Trials Of Fire!! IPKKND3 Untold Saga Of ADNi Chapter 1 to 15 - Page 51

Originally posted by: hailly

Just finished reading the 9th chapter.

Amazing update, beautifully written . loved it.

Thanks for pm. Will coment on the next part soon as finished reading.

Originally posted by: LovingAHA2017

I am still travelling. Interim when I have free time I come on if.

aww that's so sweet of u

Read both parts of chapter 10

the Advay Pooja scene was so beautiful
they both understand each other so well
he tries to give her so much love that she forgets all her pain and is happy
I am sure he will give her something special on Bhai Dooj
I like the this in Pooja that she expressed her feelings in some song
at times I feel why does God make such good persons suffer so much and why they get so much pain in life
this is a good thing bursting crackers by pool side
this reduces the chance of accidents to a huge extent
I can just imagine Adi running around all over the house with crackers
hmmao Advay doesn't want Adi to know just now that he has returned
I can understand he has taken early leave so has some pending work now

oh my my
Chandni with a guitar now
I had badly wanted to see such a scene here
aww she wants him to do what he had made her do
and all in exactly the same way as it had happened
just the situation is reverse now
omg things are getting too hot for me to handle
he wanted to write sorry on her body with him lips.but then he had an even better idea and poured the tea on her and licked it that was a super improvisation
Adi came suddenly and broke their trance
Adi Advay scene was so cute
he complained to him in his own innocent way
Advay indulged in him and pampered him now
aww he even said that he used to lose to Chandni in games at childhood and then suggested Adi to go play with her maami as he had to make some important calls now later he will join him

Read n comment further, Priyu. I think it''s nice. While writing I enjoyed thinking of barun

of course
I will comment further
I hope u r liking my review

Originally posted by: 2filmy

of course
I will comment further
I hope u r liking my review

that's so endearing to hear
I think I would finish commenting by tomorrow

while reading I only saw Barun in front of my eyes