Atkheliyaan - A Krishna-Bhama and Draupadi SS(Update Pg 12) - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
This was really cute! Loved the description of Draupadi's room and Bhaama's mischief!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: KrishnaPriyaa


It's just our idea. This is a bonding story, after all. Everyone knows of the loving relation of Krishna-Bhama and Draupadi. So, yeah :)
What makes you think Panchali is expecting?

I am writing it now :P

Without a reason you will not bring in Mangoes ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†. Jokes apart if Panchali's five children were grown up and were replicas of their fathers that Ashwathama mistook them for Pandavas and chopped their heads as revenge to his father's death and to get thevictory to Kauravas during Kurukshetra war. So this shall be the opt time to start giving birth to children right?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: deejagi

Without a reason you will not bring in Mangoes ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†. Jokes apart if Panchali's five children were grown up and were replicas of their fathers that Ashwathama mistook them for Pandavas and chopped their heads as revenge to his father's death and to get thevictory to Kauravas during Kurukshetra war. So this shall be the opt time to start giving birth to children right?


Two sons are already born ๐Ÿ˜†
And that's all I am telling you ๐Ÿ˜› The rest will come out in my part ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: KrishnaPriyaa


Two sons are already born ๐Ÿ˜†
And that's all I am telling you ๐Ÿ˜› The rest will come out in my part ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Ok, OK, I got it. So Arjun's son is on his way ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰ means his Bhanja is on his way. As Draupadi is also called as Krishne, sister of Srikrishna. Will eagerly wait for your part
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: KrishnaPriyaa

Res ๐Ÿ˜›
Unres
Mahii ๐Ÿค—โค๏ธ You are an amazing writer :)
I love your style of writing.
Madhav-Panchali And my little Abhi โค๏ธ Like Uncle, like nephew, haina? ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰
I don't know if I will be able to write as well as you, and I don't know how I will match up to you ๐Ÿ˜ณ



Awww
Thank you so much Srutha! You are very awesome yourself... And I bet no one can match you in KrishMa๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
Oh, please don't say that, provided I myself am a big pakha of yours
We both are good... And we are going to rockk this dear!

Loveโค๏ธ
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks guys, for liking it ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Edited by KrishnaPriyaa - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: Shivam...

Loved it , Awesome

Well done both of you


Specially the abhimanyu and makhan part was too good , how with the smell of butter , krishna followed it to its origin๐Ÿ˜†


Thank you so much!
Am glad you liked that๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Fantastic chapter Srutha and Mahishee๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Loved Abhimanyu and Krishna conversationโค๏ธ


Thank you Nonie dear๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: PanchaliKaArjun


Hi Srutha and Mahi ! Both of you are good writers and story by you two means we can look forward for a beautiful journey .
Aww the best trio ๐Ÿค— I love you both for this . You know I have heard and read a lot that Krishna-Satyambha-Parth-Krishnaa were god friends but never read on them .
And the three trio of the group would be a treat to read .
Loved the start with Krishna and Draupadi 's relation . You highlighted it very well . Btw I loved your description of Indraprasth . Though short but rather sweet .
And the Makhan wala part . Aww Kanha
The Krishna and Krishnaa conversation was written very well .
And Krishna is taking his friend somewhere . I can guess where ๐Ÿ˜‰ .
The Satya and Rukmani relation was rather a surprise . A something like two sister relation. I liked it very much . The way Rukmani was acting like an elder sister and Satya the young mischievous one . ๐Ÿ˜ณ I love Satya so much .
Please update soon . Looking forward for a journey filled with fun .
Love
Sam


Hey Sam! Such a long comment... Am overwhelmed๐Ÿ˜ณ
Thanks a lot! You liked it? I just framed it spot on, thought would be good to some have description๐Ÿ˜‰
Well, the Sayta Rukmini part was inspired by Srutha... That's her style totally๐Ÿ˜›

Thanks again๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Love๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Ramyalaxmi

@Srutha & @Mahi: Beautifully written.
I liked Krish and Subhadra part.
An unique relation portrayal of Krish-draupadi. ๐Ÿ‘
Waiting to know about her sorrow.


Thank you a lot!
And thank you Jaya๐Ÿ˜ณ
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