Satyabhama's Plea- An OS - Page 2

Srutha

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: aanvi98
Wow srutha! This was so amazing!! Loved the conversation with Narada! And Balaram catching his mischeivous smile, just divine! I always love ur nd pro's description of kanha so much! They are only full of serenity!! Bhudevi's description was also well written. Hats off!👏 Well i am with a sequel... it looks so incomplete! 😆
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Anu

Thank you Anu 🤗

Dau always catches Kanha's smile 😉

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Srutha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Nonie12345
Fantastic OS Srutha😃

Thank you Nonie 😃

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Srutha

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Radhikerani
A.d.o.r.a.b.l.e.
I just wanna read it again and again, and smile at his naughtiness, and her wit! They are just so, so cute! I really didn't think there was this much to Bhaama before I met you!
Personally I wouldn't want you to extend this, for I rather prefer that amazing ending, as she goes home, assured.

Thank you Choti 🤗

Every single wife of His has so much to them. It's sad that peopl didn't look to exploring them 😕

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Srutha

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: ramya06
Oh srutha this is so beautiful for me to express in words. The sharp satyabhama won my heart! Poor devarshi, left confused. 😆 Madhav wants to go to the narayana shribe with mata devaki to meet his bhudevi! 😳 Aww and Dau as always notices he is upto some mischief. 😳 😆
Now let these two meet soon. Sequel needed! 😛 😉

Thank you Arjun-priyaa 🤗

Haha poor Devrishi indeed 😆😆

Madhava is one Natkhat 😉

Dau is ❤️

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Srutha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: KanhaKiChutki
It is fantastic 😳
The whole thing is written so so well. It was aww

Thanks Chutki 😉

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RadhikaBr.

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Goddess!Can't help loving it more, yes u shud def write a sequel. So Our Bhama is Bhoodevi only, haina! Woww I knew that, all the queen of Krishna are d form of Goddess Mahalaxmi only. Its so beautiful how Kanha and Dau have a convo, its so cute😆

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Thank you for writing such great OSes, di! And you said patience, I was impatient and still am for a sequel! Please write one!

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Surya Sundarraj Sriram

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

First of all. Yes, Adi Keshava Temple.😆😆😉

Secondly, "Soubhagyavathi.. Oh no no.."😆😆

And since I am commenting this after posting 'Rukmini Kalyana Gopala' (with all the gesticulation by Krsna and Ekanamsha's assimilation) this seems like a continuation!

It may sound cliched, but I love the succint way of explaining Bhudevi's perumai and mahimai while talking about Satyabhama's own wit and unpredictability.

Speaking of Sridevi and Bhudevi, why does no one talk about Neela Devi? (Which gives me another idea, please don't take it from me.😆)

Narada is ... as unpredictable as his Narayana.

And so, Satyabhama's wish is fulfilled! But then, she gazes into his chocolate brown eyes - yes, she is Bhudevi, Radharani and all that, but I didn't know chocolate was invented then😉

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Shivani Priyam Kumar

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Srutha I have said this before and I say this again, you have gotten into the pysche of Satyabhama so well. I could see how cleverly you incorporated all that we feel about her through the monologues by Lord Vishnu himself.

Also the fact that you added the elements that dominates Bhudevi herself was utterly beautiful. So where is the sequel to this one?

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Srutha

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: RadhikaBr.
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Goddess!Can't help loving it more, yes u shud def write a sequel. So Our Bhama is Bhoodevi only, haina! Woww I knew that, all the queen of Krishna are d form of Goddess Mahalaxmi only. Its so beautiful how Kanha and Dau have a convo, its so cute😆

I will look into the sequel 😉

That you Radhika 🤗

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