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That was quite a read....took some time to finish it.

Marvelous job 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻..... simply amazing n stunning.

Glad to see the VRS who is aware of his surroundings and more than happy to see this Riddhu actually using her brain in right direction by questioning Kabir's intentions related with his so called missing.

Just loved their confrontation part and them having a real conversation and not some taunting or shouting or scolding match which they usually have. It was good to see Vansh patiently listening to Riddhu till last without reacting and Riddhu to be brave enough to confess her deeds and accept them instead of being scared and hiding it till extreme.

You recreated the story beautifully and in such subtle way it feels like original show.

Amazing job bro💞💞

I have bookmarked it and once i read i will comment on it. 🙏🙏🙈

Originally posted by: -Ayushi-

This is such a beautiful OS Zynia!

Amazing work. 👏⭐️

Even I wasn't happy with Vansh's sudden behavioral change and how the track went. You re created it beautifully.

Loved everything, the VRS, his aura, his power the way a mafia should be, Riddhima's confession, RiAnsh's moments, the much needed mature conversation, smart Vansh who knew DSR was actually Kabir and and Vansh who is concerned about Riddhu's job too .

You described each of it really well. I specially loved RiAnsh's conversation and their moments in lawn❤️

Keep writing more. 👍🏼

Thank you so much!! ❤️

Yes!! Vansh's character was an enigma for us. We wanted to know his side of story. When he came back from Dubai with changed behaviour, I first thought now we will see Vansh's game.

But kuch bhi nhin hua. I think producers forgot that there is a character called Vansh Rai Singhania, the lead of the show and his graph needs to be written well.

He builded so much of suspense and all his puny little mind knew was k who burnt the painting

Thank you for liking this story❤️

Yes, I will try to.

Amazing ❤👏

Loved it ❤💖😍♥

Do write more stories 💥💕😍😍

Originally posted by: Navdeep_08

Loved it yr

Loved how riddhima understood how kabir was using her and how he gave him back

Riddhu explained her side to vansh and his family deeds too and he planned to handle his way

How he made her understood his business and how both enjoyed each other company the lawn talks , you portayred it very well

Its amazing piece dear keep writing on riansh

Thank you ❤️

Originally posted by: Blueberry94

Loved it

thank you❤️

Originally posted by: lifesucks28

Love it ❤️ this was a complete package.

Its a nice change to see miss goody two shoes Rids understand that this world isn't exactly black and white. 😈

Love how they talked it all out...how Vansh knew everything ...unlike the show where he is Completely clueless about EVERYTHING 😂😂😂

Love how he is understands how is family is and no blind love for them and he is concerned about his wife's career and wants her to move forward in it and make a name for herself. ❤️❤️❤️

This is sort of a male lead we wanted to see..... ❤️

Thank you ❤️

Yes, I wanted to write about all the points which I felt that were needed to be discussed in the show.

Yes, we all wanted the same type of Vansh. He didn't need to know EVERYTHING necessarily. But at least KUCH KUCH to pta hota?

Originally posted by: watersanon17

It was a good kind of overwhelming feeling I got when I completed reading this story.....

I rarely get this type of feeling.... Few authors here and on some other platforms make me feel this with their stories....

I know you said this is your first attempt but it doesn't feel that way... It was like I am reading a story written by an experienced writer.....

Coming to the story plot..... I like that Riddhima used her brain which was given to her at the time of birth.... And the talk between Riansh..... Oh My God..... It was soo good.... I have very rarely seen them communicate with each other in this way in other fanfictions....

This story was all hearts ❤️❤️❤️❤️

And this is for you 😘😘😘😘

Oh Thaaank you so much dear!!!❤️ I just tried to write the type of conversations that I would have loved to see between the couple.

Yes she did use her Brain finally🤣. Usi ka phal mila usko. Vansh forgave her.

Thank you....🤗

Originally posted by: Payalshoni

Amazing os loved it👏

This was so much better than show 🤗

Keep writing more amazing stories

Thank you, I will try to write more.

Originally posted by: Priyankaakdha

Wow... I loved every bit of line.. 👏 You mentioned such simple scenes like food, dish washing, walking and yet they were so powerful... Cvs never showed such lighted scenes in the show... Such things makes the bond stronger... Please do write more often...

Thank you❤️

Yes, all of these things add to the bond. These things make us and them human. I have seen married couples bonding over dining table. Making use of these normal things to let each other know about their day and whereabouts. We don't need to have a grand setting for that.

Yes, I will try to.