The Beginning Of Their Eternity- a Krishna-Bhama TS(completed pg 9) - Page 6

Originally posted by: LakshMila

My Govind!!

Such a beautiful update.

I cannot describe the divinity I felt reading this.

Bhabhi,an absolutely outstanding update it is!

I am truly amazed😲

How can it something be so ummm..(sorry I could not find an appro word!!😆)?

Govind needs to be tricked 😈

Satyaaa ❤️

Her dialogues!!!And when she said 'Why marry someone...?'

That entire convo with her sakhis was superb.Truly.

And kudos for the thought ,Satya crying her heart with nature

A part of her own,well written.

Yours,

Laadli

Your Govind, My Shyam ❤️
Thank you laadli 🤗 I hope you love your Bhama Bhabhi then 😛
He definitely does 😈
I know. It was a little modern, but Bhama is like that. Bold, and is strong in her opinions. The only difference between her and Rukmini is the way they express it. And she is similar to Radhe in that way, as Radhe also expresses herself the way Bhama does.
Exactly. She is Nature. She is crying within Herself. Very confusing, haina? 😉

Originally posted by: ramya06

Its so beautiful dear! Bhama's emotions brought out so well! Her crying with nature, fighting the lord for her arya. And lastly the heartbreak when she hears of jambavati! Loved it all! Waiting for the next part!

Ramyaa 🤗
Thank you 😳
It will come soon :)

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

Unress!

Wah Srutha wah!!

Am at a loss of words👏👏

Such emotions

Today I realised that these two were beyond mischief also😆

Satya was so pure... Crying with nature😭

And Ma Parvati too😭

And Dwarkadheesh playing tricks with His Lady😉

The Jamvanti part was heartbreaking

But don't worry Dharaa, He'll be back for YOU😳

Loved it!

Update soon

Mahi❤️

Thank you 🤗
They are beyond everything 😆😆
She is pure, she is Dharti Ma ❤️

Mata Parvati and Bhu-Devi are sisters.
Of course He is *shakes head*
Yeah 😭
Of course He will. She is His Dhaara :)

I will ❤️

Originally posted by: Surya_krsnbhakt

Just to see ...?

Her father? Krsna? madhavi? Her mother? Other sakhis?

I totally love this chapter for many reasons. One of them is that Devi Satyabhama's POV is explored so well, you can feel her reading it along with you! And another is that Parvati and Shiva and Brahma and Sarasvati were watching through their Home Theatre - these types of scenes have always amused me!

And also that Satrajit has finally understood wh(at)(o) is his favourite jewel.

Some other reasonss will come in your inbox.

And you brought Jambavati with out bringing in Jambavati.😆

You will see. I am afraid that I am going the cliche way here.
Yayy :) Thanks :)
Home Theatre 🤣

Yep :) Happiness is to come 😃

I knew you would catch the Jambavathi part 😆😆

nice part Tha ...satyabhama pov is explained so beautifully ...

Bolo Mata Srutha ki Jai , IF i one of the biggest krishna - Bhama fan

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Nice part Srutha 😃

Thank you Nonie 😃

Originally posted by: Rex_Ryan

nice part Tha ...satyabhama pov is explained so beautifully ...

Thank you Ryan 🤗

Originally posted by: Shivam...

Bolo Mata Srutha ki Jai , IF i one of the biggest krishna - Bhama fan

If in future some serial is made castiig the 2 as leads , you will go berserk

Coming to the update , as usual , it was great to read , satyabhama's helplessness towards her father's words , her anguish , and the most lovely was Krishna- bhama private convo in the garden .

Special mention for the Painful part regarding Jambvati , it was very nice

keep it up👏

Finally Bhaiya 😆😆 2 down :P
Mata Srutha Bhaiya? 😲
I just might 😆😆

Thanks big bro 😃

Such a beauty! The presentation was was extremely nice and so was the sequence of the events, and how you blended your sweet additions to an already wonderful story!