Originally posted by: ShyNomad
This is so sweet and funny, I can imagine NR teasing each other just like that. Thank you for fixing what should have been one of the most important moments of their lives. In my head I will imagine that your version is what actually happened.
Please continue soon! :)
Originally posted by: ZainabSidd
hahahahhahaThankyou Thankyou BABA JI😳😳😳Makwaa yess I will...Thankyouu for ur support Makwaaa... 😆
You are welcome😆Zainwaa waiting waiting waiting for your update😛Time pass Karo naka😃
Originally posted by: RaginiJoshi
Aww! How cutie cutie FF ;) Zainab is back yayy! Just loved this idea for FF..Nanha Mehmaan😆
You always rock with the dialogues 😉 Continue this soon-ish..!
HEYY GUYS,
I AM BACK WITH MY SECOND UPDATE.
THANKYOUU YOU ALL FOR LOVELY COMMENTS AND SUPPORT,
A BIG BIG HUG TO EVERYONE
DO READ AND KINDLY IGNORE THE FLAWS
PS: THANK YOU MAKWAA #BESTIE
FF Part 2 - Nanhe Mehman
BACK TO PRESENT-
It was a special day, it was Dimpy & Karan's 20th wedding anniversary. Everyone was happy. Aagam and Suhani planned to make their parents sing a song for Dimpy and Karan on their special day and convinced them hard, but they refused to do so.
Ragini and Nachiket were lost in those lovey dovey thoughts, they constantly tried to avoid eye contact with each other but despite their best efforts, they couldn't get it to work. Then they looked at each other again, and things seemed better. That same old chemistry and love could be clearly seen reflecting in their eyes. It was a special day for them too, today they found what they lost a few years ago. Everything seemed different and fresh, they were unintentionally ignoring everyone around them. Being around so many people, still they were all alone. Their eyes were searching for one another.
Everyone was enjoying and dancing except Nachiket and Ragini. Nachiket was sitting on the sofa and Ragini was busy making coffee for herself and Aman. Nachiket was constantly staring at her and this made her a little uncomfortable and she was looking down. She poured the coffee into 2 mugs, handed the mug to Aman who was standing near the window along with RK and suddenly Suhani pulled her hand and asked her to sit beside them, she was now sitting on the sofa opposite to Nachiket.
Ragini was sitting between Aagam and Suhani, they were busy fighting over stupid things. She looked at them and smiled. She pulled Aagam's cheeks.. Gently making Nachiket jealous. He looked at her with those red eyes and jealous expressions as if all her actions were only reserved for him.
Nachiket wanted to talk to her but it was not the right time neither the right place for all this as everyone was around them. He had so much of feelings buried inside him for her.
Aagam: Dad kya hua apko?
Aagam could understand what they were going through. He could see the pain & the love between them. He was the perfect son anyone could wish for. He was trying hard to get his parents back together because he knew how much they love each other.
Nachiket: Kuch nai, bas thoda sir mai dard hai
Aagam(looking at the mug in Ragini's hand): Arre toh Dad coffee pe lijiye na, mom k haatho se bani coffee se apka sir dard ek dum kam hojayega. Maine experience kia hai (he winked at Suhani)
Suhani: Haan dad, Aagam sahi keh raha hai
Ragini knew what they were upto and she too was concerned for him but she uttered
Ragini: Woh maine already uss mug se coffee piya hai...
Aagam just snatched the mug without letting her complete what she want to tell further and offered it to Nachiket..
Nachiket: Aagam yeh tumhari mom ki coffee hai, mai dusri banwaa leta hu.. Wo pe rahi thi naa
Suhani(giggled): Offfo Dad pe lijiye na, Mom apko koi problem hogi agar dad ne coffe piya toh?
Ragini(instantly): Nai mujhe kyu hogi
Aagam( with a grin on his face): Haan dad, suna Mom ko koi problem nai hai.. Aap Mom ka jhutaa khaate peete nai ho?
Nachiket (making no eye contact): Aise kuch nahi hai...
Ragini (Requesting Mode) : Nachiket pe lo coffee tumhe aaram milega, aur waise bhi doodh nai bacha hai ghar mai sooo
Nachiket: Hmmm thike, thank you for the coffee
Aagam(staring at them): Dekha Suhani.. hum jabse keh rahe the dad ko toh who mane nai aur mom ne ek baar kya keh diya bass coffee pina chalu.
Ragini was blushing and excused herself to her room for some work
Nachiket(pulling Aagam's ear): Zyaada samaj mai aane laga hai tujhe.. Yeh sab sikhata kaun hai tujhe? Wahi Bollywood romantic movies se na?
Aagam stood up and was all set
Aagam: Dad Bollywood movies se nahi balki apse aur Mom se sikha hai..
aur mujhe lagta hai ab mujhe apni jaan bacha k bhagna chahiye, toh lo mai bhaaga
Suddenly Aagam's words echoed clearly in his mind, he was surprised to hear all this
Nachiket: Kyaa bola? Zyaada samaj mai aane laga hai tujhe, ruk batata hu tujhe mai, ek do thappad khayega toh thik hojayega. Tu ruk bass
Suhani: Beta tu toh gaya aaj, tujhe Dad se koi nai bachaa sakta
Nachiket ran behind him and Aagam began running away from his father as fast as he can. He asks Nishi, Suhani for help and everyone was enjoying it. Everyone was cheering Nachiket to catch hold of Aagam and teach him a lesson.
Suhani: Dad jaldi pakad lijiye usse
Nishii: Bhaag Aagam bhaag, Dad jaldi pakdo usse
Aagam(with confused expression): Arre Nishii tum phele decide karlo ki tum kiski side pe ho, mere ya Dad k
Nishii(laughing): Dono ke
Pam: Nachiket chodo na, baccha hai bechara, maaf kardo na isse
Nachiket: Aaj nai pam, aaj yeh bach k dikha de, aur koi beech mai nai bolega. Samaj lo sab
Karan: Bass kar de yaara, thak jayega tu. Ab tu Aagam ki umar ka nahi raha naa. Itna mat bhaag uske peecha
Aagam(breathing heavily): Haan dad, karan uncle sahi keh rahe hai. Aap thak jaoge
And they were running all around in the whole hall, behind sofa, dodging each other.
Nachiket: Karan tu chup kar, usse zyaada takat hai mujhme, aaj bass dek tu
It was more like a kabaddi game, Everyone was enjoying this scene.
Just by then Ragini stepped out of her room and sees that Nachiket was running behind Aagam.. she gets confused and worried about what had happened between & why was Nachiket running behind Aagam.
She came forward to stop them and ask "what's wrong" and suddenly Aagam ran towards her
Aagam(not being able to breath properly): Mom please bachaa lo.. Dad mujhe maar rahe hai
Naachiket(ran towards Ragini): Samne aa abb, Apni Maa k peeche kyu chup raha hai
Aagam: Mom please bachaa lo na, Dad mujhpe attayachar kar rahe hai, mujh jaise nadaan bacche pe itna zulum mat karo Dad.
Ragini: Nachiket kya hua? Kyu maar rahe ho mere bacche ko? Kya kia isne?
Nachiket(irritated): Baccha? Koi bacche wali harkatein hai iski? Samne se hato Ragini, aaj toh yeh nai bachega
Everyone were watching curiously to see what is gonna happen next
Suhani(whispered to Nishii): Nishii tujhe kya lagta hai ki aaj Aagam dad se bach payega ya nahi
Nishii: Aagam toh gaya, Dad usse chodne waale nahi hai aaj
Suhani: Nai mujhe lagta hai Mom bacha legi Aagam ko
Niahii: Dekhte hai
On the other hand
Karan(to dimpy): Dimpy! Popcorn hai ghar mai?
Dimpy(confused): Haan haina.. Par popcorn kyu? Yeh popcorn khaane ka time hai motu?
Karan(giggling): Arre itna accha scene chal raha hai, Ragini vs Neil.. popcorn toh banta haina?
Dimpy kicks him and Dimpy, Karan and Rk started laughing
Nachiket: Ragini bass tum samne se hat jao, aur tu Ragini k peeche chupna band kar, bahar aa bandar. Ragini hato same se isse mai dekhta hu
Aagam (hiding behind Ragini by holding her tight): Dad mai kaha chupa hu, yahi toh hu. Darta thodi hu mai apse. Himmat hai toh aage aau na
Nachiket: Chuhe ki tarah tu chupa hai, saamne aa!
Ragini: Aagam ssshhh... jaane do na Nachiket baccha hai who.. Aagam sorry bol Dad ko abhi.
Nachiket: Bacche ki harkat bikul bacche jaisi nahi hai Ragini. Pata nai kispe gaya hai? Isko toh mai
Ragini(whispered): Tum pe he gaya hai Nachiket
Aagam giggled after listening to their convo. Observing that Aagham is giggling, Ragini point to him to stay quite for a while.
Nachiket was completely enjoying the way Ragini was protecting Aagam, But he also wanted to catch and teach Aagam a lesson.
Both Father & the son duo kept running with Ragini trying her best to stop them. Suddenly Ragini is right in the protective arms of her x-hubby after being pushed by a running aagam...
TO BE CONTINUED -
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