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Posted: 8 years ago

#421

Originally posted by: alind713
Amazing update ...
Eagerly waiting for the next part
Please update it soon
And please don't take too much time for the next update 😃

Alind, I wish this were a daily soap, to satisfy your expectation of speed of the story. I am honored, that, this story has been so captivating for you. I will try and write up the next update soon.

Thank you for your support.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#422

Originally posted by: loveleen3
Arey!! Update kar dia! :D
Its awesome! The father-son bonding.. Vo gundon ki pitaai.. That dinner conversation.. So good so good!! :D
But Ragini had such a small role in this update... :P Write more!!
And, the ending!! Super Nani and Chamanlal and Nachiket... Hahaha.. Next update soon please!! :)

Thank you Loveleen for the elegant and terse feedback.

to answer the bold part: Let me quote you from an author I've been reading a lot, these days.

"Because my focus was on the kids".

"I want to read and write more around the kids and them as parents.."

And again repeated...

"And I want to read and write about the kids.. and some normal happy family moments.. "

That was what this update was all about.. I promise to write a Ragini-only story pretty soon...

Next update, not sure when, but will try my best. and will make that the last.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#423

Originally posted by: padma225
Fabulous update. Wait was really worth...

Thank you Padma, hope the wait for the next will be a lot shorter

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Posted: 8 years ago

#424

Originally posted by: jagrawal
Amazing... Father son duo is the best part...
Nachiket's emotions after seeing his princess and his support for his son, Ragini's smile towards her family bonding n the last punch 'Maa Aap Dr. Neil se shaadi karlo' was above all.
Keep on updating but pls don't be this late next time...

So sweet of you jagarwal. It was my first time trying to write a fight sequence, and was the hardest.

I am glad you liked it.

I will do my best for the next update

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Posted: 8 years ago

#425

Originally posted by: kenika
This is amezing... 👏 👏 goons ki pitai wo bhi nachiket k haatho thank you for this

You are welcome kenika. Its so hard to write fight scenes

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Posted: 8 years ago

#426

Originally posted by: hamna19khan
Wohoo it is amazing.
Please update soon

Thanks Hamna. I thank you for still following the story.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#427

Originally posted by: MansurKhan56

Imagine... Whatta update!👏

This update.. I Loved it... I Loved it... I Loved it...👏

All ingredients mixed... Nachiket sharing glances at his x-wife... Perfect bonding between N and his son... Adrenaline action... Finally Nachiket expressing the true feelings about his family while beating the goons black and blue...

This update was superb and amazing... Eager to know the next part...

Please update soon-ish😊

Mak bhai.

Yeh pitai vitai mujhse nahi hota, aap hi expert ho isme.. aap hi karvan N se fighting agli baar se.

Iss baar, thank you for the appreciation, fight expert se wah wah means a lot.

BTW, I am still waiting for your update on your story.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#428

Originally posted by: AngelsFlyAlone
Am I literally the only one who is over and done with everything about NeRa ever since the last day of the show? Well, I'm over it ages ago. Logged in to see everyone pretty active on the forum!

did that encourage you to come back then? can we see you back soon?

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Posted: 8 years ago

#429

Originally posted by: poetic
Thanks so much C for writing this update. Must say it's a key piece to the entire story that you are weaving. In this update, Nachiket gets to meet his own kids and to interact with them. This is such a plus point. I absolutely adored this part.

And then comes the goon bashing, which is so necessary. Maybe he eventually realises that his estranged family doesn't have it so easy with their lives.

N getting so emotional about this grown up Nishi - his princess!

Hopefully, when R meets her estranged sons, she will also realise what they have lost out on and maybe our duffers will get together.

But, what is FL3 doing here?

Kitna wait karvaya iske liye.. Will treasure these words for ever.

Duffers are not going to get together in my story. FL3 is so needed.. he is going to marry R and they are going to live happily ever after ;)

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Posted: 8 years ago

#430

Originally posted by: imagine43

Kitna wait karvaya iske liye.. Will treasure these words for ever.

Duffers are not going to get together in my story. FL3 is so needed.. he is going to marry R and they are going to live happily ever after ;)

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