The Milan- A Krishna-Satyabhama OS - Page 2

Originally posted by: PanchaliKaArjun

Hey Srutha ! Congrat for the new shot which has been beautifully written down . Loved how you described Satya and her eagerness to meet Krishna . The flashbacks are a real treat with Madhavi teasing Satya . Kanha knows everything doesn't he 😉

I love the portrayal of the love between the two . The first time meeting was described very well . You have a beautiful high imagination and brilliant way of penning it down .

Keep writing such shots in yeh near future . Thank you for the pm .

Love

Sam

Thank you so much Sam 🤗

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

This one is just soo sweet! Loved the part where Dau starts on Kanha mode! :D Also yes, Bhaama's uncharacteristic blush!

Dau is utterly awesome ❤️
I know right? And of course Kanha will see it and tease her about it *sighs*

Originally posted by: SenRazia

Unres

I am blushing and dying of happiness!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

A beautiful OS indeed..

I have already surrendered to the Leelas of Krishna, now I learn from Bhama too..

Thank you for writing this and making a big smile come on my face..I shall remember this one forever!!

Thank you Anu 🤗
We all forget that Bhama is an integral part of Krishna. She is part of His Shakti. We forget she is also a part of Mahalakshmi Herself.
❤️

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Fantastic OS Srutha😃

Thank you Nonie 😃

Originally posted by: babita..

Lovely, beautiful OS 👏👏

I loved the convos of Satya and Krishan and their recalling their first meet. The shyness that SatyaBhama is engrossed with, it's the beauty of this OS !

Loved to see Krishna running after her. The imagination is a pure bliss !

Awesome descriptions from the first line. The looking at the feet, and taking to the balcony ans sitting beside her --- all are so brilliantly written and explained.

Thanks for making me a part of this OS 🤗

May i know your name pls ?

Thank you 🤗
Satyabhama can become shy only when Krishna is present. He is the only one who can do that to her.
They are bliss

I didn't do much 😳 I should thank you for reading and commenting on the OS 😳

I am Srutha :) You are?

Originally posted by: _Meena_

nice os

Thank you Meena 😊

Originally posted by: shabari14

Srutha di! This OS was beautifully divine! I loved how you described and worded Kanha's and Bhama's first thoughts of each other, so cute! My gift for writing so well is a big hug! Continue writing like this, di, and continue impressing me!

Thank you Gowri 🤗
I love hugs *laughs*
I will :)

Originally posted by: deejagi

What a wonderful piece of artwork this is Shrutha. I could just imagine you over their in blush and wish you na dbless you to have your price charming as charming as Kanah and as loving as Krishna and as adoring as dau.

Now that I have blessed you to get a wonderful partner, give us one more master price sooner than ever. 😆😆😆

Jaya 🤗
I am touched by your blessing. Thank you :)
I do want Krishna and Dau :)

You will get 😆😆

Originally posted by: shruthiravi

Beautiful OS. Actually I have not read of much Krishna -Bhama as much as I have read about Krishna-Rukmini

Thank you Shruthi 😃
I know most would not have. But according to SB, He spent more time wit her than with anyone else.

I love this Bhabhi.Its utterly beautiful.You know,all your works on their meetings before have been 'divine'...always with a tinch of unworldliness reflecting high.This too took me to yet another world but to mark,this meeting have been my favourite till date.