as a rude person.. true professional, yes!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
Imagine!!! i looovvveee yyyooouuuπŸ€—
I Cant able to say anything more than this!! The Way you describes NeiRa's emotions are BrilliantπŸ‘


P.S : Excuse me, wat im reading? u thought to stop writing? u thought ur story might bore us?😑😑

You're 1 of the best writers in dz forum πŸ€— Please never ever think about tat.😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: Tears90

Ah! This is an amazing story going on Imagine. Please update soon. I'm dying to read the face off...



Thank you for reading and liking.. face off is partially there! I promise to put up the next part soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: Santosh99

Just love the entire update but you ended the update at the wrong moment

Now i'm jumping in excitement to see what will happen when they see each other! Please update sooon! πŸ₯±


Thank you Santosh. Its feels awesome to see so much excitement.. I hope I am able to keep Buzz jumping after the next update too!!
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