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Posted: 6 years ago
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1~The Fire Of Revenge

Aarohi stood with a gun pointed at Deep.

A: (enraged) aaj main tumhe finally maar dungi Deep, mera badla poora hojayega, or ilzaam jaega tumhari pyaari biwi or meri humshakal Tara par.


D: agar mujhe maar do gi toh bhabhi ka kabhi pata nahi laga paogi.



A: (angrily) baat palat denay se kuchh nahi hoga Deep, bhabhi mar chuki hain, or tumne jo mere saath kiya hai us ke liye tumhe saza toh zaroor milegi, tum jaise log sirf dharti par ek bhoj hotay hain jaise ke tum or vo Tara



D: Aarohi meri baat to suno

Before he could say something, she shot him closing her eyes.

Lo maan liya humne
Hai pyaar nahi tumko
Tum yaad nahi humko
Hum yaad nahi tumko

A: (satisfied) mera badla poora hua Deep

D: (painfully) kaash ke tum sach jaan paati


Bas ek dafa mudke dekho
Aye yaar zara humko

Lo Maan Liya Humne
Hai pyar nahi tumko
Tum yaad nahi humko
Hum yaad nahi tumko



He collapsed on the floor and closed his eyes sinking into death.

She left from there and went to the airport and called someone.

A: (sarcastically) hallo, kaisi ho? Umeed hai k police ne bohat achhay se tumhara swagat kia hoga.



'Bakwas band kar or bata mera Deep kahan hai?'

A: (smilingly) oh sorry, main toh tumhe yeh good news dena hi bhool gayi, agar tu Deep se pyaar karti to tujhe kab ka pata lag gaya hota..k Maine teray Deep ko maar dala.

T: (with a shivering voice) shut up! Mere Deep ko kuchh nahi hoga, tu ne aisa kuchh nahi kiya hai

A: kar chuki hoon, Deep ko aakhri baar dekhna nahi chahogi tum?

T: kahan hai mera Deep?

Aarohi told her the house where there was Deep's dead body.

T: tujhe toh main baad mein dekhti hoon.

*call disconnected*

Tara went to the place Aarohi told and was shocked to see that Deep was dead. She saw a gun laying beside him and held it leaving fingerprints on it.

T: (slightly shook him) Deep (shaking him more) Deep please wake up...Deeep!

She sat there crying hard and heard police's siren sound. She erased the fingerprints from it and hid somewhere. Deep's body was taken away and gun was taken in plastic bag.

(Some time passes)

Deep was taken to police hospital and it was revealed that he's actually alive and not dead. He woke up after sometime and monitors beeped alerting the doctors. Even the police who brought him here came to his ward after doctor did his check up.

Ins: who shot you? Do you recognize this gun?

D: I don't remember

Ins: OK

He went.

D: Aarohi, tumne sach jaanay bagair mujhe goli maari hai isliye main police ko nahi bataunga k tumne mujhe goli maari hai.

Aarohi comes there.

A: thank u Deep k tumne police ko kuchh nahi bataya, chalo yahan se bhaag chaltay hain.

She helped him up and took him with her. She made him sit in car and drove off really fast.

D: tum itna fast kiun chala rahi ho?

A: taakay Tara ko pata na chal jaye k tum mere saath ho.

They stopped at a strange place and suddenly Aarohi put a hanky on his mouth and he went unconscious.


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Awesome superb lovely update dear
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Awesome update
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Awesome update dear...😳
Arohi shot Deep...😲
He didnt told police that Arohi shot him...😲
Arohi made him unconcious...😲
What is Arohi up to...😲
Waiting for the next update...😳
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Awesome update!!
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Awesome update
What is arohi up to..
Deep don't tell anything to police why..
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Oh arohi shot deep to trap Tara n avenge her.shocking. glad that deep is alive.but I am confused how come deep is alive after getting shot .good that deep did not reveal that arohi shot him.now where is arohi talking deep? What truth deep is talking about and will arohi believe him?Nice pic
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Why would arohi made him unconscious...curious to read further
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Well written update..
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