Rikara FS~ft Bhavya *Kya wujood mera?* - Page 8

devildiva21

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Awesome update 👏 ⭐️
How I wish all these things to be shown on the show as well but alas...
Poor Gauri... hope Bhavya and Saumya saves her on time... why do you always stop at such cliffhangers 😆 Can't wait to read the next part
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AhamyTed

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Originally posted by: devildiva21
Awesome update 👏 ⭐️
How I wish all these things to be shown on the show as well but alas...
Poor Gauri... hope Bhavya and Saumya saves her on time... why do you always stop at such cliffhangers 😆 Can't wait to read the next part
Continue Soon

Because i want readers to speculate what can happen.

And after they speculate , i try to bring out something unexpected.

I hope ypu enjoy the next part too.

Thank you

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sparky

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Sorry for being late.

It was such an emotional chapter. Feeling so agitated while reading it. Shivaay and other Obros think that that Gauri and Bhavya are safe. Seriously are they for real.. Knowing their family, they think that girls will be safe and sound especially when Veer is around them. And Gauri what would I say about that poor thing. On one side there was a man who took an oath to be there for her in good or bad, claim himself to be her soul mate and other side, a man who call himself her brother. Both had responsibility to protect her but both failed miserably.

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AhamyTed

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Posted: 6 years ago

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^Ik u feel agitated at the brothers but isn't it expected .They are just too overpowered by what has been happening lately...and none of them could imagine something like this.

I've stressed on this a little in the upcoming part.

Thanks and continue reading ...😊

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AhamyTed

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Posted: 6 years ago

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AUTHOR'S NOTE

Guys thank you so much for giving so much love to this little piece of mine . This was the first time I tried writing, out of frustration and didn't expect it would work.

I know this is supposed to be a Rikara FS and I'll definitely come to that towards the end. What I want to achieve through this FS did require a strong build up as I cannot butcher all character's unnecessarily. I hope you would bear with me and continue showering your love.

The next part would involve most character's but the centre of attraction is definitely going to be Gauri's part of the story. Her character have been lost for quite some time in the show and I'd be showcasing it here trying my best to make up for that which is lost .I hope all Gauri fans would definitely give it a try.

Bhavya's profession would also be given a well needed justice .

Rikara will be dealt in the last part of this FS.

Love ,

AhamyTed 😃

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