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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
This was hilarious! I was grinning the entire time :) Your dialogues are so natural and heartfelt.

Thank you for this, looking forward to the next update soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
There you go ...Now Hide yourself Zainab๐Ÿ˜ณ Taken- I will find you and I will kill you..
Why ??? How Do You Get These Amazing Ideas๐Ÿ˜‰ such raw passion, is Awesome.

a lame argument๐Ÿ˜† the way they fight make them the most unique couple ever! ...๐Ÿ˜ณ

aww the way they look at each other ..Even in anger Cho cho cutie๐Ÿ˜›
Chota Mehman Kahan hain ???๐Ÿ˜”
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: ...Tiana...

A cute update once again๐Ÿ˜ณ... Loved it๐Ÿ˜ณ

Lines I loved specially:

Ragini (Requesting Mode) : Nachiket pe lo coffee tumhe aaram milega, aur waise bhi doodh nai bacha hai ghar mai sooo

Nachiket: Hmmm thike, thank you for the coffee

Aagam(staring at them): Dekha Suhani.. hum jabse keh rahe the dad ko toh who mane nai aur mom ne ek baar kya keh diya bass coffee pina chalu.

This scene was such a cute family scene...๐Ÿ˜ณ Loved this

Nachiket: Bacche ki harkat bikul bacche jaisi nahi hai Ragini. Pata nai kispe gaya hai? Isko toh mai

Ragini(whispered): Tum pe he gaya hai Nachiket

And this was sooo cute๐Ÿ˜ณ

And loved the spoiler๐Ÿ˜Š

Lovely Update๐Ÿ˜ณ... Please update soon... Very excited for the next chapter๐Ÿ˜Š




THANKYOUU SOOO MUCH ๐Ÿ˜ณ DEARO

AWWW THANKS FOR THE LOVELY COMMENTS ๐Ÿค—

M GLAD YOU LIKED IT ๐Ÿ˜Š

WILL UPDATE THE NEXT PART SUPER SOON

KEEP SUPPORTING AND STAY GLUED ๐Ÿ˜ƒ


๐Ÿค—


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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
Thank you Zainab for a lovely end to my weekend...
this is the last thing I read tonight and it was so beautiful <3

Converting this moment, 20 years later into a sweet, memorable one with the kids bringing them together was a great idea.. well done Aagham :D
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DEARO ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

I SOOO LOVE YOUR COMMENTS YAA ๐Ÿฅฑ

THANKYOUUU FOR READING IT WITH SOO MUCH INTEREST โค๏ธ

๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Vidya_Bng

There you go ...Now Hide yourself Zainab๐Ÿ˜ณ Taken- I will find you and I will kill you..

Why ??? How Do You Get These Amazing Ideas๐Ÿ˜‰ such raw passion, is Awesome.

a lame argument๐Ÿ˜† the way they fight make them the most unique couple ever! ...๐Ÿ˜ณ

aww the way they look at each other ..Even in anger Cho cho cutie๐Ÿ˜›
Chota Mehman Kahan hain ???๐Ÿ˜”




VIDI BABY ๐Ÿ˜ณ

BIG HUGG ๐Ÿค—

DON'T KILL ME PLEASE ๐Ÿ˜‰ SHOLLY ๐Ÿ˜†

NEIRA FAN HU NAA SOO AISE IDEA AA HE JAATE HAI, DISAPPOINTED WITH THE CURRENT TRACK YAA ISILIYE ๐Ÿ˜ก

CHOTA MEHMAN AANE HE WAALA HAI, SABAR ๐Ÿ˜ณ

STAY GLUED.. PLZ โค๏ธ
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: neiralove

Aww this was so cute!

"Tum pe he gaya hai Nachiket" ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† So true!

Please update soon sweetie! ๐Ÿ˜Š





SWEETZ ๐Ÿ˜ณ

THANKIES THANKIES ๐Ÿค—

YES WILL UPDATE IT SOON DEARO ๐Ÿ˜Š

KEEP SUPPORTING, STAY GLUED ๐Ÿ˜ณ

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Posted: 9 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: ZainabSidd


My pleasure Zainab
Update soon!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: tikit

Well read both parts in one go. Loved the flashback in the first part and loved the family moments of neira, agham, nishi, suhani, karan and dimpy. Waiting for next part. Also pm me the next part when u uppdate zainab.





AWW THANKSS FOR READING ๐Ÿค—

YESS WILL UPDATE THE NEXT PART SOON ๐Ÿ˜Š

WILL PM YOU FOR SURE ๐Ÿ˜ณ

KEEP SUPPORTING
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: MAK56


Me Bestie! Thanks๐Ÿ˜‰ Honored๐Ÿ˜›

Rocking zainwaa๐Ÿ˜† ka super update!

Feedback is same *wah wah Guru Ji*๐Ÿ˜ณ

I love the way you had scripted NERA, karan & the Rockstar Agham๐Ÿ˜ƒ

๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Next update jaldi pleej๐Ÿ˜ณ




MAKWAAA ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜‰


THANKS THANKS BABA JI ๐Ÿ˜ณ


THANKS YOU SOO MUCH

YESS WILL UPDATE IT SOON ๐Ÿ˜†

AB APKI BAARI, UPDATE SOON
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: ShyNomad

This was hilarious! I was grinning the entire time :) Your dialogues are so natural and heartfelt.

Thank you for this, looking forward to the next update soon!





THANKYOUU SOO MUCH DEARO ๐Ÿ˜Š

GLAD YOU ENJOYED IT ๐Ÿ˜‰

MY PLEASURE ๐Ÿ˜ณ YESS WILL UPDATE IT SOON

KEEP SUPPORTING YA ๐Ÿ˜Š
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