Originally posted by: ...Tiana...
A cute update once again๐ณ... Loved it๐ณ
Lines I loved specially:Ragini (Requesting Mode) : Nachiket pe lo coffee tumhe aaram milega, aur waise bhi doodh nai bacha hai ghar mai sooo
Nachiket: Hmmm thike, thank you for the coffee
Aagam(staring at them): Dekha Suhani.. hum jabse keh rahe the dad ko toh who mane nai aur mom ne ek baar kya keh diya bass coffee pina chalu.
This scene was such a cute family scene...๐ณ Loved this
Nachiket: Bacche ki harkat bikul bacche jaisi nahi hai Ragini. Pata nai kispe gaya hai? Isko toh mai
Ragini(whispered): Tum pe he gaya hai Nachiket
And this was sooo cute๐ณ
And loved the spoiler๐
Lovely Update๐ณ... Please update soon... Very excited for the next chapter๐
Originally posted by: Vidya_Bng
There you go ...Now Hide yourself Zainab๐ณ Taken- I will find you and I will kill you..
Why ??? How Do You Get These Amazing Ideas๐ such raw passion, is Awesome.a lame argument๐ the way they fight make them the most unique couple ever! ...๐ณaww the way they look at each other ..Even in anger Cho cho cutie๐Chota Mehman Kahan hain ???๐
Originally posted by: neiralove
Aww this was so cute!
"Tum pe he gaya hai Nachiket" ๐๐ So true!Please update soon sweetie! ๐
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Well read both parts in one go. Loved the flashback in the first part and loved the family moments of neira, agham, nishi, suhani, karan and dimpy. Waiting for next part. Also pm me the next part when u uppdate zainab.
Me Bestie! Thanks๐ Honored๐Rocking zainwaa๐ ka super update!Feedback is same *wah wah Guru Ji*๐ณI love the way you had scripted NERA, karan & the Rockstar Agham๐๐๐๐Next update jaldi pleej๐ณ
Originally posted by: ShyNomad
This was hilarious! I was grinning the entire time :) Your dialogues are so natural and heartfelt.Thank you for this, looking forward to the next update soon!
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