Originally posted by: AngelsFlyAlone
OMG this was so cute n filmy! Luvd every bit of this! Pls write more Sanam diii
Originally posted by: AngelsFlyAlone
OMG this was so cute n filmy! Luvd every bit of this! Pls write more Sanam diii
Originally posted by: ShyNomad
I would love to see a filmy version of Nachiket and Ragini instead of all the sad drama we always get...fantastic start!
Her dupatta in his faceGreat work all three of you, Shabz, Shikha, and Sanam!
Originally posted by: Santosh1999
Aww what a creativity the filminess suits them so well. Quick update.
Originally posted by: neiralove
We does not like filmy matlab? π
Thank you everyone for reading and liking our 1st chapter π
As promised, here's the 2nd chapter. Please read and do leave a comment. π
Next chapter will be uploaded by Shikha, next weekend. π"RK!" Nachiket leaves Ragini's side to talk to his best friend, RK.
Ragini smiles, feeling a little out of place between two friends that clearly know each other well.
"Who is this?" asks RK, gesturing towards Ragini. He leans in towards Nachiket, so Ragini can't hear them. "Iss bar aachi ladki pata di tumne yaar!"
She hears them anyway. Ragini's nose flares with anger as she turns and walks away, burning with rage and deaf to Nachiket's calls.
Yeh mujhe kya hogaya tha. I thought who genuinely friendship karna chahta hai. I should have known right away that he is just a big flirt.
Nachiket runs after her and grabs her wrist,
"Ragini, kya hua?"
"Nachiket, mera haath chodo!" Ragini pulls her hand.
"Ragini please, batao tou sahi." His eyes fixed pleadingly upon her.
Ragini glared at him. He frees her arm and she leaves without saying a word.
Nachiket watches her walking figure disappearing into the distance. He felt his heart broke into many little pieces with Ragini written on every piece. And he couldn't understand his hurt feelings.
Itna gussa. Uff.. Dekhna Ragini madam, tumhe apne pyaar mein deewana bana kar chodunga mein.
Nachiket stood there when RK puts hand on his shoulder,
"Bhai, Bhabhi chali gayi kya?"
"Haan yaar. Pata nahin kya hua. Kuch bataya bhi nahin."
"Mere ko lagta hai usne humari baat sun li" says RK thoughtfully.
"Kaunsi baat?" Nachiket asks absentmindedly, his eyes still fixed on the exit gate expecting Ragini to reappear.
"Wohi when I said achhi ladki patayi hai is baar. I think wohi baat sun li."
Nachiket looks at him wide-eyed and then starts beating him. "Saale tujhe uske saamne bolne ki kya zarurat thi."
RK runs and Nachiket follows him. "Mujhe thodi naa pata tha ke Bhabhi ke kaan itne tez honge."
***
The next day Nachiket arrives in the same park a little earlier.
He couldn't concentrate on anything the whole time. Nothing interested him.
Nachiket has his eyes fixed on the gate while he jogs and stretches. He doesn't notice the same group of girls that day.
Ragini kahan ho Tum !!
But she doesn't come and he doesn't give up.
After a week Ragini finally arrives. She is wearing a simple white kurti and her hair tied up. Nachiket almost trips when he sees her.
Ragini starts walking on the track and becomes conscious when she sees Nachiket coming towards her. Her heart dances in joy but she ignores him. Nachiket walks beside her.
"Hi Ragini."
Ragini doesn't answer.
"How have you been?" He asks genuinely and waits for her answer.
"Itne din kahan thi tum?" Nachiket becomes over-friendly when she doesn't speak anything.
"Pata hai mein roz tumhara intezaar karta tha us ped ke niche" He says gesturing towards a tree. "Us ped ne bhi mujhe bola ke nahin ayegi woh koi aur taad le."
Ragini stops and gives him a 'not interested in your bakwaas' look. But Nachiket continues,
"Lekin meine usko bola..ke mujhe bharosa hai Ragini par akhir who mere jaise handsome aur sexy to-be-cardiologist, Dr. Nachiket Khanna ko kaise resist kar sakti hai."
"I was right na?" He stops and asks her looking directly into her eyes. But Ragini continues walking. Nachiket calls her from behind striding towards her,
"Acha suno tou"
"Pata hai tumhare bina ye park kitna soona soona tha?"
"There was no Rag-gini here naa. Bechare ped bhi murjha gaye the. Abhi dekho kitna khil khila rahe hain."
"Ab kuch bolo bhi."
"Uff log doctor ho kar bhi itna insensitive ho sakte hain. Hey bhagwan.." Nachiket says talking to himself and sighs.
Ragini continues walking without even looking at him.
"Kuchh to bolo Raag-gini.."
"Naraaz ho?" He asks her in a serious tone now.
Ragini glares at him.
"Uff..ye zaalim looks." Nachiket couldn't help but flirt again.
Ragini turns and looks at him with eyes filled with anger.
"You know you look cute when you're angry." He winks.
Ragini flares her nostrils and looks away.
"Acha narazgi ki waja tou batado. Takay hum apko manaen tou sahi."
Ragini tries hard to show indifference but inside she so wants to talk to him. She tried to stop thinking about him but she couldn't. His smile, his words, his handsome face didn't let her do anything.
Nachiket keeps talking for another twenty minutes but Ragini doesn't speak a word. He tries every possible way to make her speak.
But when she doesn't speak a word he stops in the middle while Ragini continues walking; a little relieved and a little hurt, wishing him to join her again. When she has walked a few steps she hears his voice, singing,
Afghan jalebi, mashuq farebi
Ghayal hai tera deewana
Bhai wah, bhai wah
Nachiket was gesturing towards her when he sang. Ragini couldn't believe her eyes. Everyone's stares were fixed on her and she felt embarrassed with a trace of blush on her face. She turns and leaves, striding towards the gate.
Bandooq dikha ke kya pyaar karegi
Chehra bhi kabhi dikhana
Bhai wah, bhai wah.
Ragini is stopped by a group of people from exiting the gate. She turns helplessly and looks at Nachiket, who is now dancing and joined by everyone else in the park.
Afghan jalebi mashuq farebi
Ghayal hai tera deewana, bhai wah bhai wah
Bandooq dikha dikha ke kya pyaar karegi
Chehra bhi kabhi dikhana, bhai wah bhai wah
PS. Please listen to this song and imagine NeiRa. Nachiket dancing and flirting with Ragini and everyone else in the park has joined him. Use your own imagination ;) Here listen to it.
Enjoy and do leave feedback ;)
And I am back with my comment!
Like you said Sanam, I had read this before too but reading it again gave a whole new feeling to it π The pehla pehla pyaar... π³It is indeed so filmy and we does not like filmy! Matlab, we have been growing up with this kind of stuff in many movies and shows πNo doubt that this FF will be great since there is you Sanam, Shikha and Shabz means success guaranteed! πYes girls, looking forward so better keep this going!
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