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Originally posted by: Nonie12345
Beautiful part Srutha😃
Thank you Nonie 😃
Originally posted by: Nonie12345
Beautiful part Srutha😃
Originally posted by: EternalStars.
ResWa😆
UnResWa!!😃Shrutha!!🤗 A perfect ending to a divine story!!😳 I loved the chappy!Especially when they take on their divine forms and have a conversation.And the meeting of Rani Rukmini and Stayabhama!!Both feeling they are long-lost sisters.And Shri Narada and Mahadev-Parvati celebrating the meeting of Krishna's two Shaktis.👏The temple scene was awesome!!Krishna managing the situation for his Bhama.😛And a jealous Bhama!!😆 After that when she runs off happily and Shri Krishna comes to talk to her.Prompting her to call him Arya.😆 And then intervenes Jagadambe.😆 She keeps talking and Shri Krishna is lost in the thoughts of Rani Staybhama.😆I also loved Dau and Bhama's scene!!😃And Dau-krishna scenes are always a treat.😳Keep writing more!!!👏
Originally posted by: LakshMila
Undoubtedly Bhabhi,you were born to write this amazing TS.
Govind and Bhama Bhabhi must be really proud of you,the way you wrote their love story.The last part was brilliantly splendid!Genuinely,I have never been that attracted to any of the other wives of Govind,but Satya is truly unique.❤️And what to tell you about RukMa and Subhadra ❤️I am impressed:PGovind and Dau😆👏 for that divine description,you made me look into some other world 😆Guess what?Love you Bhabhi 🤗
Originally posted by: ..RamKiJanaki..
Shru! I am so sorry for not reading your OS right away. I was feeling frustrated due to some things and didn't want to read it in a bad mood. 😳 But I should have, because it would have calmed me down instantly.
What beautiful writing! I just loved everything about it, starting from Krishna cleverly deflecting that weirdo suitor, all the way to Bhama finally uniting with him.I LOVE LOVE LOVE my surprise. The Rukmini-Satyabhama meeting was in every way divine and out of this world. Thank you so much for the surprise. 🤗Krishna-Bhama conversations are superb! I just love the way you write the romance, It's both dignified and sweet.LOVE IT!
Originally posted by: KrishnaPriyaa
Lakshmi 🤗It seemed so right :) Them taking Divine forms, and talking. They are, after all, one soul ❤️Rukmini and Bhama are that. Sisters, two halves of a wholeKrishna does all the managing 😆😆 She is so much fun to write when jealous 😆😉She seems to run a lot 😊Jagadambe's little prank on Her Priya Bhaiya 🤣Dau-Kanha is ❤️Wait till I get to the more teasing ones 😉
Originally posted by: attubaby
wow...u write so beautiful. Yet to read the third part..the simplicity of Satyabhama and the simple humanly conversations of Krishna and Satyabhama, like two individuals struck in love are a treat to read.
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