Originally posted by: neiralove
That reminds me, I still haven't read your Filmy NeiRa! Will do that right away! ๐
Originally posted by: neiralove
That reminds me, I still haven't read your Filmy NeiRa! Will do that right away! ๐
I re-read all the 4 parts once again, and this story is so damn sweet.
Set in an Alternate Universe, the flirting, line marking and romance is so intense and playful at the same time.Loved the part where R tells N that she is a Nurse and not a Dr, and N replies that he has fallen in love with a girl who lies ... classic N. ๐Please update soon.
Okay here I am with my detailed comments:
Too cute! This Nachiket is not giving up, very naughty types he is! Aur Ragini, this girl is falling big time for him but obviously woh aise nahin manegi.Their little scooty ride till home was lovely. So madam is already dreaming of standing at the balcony with his arms around her waist...wah Ragini, wah! ๐ She better accepts his love and her dream will come true soon.Good job girls, very nice! Keep it up and obviously we are waiting for more ๐
Ragini had barely taken two steps up the path to the house when Nachiket pulls her roughly to the side,
"Kahan ja rahe ho Nachiket?! Ghar toh idhar hai!" she yells.
Nachiket quickly brings his finger to her lips. "Please Ragini, chilao mat," he says, looking around alarmed.
"Kyun choro ki tarah chup rahe ho? Yeh tumhara hi ghar hai na?" asks Ragini, taken aback by his sudden change in behavior.
"Woh, Ragini...actually, ek baat hai jo maine tumhe bataya nahi. Kya hai ki mein apne Dadaji ke saath rehta hoon. Aur woh bahut hi strict hai--agar unhone mujhe kisi ladki ke saath dekh liya na, toh mujhe ghar se bahar nikal denge. Iss liye, please tum mujhe yahi chod do aur mein apne aap andar chala jaunga."
"Kya?! Par tum toh theek tarah se chaal bhi nahi sakte ho Nachiket! You need someone to help you! Aise kaise tumhe akela chod sakti hoon mein--that's not an option," Ragini retorts.
Nachiket loved her even more for saying this; it was all going according to his plan. "Theek hai, toh ek aur raasta hai. Ghar ke pichwade mein ek darwaza hai, hum waha se andar ja sakte hain."
Ragini twists her mouth at him, considering the option. "Theek hai, chalo phir." She takes his hand again and helps him towards the back of the house. Agar iske Dadaji itne strict hai toh yeh aise khule aam flirt kyun karta hai?, she thinks to herself.
Ab yeh madam line pe aayegi, thinks Nachiket with a smirk. Jab Dadaji hamein iss tarah dekh lenge, mein unko keh doonga ki Ragini meri girlfriend hai. Aur phir she will have no choice but to accept in front of Dadaji! Waise bhi, Dadaji always wanted me to find a sweet and susheel, typical bahu type ki ladki--I think he'll like Ragini...
Nachiket leads Ragini to the back door of his house. He leaves her hand for a moment and fumbles in his pocket for his keys and she suddenly misses his strong grasp around her wrist. But before she can process her feelings, he finds his keys and opens the back door. He pushes it open carefully, trying not to make the door squeak. She tiptoes in after him and he shuts the door softly behind them.
As Nachiket turns back around, his hand strikes a flowerpot on a nearby table. Ragini reaches past him and stops it just before it falls
"Kya kar rahe ho Nachiket?!" she whispers loudly, shaking the water that had fallen from the recently watered leaves from her hand. "Tumhare Dadaji uth jayenge!"
"Dadaji soye kab the joh uthenge?" someone says loudly as the lights came on.
Ragini spins around to face a tall man in a white kurta. Nachiket's Dadaji was a rounder man with brown oval-shaped glasses and a cane. His hair is white and he has a slight beard that is still gray at the edges. Ragini thinks he is the sternest man alive--until he flashes her a huge smile.
"Aa gaye ho beta?" Dadaji says, looking at Nachiket. "Aur tum kaun ho, beti?" he asks, turning towards Ragini.
"Nachiket, yeh tumhari nayi girlfriend hai kya? Ek hafta pehle hi ek ladki se milvaya tha na, ab woh kahan gayi?!" he adds, laughing loudly from the depths of his belly.
Ragini stands there, frozen to the spot, unable to understand why Dadaji was so open about Nachiket's girlfriends. "Nai Dadaji," Nachiket starts to speak. Then it hits her and Ragini's nostrils flare. She quickly cuts in.
"Nai nai Dadaji, yeh mujhe aaj park mein mila tha. Iske pair me chot aa gayi thi, toh mein isse ghar tak chodne aa gayi." Ragini finishes, motioning towards Nachiket's leg.
"Arrey!" Dadaji cries, his laughter abruptly coming to an end as his eyes fell on Nachiket's leg. "Yeh kaise ho gaya?! Tum theek toh ho na beta?" he asks, walking towards them and pulling Nachiket into a tight embrace. Nachiket pulls away quickly, not wanting Ragini to think he was too mushy. As he releases Dadaji, Nachiket meets eyes with Ragini and finds that she has a big smile painted on her face.
Dadaji turns to Ragini and scrunches his eyebrows, looking at her torn dupatta. Ragini lowers her eyes, unsure of what to say or do. Then Dadaji's eyes go back to Nachiket's leg, where the rest of her dupatta lay, wrapped around Nachiket's wound. He grins.
"Aacha hua ki tum wahan thi, warna pata nai mere Nachiket ko kya ho jata. Tumhara lakh lakh shukar hai, beti," he says, clasping her hands.
"Arrey nai nai, aap mujhse bade hai, please aisa mat kahiye!" Ragini exclaims, putting her hands over his and unclasping them. "Aap mujhe sharminda kar rahe he. Mein ek nurse hoon, aur yeh mera kaam hai," she replies, with a sweet smile.
"Aacha, tum ek nurse ho! Waise beti, tumhara naam kya hai?"
"Oh! Mein toh apna naam batana hi bhool gayi. Mera naam Ragini hai. Ragini Patel."
"Aacha aacha, Ragini. Bahut hi pyaara naam hai. Main Nachiket ka Dadaji hoon," Dadaji replies, looking towards Nachiket who was staring at them with his mouth slightly ajar. Ab yeh plan bhi flop ho gaya, Nachiket thinks to himself.
"Ragini beta, mujhe tumse ek baat poochni thi." Dadaji fumbles for a bit, not knowing where to begin. "Tumne jis tarah se Nachiket ka dhyaan rakha, mujhe ye yakeen ho gaya ki tum sirf ek bahut aachi nurse nahi, ek aachi insaan bhi ho." Ragini smiles and looked away.
"Kya hai ki, mujhe ek nurse ki talaash hai. Koi joh meri dekhbal kar sakti hai, time par dawa dena, khana banana, vagera vagera. Kya tum interested hogi iss mein?"
Ragini stares at Dadaji first and then at Nachiket. Kya Nachiket ke Dadaji jaante hai hum dono ke baare mein?, she asks herself.
Hum dono matlab kya Ragini, Nachiket alag aur tum alag. And tum dono ke beech kuch bhi nai hai! Remember that!, the other half of her mind chides.
"Agar interested nai ho, toh koi baat nahi. Tumhari kisi saheli ko kaam chahiye na, toh mere paas bhej do, bas," adds Dadaji, smiling.
Ragini composes herself and replies cheerfully: "Nai nai Dadaji, aisi koi baat nahi hai. Mujhe bas ek baar apne ghar walo se puch laine de. Mein un se puch ke aur thoda soch ke aapko batati hoon."
"Haan haan beta, tum jitna chahe waqt le sakti ho, tum soch ke batao." Dadaji says warmly, patting her shoulder. "Nachiket beta, Ragini se uska number lelo."
Nachiket is still standing shocked. Yeh kya ho raha hai--Ragini aur Dadaji itne gul mihl kaise gaye? "Nachiket?!" Dadaji asks again.
"Huh?...Haa, haan, Dadaji! Aapko kuch chahiye kya?"
"Beta, kahan kho gaye the? Do baar puch chuka hoon--Ragini se uska number lelo aur tum usse apna number de do taaki woh tumhe call kar ke bataye."
Nachiket doesn't need to be told a third time. He rushes over to Ragini and she turns so that her back was to Dadaji. He hands her his phone and she feeds her number in quickly. As she is typing, Ragini looks at Nachiket. "Mujhe repeatedly call karne ki ya gande gande messages bhejne ki sochna bhi nahi--mein tumhe apna number sirf Dadaji ke liye de rahi hoon, samhje?"
Nachiket places a hand on her shoulder. "Sorry, mein abhi thoda busy hoon apni girlfriend ke zulfon ke saath, baad mein message karta hoon, ok?" Nachiket says with a wink as he pretends to brush something off of her shoulder, twirling her hair with his fingers in the process.
Ragini scoffs, throws his phone in his hand, and storms out of his house. Nachiket follows her with his eyes for as long as he can, until the darkness hides his little angel from his longing eyes. Nachiket turns around to face Dadaji, still lost in Ragini's thoughts with a silly smile on his face.
"Pata tha mujhe." says Dadaji, shaking his head at Nachiket. "Mein bhi ek zamane mein tumhare dadi pe aisa hi line marta tha." Dadaji smiles and there is a little twinkle in his eye.
"Dadaji...issi liye aapne usse aap ki nurse ban ne ko kaha tha? Thank you so much Dadaji!" Nachiket cries, throwing his arms around him and hugging him hard.
"Aaram se, beta!" Dadaji says, wrapping his arms around his grandson. "Aachi ladki hai, Nachiket, sedhi sadhi si. Dara ke bhagao mat usse!"
Ragini's phoned beeps just as she parks her scooty in the parking garage of her apartment complex.
Mujhe flirt kehti ho na tum? Aaj se mein tum se flirt nahi karoonga. Pucho kyun.
Ragini knows better than to feed the fire, but she still wants to know what this man is cooking. She decides to wait for his reply.
Pata hai mujhe ki tum nahi puchogi. But I'm sure ke tumhare aakhon mein ye sawal zaroor hoga. Aur tumhare un pyaare aakhon ke liye bata hi deta hoon. :)
Kyunki tumhare jaisi ladkiyan flirting ke liye nahi, ishq ke liye bani hai. ;)
***
Ragini had been too busy after her last meeting with Nachiket and Dadaji. Nachiket also didn't text her again. She hardly had time to think about it. Studies and her part-time job had got her too busy.
She finally found some time for herself and was on her way to the shopping mall. She suddenly starts missing Nachiket; his non-stop flirting, his arms around her waist. His cute expressions. She wished that scooty ride with him had lasted forever.
Lekin yeh Nachiket ne koi message hi nahin kara phir, she thinks to herself.
May be he was busy, too.
Ya shayad woh naraaz hogaya ho meine koi reply hi nahin kara tha usey.
Ek reply karne mein kya chala jaata. Kam se kam ek reply tou kardeti, Ragini. She starts feeling guilty for her rude behavior wondering what Nachiket would think of her.
Ragini reaches the mall and parks her scooty in the parking space. She heads towards the mall entrance wishing Nachiket was there too. As she enters the mall she looks around checking for any sales promotion going on when her eyes fall upon the man who lives in her head, heart and occupies her thoughts.
Ragini stood still for a few seconds and then turns around feeling stupid for gawping at him. She walks to the escalator looking down. Pata nahin Nachiket sach meain tha bhi ya mein paagal hogayi hun, she thinks slapping her head.
Nachiket was on the second floor of the same shopping mall with his friend, RK. He was standing with his back to the escalator. They were busy talking when RK exclaims all of a sudden,
"Bhai, udher dekh Ragini!"
Nachiket looks at him, confused,
"Bhai, tujhe bhi Ragini har jagah dikhne lagi hai kya? Mera tou samajh aata hai."
"Bhai, mazaak nahin kar raha sach mein. Udher dekh." RK gestures towards the escalator, half hiding his face.
"Yaar..tu bhi naa. Mein already pareshan hoon aur mera mazaak..." Nachiket says turning around and stops when he sees Ragini.
Ragini was standing on the escalator looking beautiful as always. He had never seen a girl so simple yet so gorgeous.
"Yaar tu mujhe ab har jagah saath lekar ghuma kar. Jab bhi mere saath hota hai Bhabhi mil hi jaati hai. Good luck." RK whispers in to his ears.
Nachiket turns around to find RK gone already.
Without wasting any time, Nachiket starts walking towards Ragini, looking down at his phone pretending to be busy.
Ragini is lost in her thoughts to notice him and they both bump into each other.
"Dekh kar nahin..." Ragini stops when she looks at the person whom she bumped into. I have officially lost it today.
"Ragini ! Hi!" Nachiket fakes a surprised face. "Tum yahan?"
It is real. It is real. Thank God. She lets out a breath and quickly composes herself,
"Haan kyun mein mall mein nahin asakti kya?"
Nachiket is taken aback. Lagta hai abhi tak naraaz hai.
"Haan kyun nahin asakti. I just meant to say... Never mind." He says looking away.
Ragini doesn't reply anything and resumes walking leaving him alone. Nachiket follows her,
"Ragini, suno..tum se kuch kehna tha."
"Kya kehna hai?" Ragini asks without looking at him.
Nachiket holds her by shoulder and makes her stand still by the railing. He looks directly into her eyes,
"Woh actually, I'm sorry usdin joh dadaji ke saath joh.. Aayenda aisa nahin hoga."
Ragini was surprised. She had forgotten that incident and she was wondering if Nachiket was upset with her for not replying to him.
"Mujhe us baare mein baat nahin karni, Nachiket," she starts walking towards one of the shops. She decides to play with Nachiket this time.
Nachiket froze in his place. He couldn't believe Ragini would be this mad at him.
"But..I'm really sorry naa." He says running after her.
Ragini doesn't listen to him and plays all naraaz. She starts browsing around clothes and Nachiket follows her like a child. She chooses six shirts handing them to him. Nachiket makes a pouty face in the hope of melting her heart. But he doesn't dare flirt with her.
"Mein try karne jarahi hun. Tum yahin ruko." She says taking one of the shirts from him.
Nachiket nods and stands there.
Ragini walks to the changing room and comes out shortly wearing the new shirt. Nachiket looks at her, dumb-founded. He couldn't help take his eyes off of her.
Ragini feels the heat of his stare on her skin trying hard not to blush. She asks him his opinion, looking away. Nachiket so wanted to say something cheesy. But, he didn't want to take the risk. So, he simply tells her that it looks perfect on her.
Ragini takes another shirt from him and goes inside, repeating this until she has tried out all the shirts. She couldn't help but blush inside the changing room thinking of his intense stare and wondering if she should really ask his opinion. While Nachiket thinks she looks gorgeous in every color and dress. He starts day dreaming.
Ragini wearing a sexy and hot backless red saree, him wearing a tuxedo and they dance silently in the spotlight. His hand around her waist, her's placed on his heart, staring deeply into each other's eyes. He could imagine the blush on her face and the playful smile on his lips and them dancing slowly.
Nachiket's romantic dance dream is disturbed by some noise and he is brought back to the present. He looks in the direction of the changing room when Ragini appears in her old clothes. He joins the queue at the counter before Ragini could. The cashier keeps smiling at them, "Here your change, Sir. Btw, I have never seen such a cute couple. When did you both get married? "
Nachiket only smiles at him and carries the bags.
Ragini looks at his serious face. She was enjoying it a lot.
"Kuch khaoge?" she asks him coming out of the shop.
Nachiket looks at her surprised. Before he could speak Ragini burst out laughing. She couldn't control her laughter anymore making Nachiket more confused.
"I am sorry...I am sorry.." Ragini says giggling. Nachiket is awestruck by her laughter's. He doesn't know when he starts laughing with her too.
"Let's go eat." She says holding her stomach.
"Ragini, tum ne tou meri jaan nikaal di thi. Kya tumhe waqayi mein bura nahin laga tha?" Nachiket asks her when they start eating sitting on one of the tables at the foodcourt.
"Bura tou ofcourse laga tha. But it's okay."
"Thank you." Nachiket smiles.
"And I'm sorry, meine tumhe reply back nahin kara tha usdin."
"It's okay Ragini. Bade bade deshon mein aisi choti choti batein hoti rehti hain." Nachiket replies with a wink.
"Tum kabhi nahin sudhroge, Nachiket." She laughs.
"Ragini, tumne bhi meri taang khinch li aur meine tumhe shopping bhi karadi. Ab kya hum dost ban sakte hain?" Nachiket asks her holding out his hand.
Ragini smiles and shakes his hand. "Okay, friends."
"Yeh tou abhi shuruat hai." Nachiket mumbles to himself.
"Btw, thank you for this." She says holding the shopping bags.
"Arey kya baat kar rahi ho Ragini. Abhi abhi humne dosti kari hai aur dosti ka pehla usool No Sorry, No Thank you." He smiles wide at her.
"Okay Guruji." She says smiling.
"Btw, I have something for you." He says taking out a small box from his pocket.
Ragini wonders what's inside the box. Kahin Nachiket abhi tou mujhe propose nahin kar raha. Yahan iswaqt shopping mall mein sub ke samne. She feels embarrassed and blushes at the same time.
Nachiket gives the box to her and waits for her to open.
"Nachiket, ismein kya hai?" She asks him surprised.
"I'm sorry to break your heart darling. But joh tum samajh rahi ho woh nahi hai." He winks at her.
Ragini quickly opens the box and finds a pair of earrings inside. She looks at him, feeling stupid and embarrassed.
"Thank you, Nachiket. Lekin yeh dene ki kya zarurat thi?"
"Yeh humari friendship ki shuruwat ke liye hai." Nachiket says looking into her eyes. "Accha ab tumhari baari hai mujhe shopping karane ki. Bohot tangh karliya mujhe. Meine bhi kuch shirts khareedni hain.."
Ragini agrees and then they shop for Nachiket's shirts and stuff for another few hours; laughing and teasing each other.
To Be Continued
Ragini stares at Dadaji first and then at Nachiket. Kya Nachiket ke Dadaji jaante hai hum dono ke baare mein?, she asks herself.
Hum dono matlab kya Ragini, Nachiket alag aur tum alag. And tum dono ke beech kuch bhi nai hai! Remember that!, the other half of her mind chides.
I love this part specially๐
Nachiket doesn't need to be told a third time. He rushes over to Ragini and she turns so that her back was to Dadaji. He hands her his phone and she feeds her number in quickly. As she is typing, Ragini looks at Nachiket. "Mujhe repeatedly call karne ki ya gande gande messages bhejne ki sochna bhi nahi--mein tumhe apna number sirf Dadaji ke liye de rahi hoon, samhje?"
Sanameyy & Shikha. This part is the night stealer๐๐๐
"Mujhe repeatedly call karne ki ya gande gande messages bhejne ki sochna bhi nahi ๐คฃ
Nachiket places a hand on her shoulder. "Sorry, mein abhi thoda busy hoon apni girlfriend ke zulfon ke saath, baad mein message karta hoon, ok?" Nachiket says with a wink as he pretends to brush something off of her shoulder, twirling her hair with his fingers in the process.
Whattay a reply by Nachiket Baba๐
"Pata tha mujhe." says Dadaji, shaking his head at Nachiket. "Mein bhi ek zamane mein tumhare dadi pe aisa hi line marta tha." Dadaji smiles and there is a little twinkle in his eye.
"Aaram se, beta!" Dadaji says, wrapping his arms around his grandson. "Aachi ladki hai, Nachiket, sedhi sadhi si. Dara ke bhagao mat usse!"
Whattay an Awesome Dadaji๐
She suddenly starts missing Nachiket; his non-stop flirting, his arms around her waist. His cute expressions. She wished that scooty ride with him had lasted forever.
Lekin yeh Nachiket ne koi message hi nahin kara phir, she thinks to herself.
May be he was busy, too.
Ya shayad woh naraaz hogaya ho meine koi reply hi nahin kara tha usey.
Ek reply karne mein kya chala jaata. Kam se kam ek reply tou kardeti, Ragini. She starts feeling guilty for her rude behavior wondering what Nachiket would think of her.
Ragini feeling for Nachiket Baba๐๐๐ Super! Door hue to yaad aayi madam ko๐๐๐
"Yaar tu mujhe ab har jagah saath lekar ghuma kar. Jab bhi mere saath hota hai Bhabhi mil hi jaati hai. Good luck." RK whispers in to his ears.
Nachiket turns around to find RK gone already. Dost ho toh R.K Jaisa๐๐๐
"Haan kyun mein mall mein nahin asakti kya?"๐๐๐
Ragini feels the heat of his stare on her skin trying hard not to blush. She asks him his opinion, looking away. Nachiket so wanted to say something cheesy. But, he didn't want to take the risk. So, he simply tells her that it looks perfect on her.
Blushy Ragini + Cheesy Nachiket = Perfect Neira Moment๐
He joins the queue at the counter before Ragini could. The cashier keeps smiling at them, "Here your change, Sir. Btw, I have never seen such a cute couple. When did you both get married? "
Nachiket only smiles at him and carries the bags.
Wow Shopping started๐. Expenditure shuru Nachiket Baba k pocket se. So Filmy๐๐๐
Ragini looks at his serious face. She was enjoying it a lot.
Nachiket looks at her surprised. Before he could speak Ragini burst out laughing. She couldn't control her laughter anymore making Nachiket more confused.
"I am sorry...I am sorry.." Ragini says giggling. Nachiket is awestruck by her laughter's. He doesn't know when he starts laughing with her too.
"Ragini, tum ne tou meri jaan nikaal di thi. Kya tumhe waqayi mein bura nahin laga tha?"
"Bura tou ofcourse laga tha. But it's okay."
"Thank you." Nachiket smiles.
"And I'm sorry, meine tumhe reply back nahin kara tha usdin."
"It's okay Ragini. Bade bade deshon mein aisi choti choti batein hoti rehti hain." Nachiket replies with a wink.
"Tum kabhi nahin sudhroge, Nachiket." She laughs.
"Ragini, tumne bhi meri taang khinch li aur meine tumhe shopping bhi karadi. Ab kya hum dost ban sakte hain?" Nachiket asks her holding out his hand.
Ragini smiles and shakes his hand. "Okay, friends."
"Yeh tou abhi shuruat hai." Nachiket mumbles to himself.
Ragini played Serious Trick on Nachiket๐๐๐, I am sure there is a romantic Payback pending from Nachiket side in future๐๐
Overall, I am totally Entertained by this update. It had everything Cute Neira moments, Comedy, Serious yet cute Ragini tricks. Overall bahut umda and wah wah wala update๐
You both guys rock seriously. Good Work๐๐๐
Now Please update next part soon as i am very eager to see the proposal by Nachiket๐
Sanameyyy and Shikha Clock is Ticking๐
Stalking for the next update is on๐๐๐
Originally posted by: Santosh1999
Oooh my my my it's raining updates all are my favourites! Sanam di and shikha first of all a round of applause for both of you! Once again you both wereee fantabolous will be back with proper comments!
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